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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: lehr
awesome
loved it

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: aparna3011
very nice
continue soon

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Wow! What a update!!
Aapko pata hai, aapne kya likha hai...jast jast awesome!!
Dard ko itni khubsurti se likha hai ki kya batau samjh nahi aa raha hai...

Aapne maan geet ke saath ko bahut achhe se dikhya hai...dono dukhi hai...apne apne partners se dokha khaye hue hai aur ab dono sab kuch bhulkar ek dusre mein kho jaana chahte hai...geet toh maan ka pura naam bhi nahi jaanti...dono ke bich pyaar kam aur physical relation jyaada hai ...maan ko geet khubsurat lagti hai aur jaan ne ka mouka mile toh pyaar karna chahta hai...

Raat dono saath batate hai...maan ki aankho ka dard aur geet ke aansu un dono ke dil ka haal batate hai...subah geet note likhke chali jaati hai par ussne maan ko likha hai kahi dil ke ek cone mein woh geet ki yaad ko sambhal ke rakhe...awesome writing!!!

Maan aur geet apne apne partners ke saath nahi hai par phir bhi woh galat nahi lagta par dev bhi kisi dusre ke saath hai woh galat lagta hai...yahi aapke writing ka kamal hai

Egarly waiting for next part...kab dogi? Pata hai ki abhi abhi toh 1st part ki comment ki par aage padhne ka itna mann ho raha hai ki kya batau?

Thanks a lot dear for such lovely compliment... Maine toh bas likh daala jo dil mai aya ... haa dono dard mai hai...itna dard ki shayad kuch palon ke liye hi shi woh sabkuch bhoolna chahte the...dono mai payar nahi hai par phirbhi they touched each others heart...dev ke baare mai zyada nahi bolungi...tum khud hi usko judge karna as he comes up...😉

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sanum23
really grt
new concept
both having problem in their
marriage life

Thanks a lot dear!! Yep both aren't happy with their marriage

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: fantesy
wow beautiful update .. both are in pain and found solace in each other but cant be together ..

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: nanor
simply brilliant
loved itc

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl
Prologue

So both are hurt by their respectives exs.

Though Geet wanted it to do just to forget her ex, her hurt n pain; she was bold enough to ask for it directly. Letting go of every rationality for one night n just live the moment.

Maan was holding it at first but he gave in. He seemed attracted towards her.

I'm of course curious to know they met n also shared about their respectives ex.

Its quite a different concept. Specially Geet, we hardly get to see such bold side to Geet in stories. I have always wondered if Maan can be shown as playboy n casanova in stories why cant Geet? So at least this is something different for me.

Loved the prologue Aditi.

-Sanjana!

Thanks a lot dear... Even I had always wanted to see a bold Geet so I thought why not write one? I am sure you would get a nice jhatka in upcoming update.😉

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl
W*F?? Both are married? *eyes widening* No divorce or nothing. Both have got some major problems in their respectives marriages. Both are hurt n just for night found solace in each other. Never in my wildest thought I could have thought of this. In prologue I just felt both are now singles hurt by their ex but this chapter was real shock.

Though both had this night just for one night with each other they have left a part of theirs with each other. They even felt had they got a chance to know each other both would fall in love.

I so wonder what problems does Geet n Dev have in their marriage? Even when she was with Maan she couldnt help but think of Dev. She said she would be yearning for him emotionally, does that means she loves him or something? Even Dev was with some other woman, well not sure, its Geet who just thought that and I m taking her presumption as true.

They were complete stranger still Maan felt protective of her n she adviced him to try once more in his relationship. It really dint feel like they had met just tonight. It was as if they knew each other since ages. Guess, their pain got the understanding btw them.

The update was intense n painful. It was literally screaming of how both Geet n Maan are still hurting. I loved Geet's letter. I guess she tried giving Maan a woman's perspective so that at least he could try saving his married life.

I'm so so curious to know what their past is n what exactly is the problem with their respective life partners.

I loved the start Aditi. The story is quite hatke I m all for it. Do continue please.

-Sanjana!

Told you Sanjana you would get a nice jhatka!! 😆 Yep they are still married and have got such overwhelming pain that they wanted to forget their pain even if by seeking physical relation with a complete stranger. Geet loves Dev. You would know more as story moves but yes she does love Dev otherwise she wouldn't have been in so much pain. You are right about Geet's intention of advising Maan but if it would work or not is for me to write and you to find out😉