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Lovely OS..It's like reliving GHSP..The song from Khamoshiyan perfectly fit their situation..and the pictures were awesome too..Loved it..I'd be happy if you post Locket again.. I'll read from beginning..

Kaash Dil se thread me words limit nahin hoti..

hi avi,

beautiful story from you...somehow felt very sad and heavy heart while reading...its like reliving maaneet ...the mingle of reel and real life...no words to say !! and the confession part from third person's angle was different and cute ...even the orange blobs...😆 !! loved it whole and whole !! its true like our friend said...if you had posted one part of it...it would have definitely gone to become ss...and then ff...from a wonderful writer like you, it would have been a treat !! saying that... this os is no less !! enjoyed it alot...already read it thrice...will read again...again ...

Nice os loved it finally they become one

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Ahaaa Aviii muaaah *running and givin zor ki jhappiii* 😆
Love Shovely OS !
Mind Blowing gurrulicious song selection 😉
Love u so... I think n think n think ke Em happy with this OS 😆
You are my hunny bunch.. suger plump 😃
Maan Singh Khurana ki ego and Geet ka strong Love wow what an awesome combo !
They loved each other in the past but bcs of Maan's carrier She gave up on him aww 😔
He realized he lost sopmething precious but after that happened
That money maker producer ek acha kaam kia dono ko wapas ek sath set pe bula ke 😃
They met !
He got to knw after hurting geet that they a son named aman 😃
Hahaha loved Meera's running commentry then hiding in the comforter 😆
WELLDONE OS

Haiye!

Itni tareefein!

Wo bhi OS ke liye?

😆

Me Thud!

Thank u Jaaneman 😃

Teri Ummeed ka last part nahi padha ab tak?

Kam se kam tumse toh ummeed thi comment ki 😕

Koi nahi

intezaar karugi 😃

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

Kaash Dil se thread me words limit nahin hoti..

Now I can fine it perfect...In dil se thread something looked missing..

I loved it too much..

Arrogant and egoheaded Maan singh Khurana Finally came on his knees before geet ...and he knew that achievments are nothing in front of the love

Yes definitely to the word limit thing!

Mere jaise ke liye it does not work out..

Besides I lost 3 hours of writing when I accidentally highlighted and deleted it all on ipad

I felt weird about submitting but mujhe Lakshmi aur Priya ki efforts ko waste nahi karna tha 😃

Glad you liked it Rashmi 😃

Originally posted by: kalabhas

hi avi,

ur story was fabulous wonderful..awesome..mind blowing..

all these words seems less to praise ur story..

u don't have any idea of how much i liked the story..

i already read it three four times..and also the story haunted me for so long after i read it..

hats off to ur writing skill dear..

since the time i had read the story i was wondering who could be the author..once i knew it was u..there was no surprise for me..who else could be the author of such a great story other than a wonderful writer like u..

but i am little sad that ur story doesn't won the competition..but no worries..ur writing completely blown me away...and won my heart..

actually i left reading ur locket in the mid itself..because of my work..now i am really missing that..i am glad that u r reposting it...eagerly waiting for it..

keep up the great work ma..

Thank u so much for the lovely words 😃