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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Thank you Avi,

I was sad as I thought I w I'll not get to read anything from you...but this OS was nice, sweet and simple, egoistic Maan and our cute Princess geet...what a deadly combination .

Thnx again

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

wow. awesome OS Avi. fabulous.

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Yo link thanks... Shall read at evening... 😉

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ramarora

@ramarora

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

omg !!!!!!! you summarised the whole journey of geet starting from being aloof to being aware to being in love😃 you did not even leave the stingy production house😆
waiting eagerly for your new ff😃

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Avi

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awesome os avi
I loved it
I love the way jis tarah geet maan ke liye apne aapko pichhe rakha kar usse aage badhne deti hai

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Beautiful OS..I read only few in os and i liked this one more and voted also for this one only...but it was not selected...so sad...I somehow guessed that it could be from you but voicing out was not allowed & I could post a comment also...sorry

Sabse best part was meer'a running commentary...that was just hilarious..."Orange blobs everywhere"...lol...

His ego & anger made them to go separate ways. She did not tell him about aman and dev-tara (as usual...lol..) supported her

How I wish to see them both again...hope this "Dream Comes True"..

Aman, a jumble up of his name Maan...I liked this too.

Filmdust...lol...

Thnx to Laks for starting "Dil Se" so we got OS from you.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: dqno1

The Last shot

A/N: This story is a fiction. There is no reality to it at all.

This is the full story.

A part of it was in Dil Se OS submissions but as you all know by now, I am terrible at OS's.

Both my OS's ended up being an 100 part FF and a 50 part FF respectively.

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