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namita25

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 22

AAAwww what an update...

So Geet reached Purani Haveli and got to know about maan's fever...

Maan even in his unconscious sate wants to be near Geet...

It's nice to see Geet taking care of Maan...

She even changed his clothes...

JAi and Geet had a tiff as Geet wanted to stay with Maan ...poor Jai...he loves geet so much...

seems like Maan's gonna realise soon that he has fallen for Geet...

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#682

RAMADAN Mubarak to all you guys.

Part 23: CLICK HERE

Do like and comment!

Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.

Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.

Enjoy!

-Mariam

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#683

Note: Sorry, if the story pace seems to go slow...but this is how I have thought of taking my story...there are about 7 to 8 update left before I reach the prologue and then the story will continue but don't know for how many more parts. So, just hang on tight and enjoy it, I know its not the most interesting story to read as there are many other stories posted by some very good writers, but still hope you all are enjoying it.

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jasika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#684

Amazing update

Waiting for next update

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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

#685

This update was something I can't just say nice and amazing.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Geet was enjoying with Jai but maan had seen her ,and he felt more pain than his night mare.
In office maan tried his best to avoid geet but GEET was successful in grabbing his attention.
Uff maan pain and restlessness even he is not ready to take geet advice.
Lastly Jai blasted on geet for his jealousy poor him but he lost her even before he confessed.
Plzz add me to pm list

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#686

hi thanks 4 updating! amazing update! well written! Jai insults Geet! she is upset! he accused 4 her sleeping wid Maan! he apologises n manofys her! she is nw happy! they go n have golgappa! Maan watches them! she senses someone watching her n tells Jai bt they see no one! Maan's car broke down! Jai n Geet dance in the rain! Maan angry as she cannot see her with Jai! Amardeep tells Geet 2 have kada! Geet dreams abt Maan being hurt! Maan avoids Geet at work! she sees his hand n wants 2 bandage it! Maan shouts her! Maan forced 2 give her back her old position! She is happy! they work till late n she cribs! some guys after Geet! Maan his them! She is injured! Maan insists on taking her to the doc! update soon! Hope r well! TC

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hi mariam ..

forst of all ...ur stories r not boring ..i like them and others too like themn

update was nice ..

geet is unaware of her feeling ..she thinks she is in love with jai ..she likes to be with him so she was hurt by his words ..jai manofy geet and they spend happy moments ..everything was watched by maan in frustration ...later at office geet was caring abt maan too ..she doesn't mind sitting in his lap ..cooling his anger down and also thinking of him in danger in dreams..hope she soon realsie what maan means to her before maan take some wrong step to get geet

tjhanks for update

waiting for next ..

please start ur previous stories too

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#688

amazing part dear
jai insult geet in jealously and angry
geet forgiven jai and both enjoyed
geet got to know about maan hurt in her dream only
poor maan want to aviod geet but geet is geet
maaneet working each other
waiting for more dear

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kalpana_spn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#689

Part 24,

Wonderful update... Jai and his words really hurt geet... Shocked to know that an..Jai could do this to her... But he finally be able to get forgiveness from geet...
Maan is really falling for geet, he is trying to avoid her at the office... Geet get cut from the goons and maw set is th hospital now... Please continue soon

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kalpana_spn

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 23,

Wonderful update... Jai and his words really hurt geet... Shocked to know that an..Jai could do this to her... But he finally be able to get forgiveness from geet...
Maan is really falling for geet, he is trying to avoid her at the office... Geet get cut from the goons and maan and geet is at the hospital now... Please continue soon

Edited by kalpana_spn - 9 years ago

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