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loved the os...😃😃

hi congrats on the new OS! Thanks 4 da pm! brilliant emotional intense fab OS! superbly written! Fab pics n amazing song! Maan n Geet r actors! They love each other bt didn't confess! Geet js left without a trace! Maan shattered! Maan thinks she is married! Geet returns cos of her contract! Dev n NT helped her! Geet returns 4 the shoot! Maan rude 2 her! intense kiss! Geet leaves! he phone rings! Maan realises y she left! she had his child! She left 4 him n his ambitions n success! Maan recalled the night n knows the child is his! Maan goes 2 meet his son n asks 4 forgiveness! Love hw Meera was narrating each n everything! All ends well! The last scenes of the show was a rocking hit! Maaneet happy! Awesome end - they win the best actor n actress respectively n have another child! ⭐️ 😊 ⭐️

I voted for it as I loved it the most...it was beautiful other than Life is beautiful & last order...but when I read the full story , it was the best & no other story made such a beautiful impression other than this...I don't know why u didn't win...so weird...

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

I voted for it as I loved it the most...it was beautiful other than Life is beautiful & last order...but when I read the full story , it was the best & no other story made such a beautiful impression other than this...I don't know why u didn't win...so weird...

Amazing OS. Maan let go of his ego only once he knew that he had a child. He was very rude before that. But loved it. Waiting for The Locket.

Just amazing OS
Wow
Hain kitna sweet & cute
U can not stop writing I am telling u
Well I am waiting

very beautiful story dear!!!..
well written!.

Avi, first of all I'm sorry for going gayab on you. I'm not having my lappy with me for over 2 months now and Opera in my cell phone doesnt let me open your Teri Umeed chapters in spite of the passwords given by you. Some security issues come up not allowing me access to protected blogs. So I could not read that story, but of course I'll do it once I get my lappy back which I'm not sure when it will be. I'm commenting from cell phone since a month now. Thankfully this OS wasnt posted on ur blog so I was able to read and comment too.

Coming to this OS I really really loved it a lot. Of course hated arrogant Maan n Mt.Everest se bhi bada uska ego. Poor Geet, not only she was cheated by producers n his politics of wanting to get his daughter to replace her but also for the growing life inside of her. Grrr I really hate it when a woman has go through all the pain alone specially when she is pregnant, this one thing makes me ultimately hate her lover.

It brought tears in my eyes reading about Aman n Geet's unconditional love n somewhere even wanted Geet to never ever forgive Maan, but OS tha isliye chala liya. Had it been SS or even FF I would have loved to see Maan redeeming n regretting every bit of his living life. Cos of course his tongue is very sharp n he speaks all the harsh words in his damn ego. So punishment toh banti thi.

But somewhere I'm glad you dint make this a sad ending. OS ka yahi darr hota hai that writers can easily have a tragic ending. Thankfully that wasnt the case here. So even though I hated Maan like anything, I still loved the story cos it wasnt a sad ending n Maaneet were together at the end.

Loved Dev, Tara n specially Meera's commentary. Beautifully written and awesomely portrayed all the emotions. Enjoyed it.

-Sanjana!