Kahe Toh Se Sajna / revised version ch 9 n 10 updated pg23// 2nd Jan

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Going to post on blog..So thought once again I should repost here too... Many haven't read...With little better version.This is not a story but an inspiration from someone..Very close to me...😳


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Kahe Toh Se Sajna



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Kehte hai Pyar Andha Hota hai..Pyar koi Bandhan nahi mantawoh to ho jaata hai... Agar woh ho jaata hai to kyon hota hai...? Mujhe nahi pata Maan...na he main kabhi jaan payungi...Aur na keh paaungi...

Apke liye mere ek Darr ne..Ek mazboori ne mujhe...aapse baandh diyaa...Woh mazboori jisse na nikal pane k liye aap mazboor hai...Jo shayad kabhi khatam nahi hogi..Ja agle he pal khatam ho jaaye..

Aise he ek pal main maine barson pehle sabh kho diyaa tha..Aur aise he ek pal main maine aap ko paya hai...Jo apke liye to mazboori ban gaya hai..Apki mazboori ne mujhe Duniya ki Adaalat main Apko apna Sajan bananay per mazboor kar diyaaa..

Aap kush nahi kar sakke..Per kissi din ussi Adaalat main aap ne mujhe fir se khadda kar diya to Kya kahungi main Apne Sajan se..? Kyonki kush keh paaun..Woh haq Uper waale ne mujhse pehle he cheen liya...



From where I get this idea ?

Buddies this is original creation... nothing to do with any other fiction..But it is based on a true life story...A true story of livin legend. But just the circumstances he gone through that is my inspiration.Creativity is only mine...I m daring to rite...it gonna rock or not..I don't know. A story of Speechless Creatures.

Haalat Insaan ko mazboor kar detay hai..how.lets see what she do for him...to give him his identity became her sole motive losing own identity...


For my readers:

My regular readers...Buddies I lov u...those who support me...But here I need some thing more.If u lik suggest others ur appreciation is must...don't forget to comment n hit lik.


For non readers:

Those who gonna join plz...comment n want further updates..add me...its must...coz I think I m not a bad writer...But choosy in selection of friends..so I hav less no of buddies...



Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
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Chapter 1


Setting


A far away hilly area village ..somewhere in Himachal Pradesh ..Where life means a struggle...Struggle with self...struggle to survive each and every day.

This place has seen every aspects of nature..Nature's bliss n Nature's wrath...Hugh silver oak trees always remain such...standing...like guards to the beauty of this place.The cool breeze gently touches bright yellow daffodils like forcing many suns to smile n dance. White lilies accompany them lik Moons can't live without those suns ...

Bright Orange Gulmohars n scented cream Guldaudis spread lik flower carpets on earth...But this place is same where nature show wrath...

During winters ..where snow storms...force people to stay inside..thinking whether they gonna have something to eat next time..Cloudbursts,landslides, flood also nature brings...But people r happy coz whole world for them is here.What they hav that is enough for them and nothing they more...


Characters to be introduced


Rano : A middle aged lady lives with her daughter.Having no one other in her life except her daughter.She stitches cloths for village people..A local boy Rahul who works in a woolen clothes show room at Shimla.Supply her with stock of wool yawns at weekend.As after staying for six days at Shimla.Rahul comes home on Saturday evenings n goes back on Monday morning. Hand knitted cloths r much in demand..Rano knits caps, mufflers, sweaters for his shop.He takes knitted cloths from last week's stock...when he came to supply her new stock.

Geet: Rano's 22 year old daughter.Has Hazel Eyes n Fair Complexion .lik nature has bestowed Geet with her whole treasure...Who works as a typist in a small apple juice factory 9 km away from this village..She works there for 4 days..as production is not much these days.For rest of three days in a week she helps her mother to knit cloths n other works outside home


Both mother n daughter r hard workers.Hence they r living a happy quiet life.Their dreams r not too big...so what they have its enough to liv.


Saturday Evening

Rano was knitting one of last caps from previous week's supply.She was in hurry so she decided to knit even late nite.Coz she had to sew clothes for Mona's wedding early next week.This is a huge order as marriage was arranged in hurry. Mona was Shankar Kaka's younger daughter Shankar Kaka local postman.Kaka got a suitable boy at Shimla so he was in hurry as upcoming winters gonna interrupt marriage if delayed more . Geet was cheeking some details to be typed .She had a type writer provided by office as she had much to type.

Rano: Geet beta mere madam ke de...tere pass to kal ka din hai...kar lenna kaam... yeh order pura karna hai..is ko pura karva do..fir apna kaam kar lena...

Geet came smilingly n she started to knit other cap.Her hands had been much ruff Finger prints from tips had been disappeared with continuously typing...as she also did extra work on it... every document required by villagers was duty of Geet to b typed.n she really gav her best.She couldn't say no..coz God had snatched every wors from her.

Rano: Geet dekh in unn k gollon ( wool yawns ) per Devi Maa ki photo k sticker hai ...log yeh bhi nahi sochte..bhagwaan ko kyo hum aadar nahi detay.Now we can't throw these stickers as such..aisa karna kal jaakar Zheel ( lake) main jal parvah kar denna

Geet gav her response by nodded her head in positive way..n closing her eyes.

Rano smiled n hugged her daughter

Precap: unexpected thing at lake side...


You are not bound to like and comment ...😃

Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's a unique story . Have read it earlier but would love to read it again. Thanks for reposting it.
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RaNo n geet both are lives hills area
Rani doing hand work knitted wool item
Geet was working typist
Both are mother n daughter live happily in small village rahul helping both are he was nice boy
Nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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its really marvelous story
i start readied this story wen
only some pts wer left but now
read it again
blog link didn't work which u send
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wow.. lovely
waiitng to read more.

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