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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#521

interesting teaser ..can't wait for the update ...

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#522

wohaaa what an update..

well first of all I would like to say a big sorry to you as I have not been commenting on this FF even though I am reading it ...plz forgive me for that...BTW I must admit one fact that you are a wonderful writer👏👏 and your narration is mind blasting...😳Maan seems to have a terrible past...This man is a mystery to me...he just cannot keep his emotions in check...Maan vented out his frustration by doing vigorous exercise...I don't understand why does he always try to force himself on Geet...😡poor gal...she is so terrified of him...and why did Dadi forbade him to go to Purani Haveli...what's over there...by God...isss ladke ka gussaaa...kya hoga iska...can't wait for the next part...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#523

part 17 - it angered maan more when she called him as hanwar. she understood that what he was living in his past right now. he cant differentiate geet from others. he lost himself, forgot his pain when he was near to geet. what had happened with him.? poor dadi. she too was suffering b'coss of this. she still could not find out what had happened with him. waiting for dance.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#524

teaser - so finally geet told him that she doesn't like how he behaves with her and she loves someone else. jai too worried to lose her

nice banner

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#525

Haw ...
Jay Geet se pyar karta hai...
Prologue me kon tha Geet ke pyar thukrane Wala ..
Maan kaha hoga tab ...
Jay want Geet to leave job to keep her safe with him...
Maan won't let his love go away.. easily ...
Geet ka gussa uff ...
chalo kamse kam Maan ko pata to chala ki problem kaha hai..
Maaneet ki Story me...
waiting for update ...

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#526

I have to read all part than comment

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#527

nice pt

maan lashes his anger on geet and geet sense he is in his past and geet puahed him and ran away from his grip as he

again forcing him daadi hurts him unintentionally he's angry

on daadi but geet force dadi to come to party

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#528

Part 18: CLICK HERE

Do like and comment!

Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.

Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.

Enjoy!

-Mariam

@tabby999: welcome to my thread.😊 And about my previous stories, I would love to finish them, but I am stuck at the point I have left. Especially DHDAJS...I don't know how to take the next scene because after that everything for Maan and Geet changes and before I do that I want to write something special for them to remember yet at the same time make Geet almost realize her feelings for Maan to somewhat. So, I am kind of stuck on how to write that.

@kabslocks: "why Maan is forcing Geet again and again. Any decent man can never behave like he is behaving with Geet."

I didn't intend to make it look like he is forcing himself on her, plus he is MSK and he does what he feels is right for him without anyone questioning him. And here, he is from day one affected by Geet's presence and I was just trying to make him fall for her without his knowledge, yet at the same time he is aware about his actions and at the same time I am having Geet, fight with her own emotions as that will be playing a big part in the future parts.

@namita25: Don't be sorry dear🤗, you started commenting is all that matters to me and I am very happy to see your comment on my story. Thanks dear, it means a lot to me.

@preeti.1: Welcome to my thread.😊Will be looking forward to read your comments dear.

@nitika20: You will have to wait for the prologue part to come to know who it was.😉

PS: I have already started writing the next part, hopefully will be done with one part of the past by tomorrow if not Monday, and then I will update.

Till then, please-please shower me with your Comments and Likes

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#529

hi mariam

i really wish that u soon get the way to describe and write next parts of DHDAJS..its a wonderful story and i don't want it to be left incomplete ..

geet was struck between her loyalty for dev and attraction cum love for maan ..

u can start by showing her torn between mind and her heart ..mind which says she loved dev once how can she love again ..wheere as her heart already unknown to her has started beating for maan..

great wishes to u to start again ,..

thanks ..

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#530

awesome update ...
so maan is getting more and more attracted towards geet ..or it is love ?
I never expected jai to love geet also ..
the story is getting interesting ..
let's see what happen next ..
continue soon...

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