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Posted: 9 years ago
nice parts...
geet fighting with everyone to save maan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing
its funny when u try to do right thing u have to answer others
but do wrong people ever r questioned
Geet is helping maan as she feels his pain
but shallow people cant understand it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates. Hope maan recovers soon
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Chapter 7


Was really tough to handle a person lik Maan...Ya he was nothing more than a skeleton...When Geet found him...He was like any other well built man. N within few days...He had lost his complete shape with that what happened to him.But approximate 6 feet height made always it difficult for a girl like Geet to handle n care for him. His daily needs were same like any normal man.But she had moulded herself to face everthing.How ? Only she knew.Coz till now hospital staff,ward boys nurses were doing this job.

It was about 3 when Geet came in Maan's room...He was gazing continuously toward the roof without a blink.This was just like his routine now.Under medicinal effect most off time he remained unconscious at hospital.n rest of time looking at roof...Geet had a bowl ..Doctor gave a list to Geet n she had to follow it strictly.So she had boiled dal with just lil salt. Or could say soup. She placed it on table next to Maan's cot n set next to him.

After continuously glaring him for few minutes she was waiting for any acute reaction from his side...But no effect..It was not easy for her to interact with him as she could not speak.But how she gathered such courage for all this even she didn't understand.


She grabbed Maan's upper body in both her hands n placed a extra pillow under his shoulders to raise his neck upto some angles.She tried to put soup in his mouth.But he was not taking..It was important coz he couldn't live just on drip.She squeezed opened his mouth..But slowly slowly put some spoonfuls of dal in his mouth lik a child.Which he had at last...She smiled.Wiped corners of his mouth n decided to give him more after some time...


Doctor asked her to feed Maan in measured amounts at definite intervals of three hours.But whole fluid or having no granules in Dal,vegetable soup,milk or juice. Just lik any other baby feed.

She was happy at her success..Three days passed Geet was doing all from her work to earn n taking care of Maan. She had forgotten her own identity..Working just like any machine.She had to stay with him in same room to look after and this news spread like fire in whole community n one day some people of repute n Panchayat came to her home.Ram Chand,Lalit Kumar both Panchayat members.Bharat Singh local market committee head,Mandir Pujariji n his wife...


Rano estimated why they were there.

Savita Devi ( Pujari's wife): Dekho Rano behan tumhari beti ki sabhi izaat karte hai aab bhi..


Rano : Aab bhi...? Savita behan what u wanna say ? ( she was amazed what she meant aab bhi )

Ram Chan: Aab bhi...meaning everything will remain as such..for that you should shift that man some where else from ur home...( pointing his finger toward Rano cleared )

Geet came ..she was observing all things but she had to interfere when matter was getting worse.To made them understand she also had slate to write things


Geet:(Wrote) : Where we should send him Ram Chacha. ? He would not be on our pity till now...If he could walk or say anything..( she put slate on his hand)


Lalit who was sitting next to Ram Chand also read what was on slate...


Lalit: Geet we can shift him to any asylum...There is one near to Shimla for such people...( he gave suggestion)


Rano: But why !!!...We are looking after him ? If you can't help..we don't need too( (she second Geet supporting her )

Savita: Rano Behan you know...how this decision gonna put wrong impression on other girls of our society..Keep everything apart it can also become a hurdle to find groom for girlz who are at marriageable age (such a baseless excuse she gave )


Geet snatched her slate and all of them started to look at her.She nodded she folded both her hands in front of them in anger.She wanted all to leave mother daughter with Maan alone.

Savita: Geet hum samjh gaye What u r up to...But u hav to leave him...wo yahan nahi reh skkta...( she got up n moved toward Maan's room )

But Geet stopped her at door.Even when Pujari ji came forward.she closed door . She was that strong wall which came in between that poor creature n power called society.Power which was trying to break that wall with full blow..but they couldn't

Pujari Ji : Geet you are insulting panchayat people..You know what it means ?( much annoyed he warned...)

All people in home were shouting in such a high pitch that whole village gathered outside home.Some people came inside n tried to push her.

Person one: Geet isko tum yahan nahi rakh sakti...

One lady : Yes yes...you have to remove him from here otherwise think about yourself...then you will not be able to live here...


Rahul : Kya tamasha hai yeh...aap sabh ghar se nikal jaayea..kissi bimaar ki madad karke kya gunah kiya hai isne...( He came in front of Geet )


How he reached here Geet was surprised like every one.But his support was enough for Geet to boost up her determination


But nobody cared.When some people tried to bring Maan out .Geet took vegetable knife in front of them.n whole people moved backward...She first showed it to all n then put it on her belly

Ram: Geet don't be mad...give this too me ...leave this knife..( even his words had been soften coz he not expected this )

But Geet nodded her head..Till then serpanch (village head ) came n he moved all other people out of home.)


Rahul snatched knife from Geet n calmed her down .


Sarpanch: Geet you want to keep him with you thats fine but for that you have to accept one decision we all took... ( Sarpanch gave her option ...any decision what was that ..she was waiting...)

Rahul :Kya faisla...kissi ki madad karne se pehle apka faisla sun-na hoga koi aur mazak reh gaya ho to wo bhi kar leeziye ( he taunted)

Sarpanch: All these members and other respectable people they met me before coming here..

Rano: So whats your ultimate verdict...you might have taken ..so gave your verdict now...(She moved forward)

Savita: Yahi k agar Geet ko isse apne sath rakna hai to is se viah (marriage) karna hoga...


Rano: But how is this possible ? no...( stunned mother screamed)

Before Rano could say some thing or any other person could force them...Geet came in front of Rano n stopped her placing hand over her shoulder...Took her slate.

Geet:( wrote )..If this is ur ultimate verdict..I will marry him and even today...(she had tears in her eyes when she put slate in front of Sarpanch)

Everyone read her words.They had never expected this..Might they have thought Geet would leave Maan in this way..She gonna b on her knees.But no nothing happened.They were looking at each other's faces n mum in front of a girl who could not speak.But she could express for a man who totally relied on her mercy .

Rahul : Geet r u mad ? ( he shouted)

Rahul was in love with Geet...He never told her.Now this decision shattered him.He was not a selfish guy..But this kind of thing was shocking.marriage with an unknown Man ..nothing clear about his identity...he was married or not.He wanted to make Geet part of his life or not ? He gonna be alrite or not.Rahul knew if Geet had decided..She gonna follow it n he had to support her coz she was doing all selflessly fighting all odds...going against society...

Geet (wrote): Ya I m..coz I can't see him dying...the outcome I don't know.But I hav to go for this.thats final .( she wiped her over flooded eyes)

People those were out side ...when came to know they had same reaction as all people had..But this was only one solution to shut their mouths.She asked Pujari Ji to arrange all things just in her house's little courtyard.As it was tough to take Maan any where else.


She asked Sham( leela mausi's son) to bring wheel chair for Maan from hospital coz in local town it was not available.so doctor after knowing this arranged wheel chair.Every thing was set for this unforgettable..unusual marriage...much above any gain or lose



just wait ...
Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
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This Chapter always makes me cry..😭 ..Especially for Suhaana...
Chapter 8




At last Tamasha was over.Every body had left.Rano dragged Geet to room where Maan was on bed...unaware to decision she made.It was ironic...he was getting married to Geet..But was just like any other silent spectator outside who was there as a witness of that Tamasha.

Rano : Geet what u r doing ?bhavana-on (emotions) main beh kar itna vadda faisla. ( she shook her from shoulders)

Geet looked at her mother with emptiness in her eyes without reaction...


Rano : Geet jawab de...kyo apni zindgi barbaad kar rahi hai...woh bhi us Admi k liye ..jiska sirf Naam he patta hai tumko ( Rano looked at Maan)

Geet put Rano's hands down from her shoulders n moved toward door.Rano tried to stop her.But she left.when she came back ,had slate in her hand.

Rano waited patiently for Geet's words.

Geet ( wrote ) : Maa...you are saying this too me...how much you suffered for me so that you can make my life happy...but you always supported what was right ..( she gave it too Rano)

Rano repeated words written by her...

Rano : Why not Geet...you are my daughter...If I don't care for you then who will...I can do anything for you ( she rolled hand over Geet's head... )

Geet ( wrote): Yahi Maa..yahi to main apko samjhana chahti hu...kya sirf khoon ka rishta he kaffi hota hai..that we can go to any extent for our relations.But think .agar main hoti Maan ki jagah aap mujhko chod deti .( Geet waited for her mother's reaction)


Rano: Geet u r rite but if u marry Maan what ll b outcome 😲...socha hai tumne...in logon ka muh band karne k liye tum Maan se shaddi kar rahi ho..taaki inko apne sath rakh sako...(she was on her words trying to make Geet understand)

Geet: To kya Maa ...should I sent him to any asylum...For what these people r compelling...kya hoga inka...ek jinda lash ki tarah padde rahegay..no body gonna care for him...shayad agar inki kismat main zinda rehna bhi hoga...yeh wahan theek hone ki jagah apni zindgi he gava de..But m not gonna let this happen.( n she stepped toward Maan's cot giving her verdict )

Rano: Geet I have nothing to say more...I taught you to choose what is right...how can I deny it now ? But think after u marry Maan...woh theek ho gaye..or unho ne tumko chod diya to..what ll we do then ?(she chased Geet )

Geet: Maa don think what gonna happen...To save him from this so called society ..I left with just one option due to these people to marry him...Why to think now he gonna accept me or not...

Rano was speechless. She tried to smile But her worries about for her daughter's future had shattered her down from inside.

Stage was set for this unusual marriage.This marriage might be a drama for all.. People had been gathered all around.But for Geet this was toughest decision..Her whole life was gonna to be changed after that.For Maan this marriage mattered nothing.But for Geet this was biggest turning point of her life.

Sham brought Maan on wheel chair.to lil court yard...Where Pandit Ji had lit fire in Hawan kund. Every body was curious to know how this marriage gonna b performed.


Geet was wearing same red suit which Rano sewed for Geet to wear in Mala's weeding. But nobody even Geet was aware that this gonna be the weeding dress for her...

Geet could fulfil her part in all rituals related to marriage...But how Maan?..Who was not able to raise his hand up.How could he putVarmala,Sindoor, Mangal sutar But above all 7 phere.She asked Sham to leave Maan's wheel chair for her n took him in front of Hawan Kund.


Rano,Rahul,Leela,Sham,whole persons of repute those came to her house n compelled her for this decision n common people were watching this holding their breath.She took Varmala from Leela Mausi...first put in Maan's neck.She gave Mala in Maan's hands but Geet she held his hands...Geet commanded Maan's hands to put varmala in her neck.This might have never happened n never gonna b happen.


During Sindoor daan n Mangal sutar she did same as she did during Vermala time.Directed Maan's hands by herself...


What next.Rano came forward for Gath bandhan but whether Gath bandhan mattered for that person who could not take 7 phere .How could Maan follow Geet behind her for three pheras..how Geet gonna follow him for next four.



Geet asked Pandit to proceed..She held Maan's wheel chair from back n completed four rounds of Maan's part.But what about remaining three ..how to complete those three where she had too lead ?

Might she have some thing for this already... That's why there were pieces of ropes in Rahul's hands.She had asked him to bring ropes but what was reason even Rahul was clueless.


Taking pieces of ropes from Rahul .She tied one end of each rope to wheel chair arms n took other ends in her hands .n then started to pull Maan's wheel chair like any animal pull cart.These people those were against Geet They were thinking why she was ruining her own life for the sake of a person having no relation with her...



Geet was Maan's wife now..Two speechless creatures had been tied to one knot . Due to voices raised by this evil power called society...But was this decision enough to shut them up ? What Geet gonna do now ? Where was her life taking her ? Might even Geet have no answer.


Everybody left coz they hav nothing to say in front of this brave girl.Who accepted challenge given by them.She took Ashirwaad from Rano n Leela.Broken Rahul left jst after phere.But from inside He was feeling proud of himself that he loved her.A girl who buried her own identity to give life an unknown's identity...


She gave no reaction n moved inside home n locked both of them in room.Rano n Leela knocked room continuously.But no effect.

Just a single slit in room window assured Rano that her daughter was okey.She knew Geet's habit whenever she became upset she did same. Locking herself in room.She always weep...But after that she always told reason to her mother.

Why Geet did so today.Rano wanted to know as this was Geet's self made decision for which she convinced Rano too...But she left her daughter alone.

Geet she was now Maan's wife.Mrs. Geet Maan.It was good or an irony that She had just her her husband's name after her.People all knew her..They would call her Mrs. Geet Maan.Good to have straight forward name of her husband attached to her as she was Maan's wife.But what about daughter-in - Law of Maan's family.Might she ll never b .She had no family name of Maan.this marriage gav her right to b his wife not as Bahu of his family and when she gonna b or not gonna b only time knew As this was her decision.

She put Maan on cot.Removed Varmaalas from his n her neck. removed her little jewelry except Mangal Sutar n gave blanket. Sitting next to him She was continuously looking at Maan who was gazing at roof as usual.Tears from her eyes fell on Tilak Maan had as a symbol of this marriage n wetness on it scattered lil bit toward his eyes.

Geet wiped it with her Pallu lik it was symbol of Geet's thinking.Might she would release Maan from this relation if he wanted..like she wiped the tilak..she would wipe her relation which this Tilak signified if he wanted any time...But she could not from inside which her sparkling Sindoor was saying..Some where she had accepted him as hers..

She got up and threw herself on cot parallel to other Maan had.Sometimes she looked at Maan..some times rashes on her hands due to rope.She went in deep sleep It was four.But when Rano continuously knocked door it was around six.


She looked at Maan who was as such n opened door.

Rano : Kyo tang karti hai mujhe...kabse raah dekh rahi hu..per tum per koi asar nahi..meri haalat ka.Maa hu.daar lagta hai tujhko apne paas nahi paati to ( she busted)

Both mother daughter looked at each other n busted in tears hugging each other.She took Geet inside.


Looking at Maan..Rano always had mixed emotions but today she had only two emotions.One She cursed him why he came in her life.. n other she always prayed for him due to his this condition ..he couldn't judge what was going around..What happened today...no one knew he had any idea about it or not...If he could he would b never here.n she put her hand on Maan's head.Who was no stranger any more.A part of their lives




Precap


Tera Mera Pyar Amar
Fir Kyon mujhko lagta hai dar !!!
Mere Jeevan Saathi batta
Kyo Dil Dhadke reh reh kar...!!!
Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
The community is actually forcing their unwanted decisions on Geet and she has
no other option otherwise they will take Maan to an asylum .
the entire community is at Geet's place but I'm sure not a single person that is either standing inside the house or outside actually helps in any contribution towards Maan's recovery
yet they all knowing Geet still demands that she leave Maan
Geet is adamant and so is her mother because here is a girl that cannot speak from her
mouth but from her hands and when Geet agrees to marry everyone is shocked
why they shocked they know Geet will not leave someone to die in this condition
Rahul even though he stands with Geet but when hearing that she agrees to marry Maan
he is shattered and tries to convince her otherwise but he too knows when Geet has decided
than she will not go back on her words
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow nice update !! geet gonna marry maan :D hope he recovers soon :)
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Awesome updates
Loved the way his tarah Geet sabke against jaaye kar Maan ki help kar rahi hai yaha tak ki wo apni precious jewelry bhi beach de rahi hai bahut kam wise log hote hai duniya mai Jo duniya ki parwah liye bagair niswarth bhav se dusre logo ki help karte hai
Beautifully written
Loved it
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Superb Updates
OMG!!!!! blood clotting in Maan,s brain which disrupt his nervous system and his whole body is paralysed, geet is all ready to take care of him, nurse handed over his belongings to geet and then she came to know his name is Maan, geet brought Maan at her home and villagers are talking rubbish about geet and geet is determined in her decision, her mother is with her, loved it
Precap is interesting , eagerly waiting what will geet do now
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing parts di
thanks for dedication..
geet has fallen for maan
and that's always amazed me whenever I read this..
she did all of this not coz of any sympathy but for her feelings towards him..
maybe they were not as a lover at that time
but I could only see her selfless love for maan for saving his life..

here geet is strong and even after her disability she knew that she wants him in her life

now as they r married
and maan knee this too
a girl sacrificing her life for him
and he must be feeling like abhi I need to get well for her..

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