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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all apologizing for not updating for few days had unexpected guests over.
chalo now getting back at this want to finish this soon so here r next updates hope u enjoy it and please ignore the errors.

Part 9

Days started to pass by wedding was nearing maan and geet became good friends.

Wedding day geet was nervous gotten ready it wasn't a big wedding affair just close friends n families.

Geet prayed to god the challenge she have accepted she prayed for gods blessing to win it and change maaan for better. She wants her marriage to work.

(Sorry guys not gonna go in details of wedding so just use ur imagination)

Wedding happened dadi was the happiest person to have a bahu finally.

Maan and geet in one room . Maan came in geet sitting in the middle of bed don't know what to do or expect as there wedding isn't usual one. Maan came in sat beside geet lifted her gugant stared at her dreamingly while geet shied. but started laughing all of the sudden.

Maan: this is so like hindi movie suhag raat dulah lifts dulhans gugnat and dulhan shies away. He said but here we are just friends u don't need to feel shy go ahead n get changed u can sleep on the bed all sleep on the other side of bed if u don't mind.

Geet: was little shocked with his behavior but said ok so slept well try to sleep.

Next day geet's first day in kitch she prepared many varieties of food.

Dadi blessed her. Everyone at dining table maan saw table full of varities of foods asked dadi

Maan: are wah dadi itna khana I thought wedding mein hi zada tha par yaha toh use bhi zada hai

Dadi: beta yeh khana aaj geet ne banaya hai pehli bar humare ghar mein khao aur batao kaisa bana hai

Maan tasted and loved it he praised geet for the cooking asked her from now on she have to cook for him always geet was happy dadi gifted her khaandani kangans n keys of the house geet refused first but when did insisted a lot she took it as her responsibility.

Days started going by geet wasn't going to office would just take care of the mansion now the mansion looked like home. Maan have changed his lifestyle now he doesn't party anymore. He started to devolpe some feelings for geet but wasn't willing to accepted.

Geet have devolped feelings for maan she was in love she knows and she is happy she have changed maan a little even though he still don't take there relation seriously but his parties have reduce or his girlfriends.
PART 11
Days have started by maan and geet have this atraction toward eachtoher they have feelings for each other geet have accepted but maan still couldn't because to him he can't fall for the girl wasn't his choice he want some one who was his choice yess he was being stuborn.

Maan were to goto London for bussiness for a month but dadi made geet go as well. All packing was done geet was happy to go with maan but maan wasn't happy because he was going for bussiness what will geet do according to him but for dadi he had agree.
Maan and geet was in London now maan was extremely bussy with new project geet in there house didn't know what to do so she started organizing and redecorate there house which were 4 bedrooms and 3 baths house big house that khuranas owned in London on weekends maan would see the changes made in the house he liked it. One week both decided to go out finnaly after bussy weeks maan had time to take geet out they went to shoping first.

Maan and geet in mall

Maan: toh geet kaha pehle jana hai kis shop mein

Geet: pehle hum jewllry shop mein jaye ge waha se kuch dadi ma ke liye koi gift dekh te hai

Maan: as u say par jewllry he kyon kuch aur nahi

Geet: uffo maan every women loves jewllry and don't u notice dadima always wear light jewllry from neck peace to bracelet and earings.

Maan: yeh baat toh hai chalo dekh te hai kuch

They arrived at the shop they first were looking though some elegant necklaces for dadima.

Maan: geet yeh kaisa rahe ga dadima ke liye he showed her very havey silver gold necklace to geet

Geet: bahot hi sundar hai par dadima ma ke paas aise der sare hai kyon na hum kuch alag dekhe like a pendent or a ring.

Maan: hmm yeh sab tum hi karo mujh se nai hoga

After like an hour finally geet picked this most gorgeous pendent heart shape locket it had whitel gold the locket had tiney dimonds around it. It was very simple and classy type of pendent geet showed it to maan he approved it liked geet's chocie finnaly got it packed whiel geet was going through some other jewells maan eyes caught dimond belly chain he have seen geet occasionally wearing belly chains n thought to give this as gift to geet as friend and for everything she does for his family/. He got it packed without geet noticing it later geet and him did other shoping as well geet got him few formals which suited him and geet got herself few jackets for herself and one saree. Then they both went to dinner.

Maan: gosh geet kitna time shoping ki hum ne waise I would se tum ne u took forever but who am I kidding tum bhi ek ladki hoo.

Geet: kya matlab ? Ur saying I took extra time because I am girl really maan for ur kind of information I was done with my shoping in no time it was for ur stuff that took more then 3 hours because MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko kuch pasand nai aa raha tha and ur blaming it on me.

Maan: toh kyaa geet it was u who was pulling me to one shop to another

Geet: haan haan sab galti meri hai ke mein aap ko dosri shops mein leke ja rahi thi kyonki my highness weren't able to select anything from one place.

Maan: lets order geet nai toh tum kham kha fight karo gi mujh se

Geet: grit her teeth she so much wanted to tell him off but she chose to keep it quite n not take to him

She placed her order ate silently maan was watchign this knowing she is now mad and he have to manofy her. They came back home maan didn't try to talk to her geet ws eveen more mad then before because he wasn't even making effort to talk to her ignoring her all together. On other hand maan was upto something special to manofy geet in his way.

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Part 11

So maan did manofy geet by the gift the bellychain he made her wear it asked sorry holding his ears n off course geet wouldn't have stayed mad at him for ever she melted. Maan was still unable to name the feelings he have for geet he is one stuborn guy we all know that. So the end of the project came on that the office was throwing party on that special ocassion so maan asked geet to give him company. Geet got ready in red saree with back less blouse she had apply minimum make up she looked gorgeous with that midum size bindi in middle of her eyebrows made her eyes and face more gorgeous and off curse simbles of marriage and the belly chain that maan have gifted her she looked hot n sexy n gorgeous that maan couldn't take his eyes off. He compliemnted her

Maan: you look beautiful lost in geet

Geet just shied n said thank you maan was still in trace didn't move geet was feeling goose bumps seeing his intense gaze on her Geet: maan chale hume der ho rahi hai.

Maan: came out of his trace said haan chalo the drive went quietly well nto exactly geet n maan did shared few words about going back to India.

Maan: parso ki flight hai yaha ka sara kaam khatam ho gaya hai almost so I booked the tickets for day after tomarrow.

Geet: theek ahi mein kal packing kar logi humari kitne baji ki flight hai waise

Maan: morning mein hai

Geet: theek wow I just can't to be with dadima have so much to talk about nai toh apne saath akele baatein kar kar tang aa gai thi

Maan: what u mean mein bhi tu hu tumare saath

Geet: kab the jab bhi the either u will start arguing or when tlakign it was mostly me while u busy on ur laptop keyboard nto even payin attention to what I say.

Maan: ek time hua tha yeh geet now don't make it look like always n its u who always argue jab dekeho apni bak bak suru karti ho

Geet: kya kaha ap ne jao mein aap se baat nai karti

Maan: chalo shukar hai mere ears ko break mile ge fr few mintues

Geet: shocked u know what I will talk more now

Maan enjoyed teasing geet but later on they would laugh it off fighting like kids.

Party was great n geet n maan both kinda got drunk meltingly took wrong drinks maan was still in the sense but geet was little high .

RECAP: geet n maan ☺️☺️😳😳

Edited by HawtieSeep - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice parts both r married geet now love maan so they r drunk waiting to see what will happen thnx 4 update
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Part12

The party was on the dance floor was open all couples were dancing maan and geet were dancing on a romantic song Katra katra mein giro. Both were getting lost in there eyes the attraction grow more with them by the end of the song they were close to kissing until aplause by audience made them aware of where they were.

Then after while party was done the were back home still burning with desire n alochol didn't help them but made there desire wanting each other more n suddenly it started to rain and we know how much geet loves rains so geet rain to balcony in there home played in rain ruining her saree which was all sticking to her wasn't helping covering her form she looked sexy to maan who followed her when he saw her in rain seeing her like this he lost the control he spinned her around give her the intense stare before bending down to touch her lips with his they felt the current run down in there spines maan suddenly separate himself feeling the current stare at geet who had eyes shut tightly who in no time turned red opend her eyes missing the warmth she felt few seconds before seeing him stare at her that way she bend her head down again blushing hard but maan pulled her chin and again this time kissed her lips first time geet surrended herself to him she followed his lead few mintues passed them kissing each other in rain.

then maan picked her up took her to room set her on her feet started taking her saree off kissing his way down geet was already drown not knowing wht to do but let him have his way both made there way to bed kissing each other sat on bed slowly maan taking geets jewllry off kissing every part which decorated by jewls they both were so lost in each other slowly one by one geet was left just in blouse n skirt n bellychain on herself whiel maan was still in shirt n pants. In no time maan was out of his clothes as well n both were fully naked geet was feeling tooo shy but maan was no where near feeling shy but feeling more passion seeing geet that way. He kissed her from head to too not one spot untouched by him by the time they both crossed there limits maan thrust himself in her in no minutes both were panting heavenly from the pleasure the were getting from each other n time to time geet's moans made maan go little rough on geet. Geet: hhh maan panting heavenly not able to get enough air she was feeling like exploadig from pleasure Maan: groans

Geet: aahhh hhha mmm hmmm

Maan: yehh baby!! hmm

both came hard then maan lies next to geet pulling her on himself but the night didn't end there after little break they again started exploring each other maan couldn't' have enough of geet it was totally different feeling he was loving it. There desire for each other they just couldn't' keep there hands of each other all night went like that at dawn only they slept peacefully.

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Part 13

Next day maan woke up from sleep seeing geet on him he was at first little shocked but later on realized what happened with each other at some poin the felt content but him mind wasn't accepting what he had done in his desire yes he knows he was attracted to her but this just went too fast. He ddint want it to take there relation in next step so early they still have to develop feeling for each other. ( well he certainly did have started to feel for her but can't accept it quickly na being stuborn man.)

He moved himself from geet's embarace went to take shower get ready for office. While geet woke up seeing her state she blushed hard felt content and happy for being his wife n all senses while she was happy but maan wasn't. he thought he took the step to early n that he might not even want to spend his life with her but kinda felt he lost control n used geet for physical needs.

Geet got up stood up wraping a sheet around herself she couldn't walk after last night numbers of time they made love but she was happy with thought of getting loved by her hubby well to her she gave herself to the love of her life her husband but for maan well his mind isn't ready to accept geet as his companion yet he is still unsure but didn't feel bad for losing control. Geet cleared up the room did the bed n took al the clothes put it in washing bin while maan came out saw geet cleaned the room. There eyes met he can see geet blushing n glowing while he approached her.

Maan: I am sorry geet kal raat jo kuch bhi hua im feeling too guilty jo kuch bhi hua It shouldn't' have happened I am sorry I lost control believe me I wanted to wait until I start to feel for u but I don't know kal raat I just crossed the limits.

Geet felt shattered hearing his words thank god she already had her head down otherwise he would have noticed her expressions. But she quickly composed her self : its okay maan I know what happened I am ok with it ur nt the only one at fault but I am also. Geet told this with heavy heart.

She was so happy in the morning thinking that yesterday was the best night of her life but morning turning out to be the worst morning ever. She felt depressed that her husband didn't had feelings for her still after so many months of living together. She thought she read his eyes but she was wrong.

Maan: thank god mujhe laga ke tum ro pado gi un hindi serials types girl thank god u understand me.

Geet: yeh geet gave little smile n moved to washroom locking the washroom she cried sliding down the door she was hurt by maan. She took cold shower decided that whatever happen she gave herself to her husband maybe he didn't accepted her as his wife yet but she did so she decided to move on n not try to bother him much now on n maintain distance.

Next day they both left to India in that time geet was always lost in her thoughts would only answer maan when he would ask her questions otherwise that bubly geet was somewhere lost. Maan didn't notice it.
Ariving at mansion geet hugged dadi tightly even dadi felt the change she took it maybe geet missed her a lot.

Month passed geet was changed n maan can feel it now and dadi have felt long ago she thought something might have happened with both geet n maan so she decided to keep out it was there personal matter but she was missing the old geet who wouldn't stop talking but now this geet only did her work and listen to dadi if ask her if anything wron she just say nothing im just missing maa or something else.

One day maan questioned about her behavior as well

Maan: geet kya hua hai tumko why r u being so indifferent

Geet: nahi toh kyon

Maan: I can see that after that night ur changed I thought u understood where I was coming from but ur typical Indian girl who wants more out of relation when I clearly told that I have no feelings of yet but we both lost control why are u behaving like I did something more worse to u or forced u into it.

Geet: aisa kuch nai hai n I clearly know what u have told me about our marriage n about ur feelings I may have forgot at one point now I have understood n remember each n everything. Infact I am sorry for crossing my limits yess I did started to expect more from you because I have devlope feelings for u. I know u don't have any feelings for me but don't think I expect anything from you I don't n neither do I expect anything from this relation anymore. I thought I might have change u a little but I know I cant n I am not the one for u. with that say she left the room. Not seeing dadi have heard everything.

Dadi was in shock she first wanted to confront maan but then stoped her self as she felt she was also at fault for ruining geets life.

Geet was in garden in her own thought she decided to return to her home tomarrow she couldn't live her n face humiation from maan and force maan to chose her because of dadi's wishes she wants maan to be happy if he isn't happy with her then she will let him go.

Maan on the other hand felt hurt from geet talks he thought he shouldn't have said those things but chose to ignore it because he have already made it clear to her to not expect much from him. His mind told him it was her fault for having feelings for him when he didn't it. His heart felt hurt for hurting her with his words. He was fighting within himself .

Recap: geet back to her home.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update. ... hope maan will understand his feelings early
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read part 9,10,11,12,13
superb updates
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hi js read Parts 9-13 nw! sorry 4 late likes n comments! Maaneet get married! Geet taking care of the house! Maan loves the way she cooks! They go to UK! They r nw comfortable with eah other! They attend a party n get drunk! Maaneet become one! Maan regrets wt happened n tells her! Geet shattered bt composes herself! Maan relieved tht she doesn't demand anything! geet resolves to keep her distance frm him! Maan doesn't notice! they r back in India! dadi notices the changes in Geet bt she denies! Geet has changed! Maan sees a differed Geet n confronts her! Geet tells him she doesn't expect anything! she has feeling 4 him bt knws! Maan has fallen 4 her bt doesn't realise! dadi hears the convo n is feeling guilty! Geet reaolves to leave Maan 4 his happiness! Happy New Year! update soon
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Part 14

Geet packed her bags while maan was in office feeling chocked with so many emotions rushing through her body. She last looked at her room oppsss there room and left went towards dadi.

Geet: dadima mein ja rahi hoon I am sorry I can't keep with this relation anymore. I am sorry for breaking your trust dadi ma. I thought I could do it but I can't. I am sory dadima mujhe kar de jiye jo paise aap ne meri behen ke liye diye the who mein aap ko wapis kar dogi.

Dadima with teary eyes: nai bete who paise aap ke the hum app ko apni bahu nai beti maan te hai toh kya hua agar aap is rishte se kush nai hai. I am sorry for forcing you bete taking advantage of your situation.

Geet: nai dadima aap ne mujhe force nai kiya tha It was my idea to do this thinking to change him seeing your trust in me but I failed.

Dadima: nai bete hum galat the ke maan change ho jaye ge and is galat femi ki wajeh se hum ne aap ki zindagi barbaad kar di.

Geet: dadima pls aise mat kahiye im leaving happily actually agar aur rahi toh shiyaad hurt ho jao gi mein im leaving with happy memories and this is new beginning of my life pls don't feel guilty of something that u didn't do.

Geet and dadima hugged cried together dadima let geet go cause she didn't want to ask her to stay more and get hurt by maan again she deserve better.

Geet arrived at her house she didn't told anything to her family she thought not to bother them tell them slowly when time comes. She felt calm arriving at her home her sister was better after operation and her brother was doing well in his studies she felt happy seeing that.

On other hand maan not in so good mood seeing no geet and all her stuff gone. He was so use to seeing her doing stuff for him now everything was changed. He was going crazy with her no presence and dadi have stopped talking with him which made him more frustrated. He tried to talk with dadima but only got silent treatment. In few days he had to goto trip out of country for a month. He went as it was needed n thought this will also help his mind relax too and away from geet.

Month passed geet family never question for not going back as geet told them she was here to stay with thim for some time as she havn't spent anytime with them. One fine day geet wasn't keeping well she lately have been looking pale n throwing up her mom was worried seeing her like that she wasn't able to digest it so they went for check up.

Doctor asked her many questions and asked about her menstrual cycle that's whn it clicked geet that she could be pregnant. So after tests confirm geet 7weeks pregnant. Geet was happy but soon truned pale thinking about maan how he didn't want to go on with relation how he regretted being with her. She was happy to carry his child but she made a decision to not bind him with this relation n this child will keep him away from finding his true love so she decided to not tell him or even dadi because she thought dadi will ask her to move back in or make pressure on maan. But she didn't know her mother already told dadi who was on cloud nine she thought to visit geet.

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Part 15

Dadima came to geet house with alots of sweets went in geets room who was resting came near geet who was just lost in her thoughts didn't see dadi coming dadi came near her kissed on her head that's when geet came out of her thought n surprised to see dadi. Hugged dadi tightly seeing her after so many days.

Dadima: bete hum bahot kush hai tahnk u for this news

Geet at first was shocked how did she know

Dadima: hume rano ne batya hai ke aap hum great grandchild dene wali hai thank u beta for this refreshing news nai toh toot rahe the hum akele pr gaye the but this news brought soo much happiness.

Geet: smiled seeing dadi so happy

Dadima started giving intruction to geet for what to do and what not to do during this time which made geet happy seeing dadi so hyper and happy. She thought not to keep dadi away from this happiness she desever it felt little guilty for trying to hide it from her. She just went hugged dadi.

Geet: who kaise hai

Dadi knew who she was talking bout: hume kya pata hai

Geet: frowned kyon aap ko toh pata hona chiye

Dadima: hum unse baat nai karte who jo chahe kare ab hume koi interest nai hai

Geet: dadima aap bhi na he is ur grandson you can't stop talking to him because of my n his relation didn't work he was nto at fault he told me before to not expect much from him.

Dadima: jo kuch bhi hai bete hum bahot hurt hai n now don't ruin my happy moment waise bhi who bussiness trip pe hai.

After spending so much time dadima went back to mansion she wanted take geet with her but she couldn't force her.

Maan came back n finnaly he have realized his feelings towards geet. It took him few weeks when he went on trip everywhere he started to imagine geet. Sometimes would shout for her to get him his fault or other belongings he started missing her. Now he came back with clear mind knowing that geet was always in his heart but his egoistic mind ddint let him accept it. He came with determine mind to get his geet back he realized her importance after she left him he know he couldn't stay without her anymore he was addicted to her presence. He thought first to pacify his dadi who was angry on him at present.

Maan talked with dadi it took him hour to make her listen to him as she wasn't even ready to listen him. Finally when he was able to make her listen he told her about his feeling and everything how wrong he done with geet while fighting with his brain n heart. He thanked dadi for choisng geet for him that he will get her back so he needs her blessing well dadi was way on top of the world that her grandson finally understood and is in love that to with her favroite geet she couldn't be more happier she thought to keep quite on geet's pregnancy she thought geet should be the one to give him that news. Dadi was at peace finaly that first her becoming Great grandma soon and second that her buddoo grandson is finnaly on right track she couldn't be anymore happier.

Dadima to maan: jaiye humari bahu ko wapis laiye jaldi se.

Recap: maan apologizing and confessing his love to geet.

NOTE: trying to finish this soon sorry if u feel like I am rushing with the story. First time I am writing I want to finish it off before I join my college back because after joining college back I wont be regular that's the reason I am rushing through the story.
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