New FF Meri Jaan Part14/15 updated 1-2-2015

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey lovelies yes I use to read FFs here still do whenever get time but now as off from school for few weeks want to write somthing that has been on my mind don't care about comments or likes because I'm not here always n busy to check each n every comment n reply back

I want to write on our Maaneet few days back I watched that movie hum aap ke DIL mein rehte hai well something similar on Maaneet n finish it off by few coming weeks as I don't want to leave it hanging in middle n leave disappear 😆 So will be updating a lot to finish it soon as I can right now I'm thinking where to start from lol just kidding.

Will update in few hours

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Characters

As u all know

MSK- little different in life but for business he is same young angry man just return from US will soon handle KC on behalf of his dadima

Dadima- savtri devi grandma of msk MD of KC will soon will retire from the post as her grandson will talk care of it as he is back to India after years of studying in US.

GH- off curse lovely our geet the only support of the family works in KC as architecture

Mother- lovely lady takes care of the house

Tito- still studing

Raji- the younger sister of geet is heart patient

Prologue

Geet sweet bubbly girl innocent beauty with brain her day starts with helping mom with some house chores n then go to office after breakfast. She works under savtri Devi the MD of KFC sweet n caring lady helped geet a lot by making geet complete her college n also continue work to support her family.

Now as KC will soon have new MD on behalf of SD(SavtriDevi) as msk is back to handle the family business he is sharp n strict when it comes to business. He is comming to office with his dadima to learn more about there company n so he can take over soon employes in KC do fear him because he is perfectionist when it comes to business. SD is little worried over his lifestyle after office he go out n party every weekend n come home late or somtimes comes home with his GF sameera who sD don't approve off when SD ask him to get married he says no as sam his gf isn't ready. SD is worried about his lifestyle if he keeps going like this he will be left alone when she passes away she does not trust that girl Sam but maan don't understand when it comes to her he just ignores it n even forget his family values because him staying in abroad for years no one there to remind him about his tradition n values. So SD have made Plan to get rid of sam first by making him get married soon as possible.

Read the story to find out what happens next

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Sorry for any mistakes as I'm posting from my iPad which likes to do spelling for me

Part 1

Geet in office maan is there as well with his dadima he have adapt everything quickly about his family business and all the contracts that r with KC. Ihe finds smallest to smallest mistake and get angry quickly that's what happen with feet he found fault in her design told her to reduce the whole design of the project as he don't like any mistakes.

Geet: baba ji bas yeh designs a unko pasnd aa jaye ek bar sari raat jag kar mehnat ki hai Meine pls raksha karna apne bachi ki. SD mam kitni sweet or yeh utna hi khados kabhi ka She went to his office n knocked on his door.

Maan: come in

Geet: sir I have got the designs ready as u have said she forward the designs to him n he looked at them kneely nd smiled at her

Maan: good that's what I want no mistakes hope I will see things this way in future so I don't have to keep picking out everyone's mistakes. You can go and continue ur work now.

geet thinking (khados kahi ka are insan hai hum San se galtiya toh ho gi hi na sab iske Jaise perfectionist thodi na hai baba ji aap new kaha fasa diya aur aur SD mam ko bhi mein hi mili thi inked under Kama Karne ke liye ) ok thank u sir.

Few days passed in the busy work n new project that maan and get both worked together for. Mans late night parties was making dadima angry n sad as well so one day she got into big fight with him over that and she fainted due to high BP but she bribed the doctor to fake reports and lie about how serious she is so he did as she said.

Dr: mr khurana dekhiye is waqt aap please apni dadima ko Kush rakhiye aur stress se free yeh inked like behtar hoga agar Zara as bhi stress ho toh inke liye who baht dangerous ho sakta hai filahal toh yeh request karoga ke aap please nine stress se dor rakhiye ab mein chalta ho

Maan came back to Dadima room who was resting with her eyes closed maan was feeling guilty that he shouldn't have argued with her because of him she is un well. After while dadima slowly opened her eyes hewas relieved to see that so he just hugged her.

Maan: dadima aap be toh mujhe Dara hi Diya tha I'm sorry dadima I shouldn't have argued with u. Mujhe aap se is Tara bata nai Karin chahiye thi. Please forgive me I'm ready to do anything for u

Dadima: toh Aaron merit baat man li jiye bte pls shadi kar lijye ab humari unar ho gai hum bas aap ki shadi dekhna chahte hai Marne se Pehle

Maan: aap ko Kuch nai oh ga dadima kyon aise Bol rahe ho aap

D: toh Phil shaadi karlo Hume even if u want to marry sameera go ahead bas aap ab shadi kar li jiye a month time I'm giving u if u want and convince Sam for it otherwise I want u to marry the girl of my choice.

Maan: ji dadima I will do as u say but I want u to accept Sam the way she is let her do whatever she wants be it if she wants to do modeling.

D: hume koi atraz nai toh fir theek hai tell me whenever u guys decide but u have only month to decide

Maan thinking: sam se toh pucho ga hi but I'm not even sure if I love her we r friends since the time I went to abroad we went to same school but we r more like friends with benfit we both Have lived together Since college days only now coming back to India we don't but still we spend time together but never thought of get married but it's better then jarring a stranger.

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Posted: 10 years ago

lovely prologue. waiting for u to continue

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Lvly pro dear cnt sun

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Part2

Maan and sam were meeting today

Sam huggi maan i missed u darling gosh its like ww barely get to see each other now its only on weekends.

Maan: if u want we can get married n stay together like before ;)

sam: hahaa veey funny but u know darling i cant get married yet i want to be establish super model.

Maan: i know u do listen my dadima js unwell she wants me to get married n wants my decision in month if the girl going to be my own choice and u know i don't go after girls ur the only one whom i have known for years n lived together we know each other n also lived as almost husband wife so i thought to ask if u want to get married n i promise nothing will change u can continue ur modeling n i and my dadima wont interfere in it.

sam: what the hell maan I'm telling u i cant n wont get married yes we have lived together like an husband wife its no big deal its modern world we grow up in US come on u cant just make me ur wife just cause we lived n slept together. We habe nothing between us we r just friends for benefit. Sorry i cant help u in this situation i have dreams which i want to fulfil n to be honest i was having time pass with u.

Maan was shocked hearing her but maintain still sam got u n left saying have good life maan maan just sat there holding his anger because he did consider her as friend n as friend he asked her first as he only trust her nit other girls but she even proved him wrong today. Maan came back home. He was in room angry at himself how could he not recognize sam as real person she just used him as she didn't had place to live he gave her place she didnt had no money or anything on her own but he gave her all that require in between they got intimate but he did care for her as friend but what she did today really made him hurt n angry. He expected something else from her but jot such harsh answwr she kinda gave him reality check.

After that he decided what he will do next day talk to his dadima about n about married with whoeverdadina selects for him

Recap: maan put condition on marriage

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Posted: 10 years ago

congrats on ur FF! awesome prologue! Fab cs! Lovely updates! Maan is Geet's boss! She is a perfectionist! Geet cribbing! Maan happy with her wrk after making her do it again! Dadi upset with his lifestyle! dadi decides 2 do something! she is ill bt takes advantage n makes doc lie! she wants home 2 get married! Maan decides 2 ask Sam! he they r friends with benefits! its better 2 marry someone u knw than a stranger! Bt Sam's answer leaves hi stunned! She was using him! Maan angry! Maan agrees with dadi bt has a condition! update soon! Waiting! well written

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Part 3

Next day at KM (Khurana Mansion) maan and dadi at breakfast table

Dadima: toh bete sam se baat ki tumne

Maan: ji dadima and also got the answer as well she just used my freindship I was just time pass for her.

Dadima: hum toh pehle se hi jan te the who ladki aisi hi hai par aap humari ek bhi nai sunte the chalo ab khud dekh liya acha hua aur ab kya decide kiya hai apne kya aap ready hai humari pasand ki hui ladki se shaadi karne ke liye.

Maan: ji dadima but I have one condition

Dadima happy: bolo bete

Maan: I want to get married but on contract for an year because in a year I want to see if I can live with person who will understand me I just don't want spend my entire life with person who I don't know well I first want to get to know the person and in year I will see if she the right person for me who I can spend my life with or if not then we will get divorce after a year.

Dadima(worried): yeh kaise ho sakta hai aap ko pata bhi hai aap kya bol rahe hai shaadi koi khel nai hai

Maan: mujhe pata hai dadima u want me to get married and I am ready its upto u now to understand me as well I will do what u said but now its u who have to decide if u want me to get married then that's my condition for to get married.

Dadima(thinking): aab mein kya karo I have to agree if I don't then again he will go back to night parties and this is the only way to stop him and he is finally agree to marry the girl of my choice. I am sure the girl I m thinking can change him in year and his thinking of marriage and life as well.

Dadima: theek hai hume yeh mazoor hai

Maan: great then u select the girl and let me know the time and date of marriage now gotta get to meeting I'm getting late bye dadima see u in evening.

Dadima smiled now her mission is to make the girl agree for the conditon as well and she knows she wont be disappointed.

Dadima also got ready to goto KC

Dadima called geet in her office as she want to discuss something important with her

Geet knocked on door May I come in ma'am

Dadima: yes bete come in sit down

Geet: ji aap ne mujhe bulya

Dadima: haan bete darsal hume app se kuch zarorri baat karni thi

Geet: ji kahiye kya baat hai

Dadima: bete hum ne socha pehle aap se puch le fir aap ke ghar walo se baat yeh hai ke im looking for girl for my maan and the only girl I think can handle him and make him learn family values and change his thinking about marriage is u so I will straight to my question will u marry my grandson.

Geet in fix: ma'am aap toh janti hi hai mere ghar mein sivay mere aur koi nai hai fiancial support ke liye abhi mein shaadi ke liye soch bhi nai sakti

Dadima: hum sab pata hai bete hum hai na sab problems take care kare ge aap ki and we wont stop u from supporting ur family infact will help u with it.

Geet: par ma'am yeh decision toh meri mom hi le sakti hai mere liye I can't

Dadima: theek hai bete hum aap ki mom se baat kare ge kal but aapko toh koi problem nai hai na shaadi karne mein

Geet: Blushed n said I will think about it and left

Dadima was thinking ek toh solve hua kal jaa kar mein geet ke family se baat karo gi agar unhe koi aitraaz na ho toh pandit ji se keh kar jaldi se jaldi shaadi ki date fix kara do gi.

Recap: geet found out about conditon