MGFF: Deceitful Love Thread #1 - Page 66

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys
I am really very extremely sorry for not updating. Actually, I along with my whole family is having my house almost get renovated. So, from the moment I woke up till midnight, I am busy with painting and all that so I haven't really got any chance to write any update. I'm almost at the end of this part, just have to write a little bit the last scene before finishing this part... So please-please bear with me... I will be most probably done with all this in a couple of days...
Thank you

Till then Enjoy the TEASER:

"Maan Sir" her eyes landed on his pale face and the next moment she was beside him and pats on his cheeks only to find his burning. "Daadima inhe tu fever hai"

"Fever" How did she fail to notice it. Oh God, in her worry of him hurting self, she didn't even realize he was burning high in fever.


"Daadi neend ki injection" questioned Geet the moment Daadi was back in Maan's room."Daadi, I am asking you something"

"It's better that he doesn't come in sense today Geet" came her dry reply without any emotions as she stared at Maan.


She pouts making a sad face and looks down at him and sees his annoyed face "sote huwebhi chain nahi hai inhe...aab kaun si baat inhe padishan kar rahi hai" and then she sees him itch his neck, where it had gotten red due to his constant scratching.


"It's like that Geet. All you care about what Daadi will think about you or What your Maan sir will think?" Came his anger filled reply.

"Seriously Jai I just can't believe you just said all this to me. And I didn't leave baujialone Jai. I asked Shanta aai to come and look after him and you're also their na then why are you making this into a big issue. I have already told bauji about this and have asked him if I could stay at KM and he told me I can" Geet was now highly pissed at him not liking his tone and the accusation he threw on her.

"Fine then stay there, then" and cuts the call throwing the phone on the bed. He didn't mind her staying there had he not witnessed last night dance.


Mariam

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser
jai is feeling jealous ?
and maan burning with fever

take ur tym...we will wait
no worry 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da teaser n note! awesome teaser! np update wen u can! will wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser.
maan having fever. geet staying at km. jay was upset
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice tsr
jai is jealous
n rift starting between them
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser can't wait for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 21 - he really had a bad past, living with such experiences at his tender age and that's why he became to rude and arrogant. he made with his hard work and brought kc in top businesses. his immense love & care paid off and dev was far better that earlier state. but in this he could never forget his past which haunted him every day & night.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hoping to finish the update tonight and post it too😊 If not, then tomorrow is for Pakka...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 22: CLICK HERE
Do like and comment!
Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.
Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.
Enjoy!
-Mariam

PS: Expect delays in the update due to my health as it's getting worse day by day. I am like literally surviving on the medication. Believe me, I would have posted this update last night itself as I had got it done and had time to but this stupid headache is really getting on my nerve now. I just feel like to kill myself😡. Now when I had time to write I have got this issue that is keeping me away from writing, how nice😡.
And also due to Ramadan coming I will be only using Lappy after breaking the fast and if this headache permits me. I am really sorry for the delays and I can understand if people are losing interest in my story due to the delays but even i am helpless.

I can't promise when I will start with the next update, but hoping to start soon... and others...just wait and see when I can sit and make it thru it


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Posted: 9 years ago
hi .,..
start doing the exercise i told you ..you will definitely be benefited

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