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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#471

Part 16: CLICK HERE

Do like and comment!

Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.

Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.

Enjoy!

-Mariam

PS: The past is in Blue Italic

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nidhirastogi000

@nidhirastogi000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#472

Awesome update dear.. Beautiful small maaneet moment.. Feeling bad for maan.Waiting for next.. plzz update soon 😊

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#473

Part 16 - liked maaneet moments. he was getting attracted to her. so dev too did something bad to him...? mami seemed good...eager to read more.

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 9 years ago

#474

awesome

loved it

feel sorry for maan

cont soon

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#475

nice update ...
in this update I like geet's sherni avtar 😉 aajtk srf Msk ko chup bolte huye suna tha aaj pata chala koi aur bhi hai Jo Msk ko bhi chup karwa sakti hai 😉
n that dialogue "aisi vaisi harkat karte hai " aww. .loved it 😳
maan is remembering his past ...
now m getting curious to know it ..
continue soon...

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#476

Lovely update geet and her family got ready to reach maans place for pooja dadi waking the beginning maan told him abt pooja when asked abt his arrival last night he dogded the question maan was calling dadi as his kurtas button was broken geet went to fix asusual he was rude but geet pulled him in anger he got lost in her again seeing her pouting he wanted to kiss her he fixed her hair geet got lost in him but came back if he was angry she was double angry they both compliment each other so well maan didn't wanted to be in pooja as it was remind of the pooja that ruined his life

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#477

i read all parts in one go dear
superbbb parts
loved it waiting for more dear

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#478

geet with her dad n jay to pooja

maan is stilll sleeping n upset with dadi

loved the small maneet moments too

he is attracted to her

he got more angry seeing the pooja taking long time which reminded him of his past

where he was gotten ready by his maami

she told its for him n his bro dev

but what happened he shouted on brij n made pandit run

nice part

Edited by vrinda22 - 9 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#479

hi thanks 4 da superb update! well written! Jai n Geet talk! he will attend the party! Geet at KM! Dadi awakens Maan! Maan needs his button sewn! dadi sends Geet! Maan taunts Geet! she answers back! she sews the button! Maan affected by Geet! he is bplwed over by her cute expressions n beauty! he pulls her closer! Love sherni Geet! Maan attends the pooja! bt the past haunts him! wonder wt happened 2 Maan! update soon

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nnc001

@nnc001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#480

amazing parts
geet came to knw abt maans past ..
maans past..tht ws shocking
"shez no one..just a mere employee" lyk seriously
smthing to do wid brij 😕
waiting for nxt

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