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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: -Orchid-
Hiii Aditi
silent reader of ur stoies..just started reading F&A ..will comment there soon
coming to this story..Loved da Concept..Its different
Maan-Geet had problrms in thier marital life and both find solace in each other
Loved Geet's letter...WTH!!! i hate Dev..
want to knw thier past
waiting for next part...Continue soon
and do PM Me😊

Hi dear, I am glad you decided to comment. You must know that your comment means a lot to me. Just sent me a buddy request so I can send you pm for both this one and F & A. Hope to find your comment regularly.😊

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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
part 1 - beautifully written... both have their share of problems with their spouses...then why they didt not get free from their marriage...why geet telling him to resolve his problem with his wife. she confessed that she had best night with him, same with maan...both will keep this night as a precious treasure of their life. they didnt used any protection. what if more complications arise out of this.
waiting for more..

Maybe they just got to know of the betrayal and wanted to get rid of the overwhelming pain😉 Maybe Geet wanted at least Maan to have a chance at saving his marriage so gave him the advice. You will find more as you read on. I am sure you would enjoy their journey as well😊

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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_
Congrats for the new story =D
Interesting pro.
They want to let go with their emotions and desire.

And I too love the song.

Thanks dear!! And i loved the song...it inspired me to write😊

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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ambeern
awesome update.

Thanks dear!!😊

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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: anmirza
I like reading dark Maaneet stories where they aren't perfect so I will definitely like this one as well...please continue soon

I don't know if I will exactly call my story as Dark Maaneet fiction since I am not good at writing them but Maaneet here are definitely not perfect. You can give this a shot. You might like it.😊

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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Amazing start

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: taahir004
Awesome Update
Both Maan and Geet are married to their own spouses but because of
pain in their lives they came together
but both want to keep their night as a memory

Thanks a lot dear!!😊