New FF Meri Jaan Part14/15 updated 1-2-2015 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

very interesting

continue soon

Thank u n will do dont worry :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on ur FF! awesome prologue! Fab cs! Lovely updates! Maan is Geet's boss! She is a perfectionist! Geet cribbing! Maan happy with her wrk after making her do it again! Dadi upset with his lifestyle! dadi decides 2 do something! she is ill bt takes advantage n makes doc lie! she wants home 2 get married! Maan decides 2 ask Sam! he they r friends with benefits! its better 2 marry someone u knw than a stranger! Bt Sam's answer leaves hi stunned! She was using him! Maan angry! Maan agrees with dadi bt has a condition! update soon! Waiting! well written

Aww thank u for the comment hope u guys r liking it its mh first time trying to write n many mistakes are happneing as i can see thanks to my I pad
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alamelu

Nice story. Glad even tho he is hurt he is not heartbroken. Wonder what geet will feel hearing about the condition.

Wait n watch :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part4


Dadima talked with geet mother who was at first little shocked with how Savtri devi the owner of KC came to ask hand of geet for her grandson maan. SD have given her time to think n tell her decision as she dont want them to forst or anything think about the propsal n give answer in all this dadima didnt mention about contract the condition maan has put as she knows geet is the giro who can win maan over n chnage him.


Geet mom was thinking about the propsal after SD left she thought about it alot n came to decision that she cant be selfish for her family her daughter have already done so much for them n now the propsal was the best her daughter could ever get so she decided to ask geet if geet was ok with it then she will be ok with n think of rejoining her teaching that she use to do before so she can be support of the damily after geet.


Geet: came home put her stuff on the table in living room area. She called ma kidar hai aap mein aa gai pls khana ready hai kya mujhe bahot bukh lagi hai aaj time nai mila break ke liye pls aap mere liye khana laga di jiye mein jaldi se fresh ho kar aati ho


Geet mom: acha laga ti ho jaldi aa ja tujhe se kuch baat karni thi


Geet came back n ate the food while eating her mom started to talk about how SD came n the preposal n asked geet if she ok if i say ok to the preposal.


geet: ma aap janti hai humari condition kya hai yess we r not poor but not rich either to live without any incom source n im the only one here working i will think about marriage only after raji heart surgery n when titto habe his own job. So aap please na keh di jiye


Mom: bete i know what ur saying right but bete hum selfish toh bhi nai ban sakte hai itna acha rishta hai itne badi ghar se hum tumhe khush dekhna chahte hai aur waise bhi tume ne bahot kuch kiya hai is ghar ke liye aur rahi baat im thinking to join my school back i will start teaching again aur rahi baat raji ke operation ki woh paise hum woh hushiyar pur wali zameen bech kar bhi karle gey aur mein teaching bhi karo gi na ise kaam chal jaye ga but mein nahi chahti ke tu humari wajeh se itna acha rishta thukraye.

Geet: thought about it woh zameen toh utni nai hai to pay of raji operation bill which will be near 10lakhs par maa mujhe she rishta thukrane nai dena chahti kya karo


Geet: maa mujhe sochne ka waqt di jiye


Recap: same as the other one sorry


Thank u guys for the wonderful comments n sorry about any mistakes first time ever writing an story not an essay lol. I mostly updating fromg ipad which makes little hard to type n make alot of mistakes so in advance sorry.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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poor geet she has so many responsibility so she cant marry now nice part waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update
waiting to know the geet's answer after knowing maan's condition
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! Awesome updates! Superbly written! Maan lays down his condition! One year contract wife! he will see thereafter! Dadi has no choice bt to agree! Dadi wants Geet as her bahu! Dadi talks to Geet! n den her mom! Bt Geet has so many responsibilities! She is nt interested in getting married! her mom tries to make her understand! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next part 5

So next day geet mom called SD n told her the decision n SD was very happy that finally she will soon having DIL in her house who is perfect in every aspect. SD decided to tell maan about her choice.

Breakfast table

Dadima: maan bete hum ne aap ke liye ek ladki select ki hai

Maan not happy but he will do what his dadima said theek hai dadima toh phir mera who conditon ke bare mein kya aap sehmat hai

Dadima: mere paas aur koi rasta bhi toh nai hai par hume pata hai jo ladki hum ne select ki hai aap use bahot passand kare ge ke aap apne condition ke bar mein bhi bhool jaye ge in no time.

Maan: acha toh aisi kaun si ladki pasand ki hai aap ne dadima kya mein us se mil sakta hoon to atleast get to know her little bit before marriage.

Dadima: off curse bete kyon nai I will let u know hwen u can after talking to the girl herself first.

Maan: toh theek hai dadima mil te hai office mein fir

Dadima: theek hai

Office

Dadima's cabin geet n dadima talking

Dadima: geet bete hume aap se koi baat karni thi zaroori

Geet: ji kahiye dadima

Dadima then told her about maans conditon of marrying first geet was shocked n kinda hurt because she thought dadima just wanted to use her as because dadima ke bahot asaan hai unper. But then dadima told her about her point of view how she thinks only geet can handle maan n change him to man who values relations n that she have trust in geet that she is the only one for maan.

Geet: dadima mujhe thora waqt dijye is time mein aap ko kuch bata nai sakti ke mein kya karo

Dadima: theek hai bete jaisa aap chahe hum aap ko force nai kare ge

Geet then left home on way home she went to gurudawara in her thoughts trying to find answers for her questions. She was seeking baba ji's help to help her make a right decision. Geet after thinking a lot finally after sitting in temple listening to kirtan she made her decision n she knew she was being selfish but she was doing it not for herself but others as well too. She took baba ji blessing and went home

Recap: geet's decision

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u guys for the comments and likes :)
sorry couldn't update earlier had bad migrane n also hit my head while sitting down in car so took rest and now updating some parts.

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