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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2

Maan - kaha ho tum mahi? Kyn chod kar chali gayi
tum muje. Main har roz ye sochkar park jata hu ki
tum muje milogi par tum kabi nai aati. Plz aa jao
mahi plz aa jao mere pass.
Maan - pata nai kyn par aaj kuch toh badalne wala hai. Woh kya hai ye main samaj nai pa raha?


IN MUMBAI AIRPORT

Geet - maa plz rona band karo sab hame ajeeb tarah se dekh rahe hai.
Rano - hadd hai ab main apni beti ke dur jane par ro kar mann bhi halka nai kar sakti.
Inder - rano tum ro kaha rahi ho tum toh puri ganga jamuna baha rahi hu.
Rano - aap toh bus chup hi rahiye. Agar aap chahte toh geet delhi jane ki jidd nai karti. Ab main usse bine dekhe kaise rahugi.
Geet - maa plz kyn aap mera jana muskil kar rahi hai. Aur delhi dur thodi hai jab aapka mann kare mujse milne aa jana ya main aa jaugi.
Inder - kitni smart beti hai meri. Chalo ab jao tumari flight ki announcement ho gayi hai. Aur pahuchte hi hame phone karna.
Geet - ji papa. Aap jyada pereshan mat hona. Meera toh hai hi delhi me mere sath. Chalo bye main chalti hu. (hug her dad and side hug her mom ) Bye maa ye melodrama chod kar toh romantic ho jau dad ke liye.
Rano - geet tuje toh main chodugi nai.
Geet (shouted) - BYE MAA AUR MERI ADVICE YAAD RAKNA.

In Delhi at khurana construction

Maan is working in his cabin and a knock came
Maan - come in.
Adi - gud morning sir.
Maan - gud morning adi. Kuch kaam tha.
Adi - ji sir, hamari jo gurgoan wali site ka inspection karna ke liye kuch govt officers aa rahe hai toh aapka jana jaruri hai.
Maan - hmmm. Tekh hai kitne baje aa rahe hai woh log?
Adi - afternoon mein aa rahe hai. Agar aap abhi jayege toh unke aane tak waha pahuch jayege.
Maan - tekh hai adi. Meri ek meeting hai mr. Shah ke sath hai uss tum postpone karwa do.
Adi - okay main abhi mr. shah se baat karleta hu.
Maan - ok den u can go now.
Kuch deer baad maan cabin se nikal ja raha hota hai aur sasha uske piche jati hai.
Sasha - MK aap kahi ja rahe hai.
Maan - ya gurgoan wali site par kyun tume kuch kaam tha.
Sasha - no mk maine toh aise hi aapko bahar jate dekha isliye puacha.
Maan (irritatedly) - agar tumara interogation ho gaya ho toh jakar apna kaam karo aur muje bhi kardo.
Sasha - sorry mk.

At Delhi airport
Geet plane landed and see cameout with a hope to find him.
Geet - dekho meet aaj tumari mahi wapis aa gayi tumse milne par pata nai tum kaha ho meet.
Suddenly maan ko aisa ehsaas hua jaise koi apna usse pukar raha hai.
At airport geet call her friend meera to enquire where is she?
Geet - hello meera, where r u dear?
Meera - hey geet, sorry yaar main nai aa payi. Muje abhi abhi clge mein ek assignment mila hai aur woh aaj hi submit karna hai. Muje tuje kafi deer se try kar rahi hu par tera phone not reachable aa raha tha.
Geet - its ok dear tum apna project karo. Hun ghar par milte hai.
Meera - par tum ghar kaise jaugi?
Geet - taxi se bus tu muje address message karde.
Meera - are u sure tum chali jaogi? ya main clge bunk karke tume lene aau.
Geet - nai koi jarurat nai tum kaam karo main aa jaugi. Ok bye see u soon.
Meera - okay main abhi address msg karti hu.
Geet taxi hire karke airport se nikal jati hai. Meanwhile maan gurgoan pahuch kar apna kaam katam karke wapis office jata hai tabhi usse sasha ka call aata hai.
Sasha - sorry mk main aapko disturb kar rahi hu bt muje abhi mr. Kapoor ka call aaya tha woh design mein kuch change karna chahte hai aur aap se baat karna chahte hai abhi video conference par.
Maan - tekh hai.
Maan ( to driver)- kaka car ko side mein park kardo muje ek video call karna hai.
Driver - ji maan baba & Park the car and went outside.
Geet also reach near her destination when the driver told dat the tyre of his taxi is punchured and he can't take her forward.
Geet - koi nai bhaiya main koi aur taxi le lugi.
Taxi driver - uski koi jarurat nai hai madam yaha se kuch dur par hi aapka address hai.
Geet - tekh hai and paid him and went out with her luggage.
After roaming for 15 min geet didn't find the address and see saw a driver standing outside a car and geet went to
him.
Geet - excuse me driver uncle sorry apko aise
disturb kiya. Kya aap muje ye address bata dege? Maine
kitni deer se dund rahi hu mil nai raha pata nai kaha chala gaya?
Maan suddenly lift his head from laptop to see
who talk just like her.
Maan flashback

Boy - kya hua kyun ro rahi ho?

Girl - mamma mil nai lahi(rahi) hai. Lagta hai woh kho gayi hai.

Boy (smiled at her) - woh kho gayi ya tum?

Girl (sobbed) - pata nai muje.

Flashback end

maan driver - jarur beta. Yaha se aage se left jakar pheli society hi hai.
Geet - thanku uncle. Main nayi hu issliye pata nai tha.

In the car maan is try to see the girl face bt see is facing her back to him. Geet went frm there when see felt a pull on her dupatta and see turn back and maan saw her face.
Geet dupatta was struck in maan's car handle. She tried hard bt can not take it out.
In car maan is stunded to see an angelic face and her attic. He had a sudden urge to go out and help her and to his own surprise he went out and take her dupatta out frm handle and face her.


PRECAP
Geet - thank u aapki iss help ke liye. Actually main yaha nai hu aur jaha muje jana h waha ka pata nai mil raha toh thoda tension ho gaya.
Maan - its ok. Kaka tume waha tak chod dege.
Geet - nai iski koi jarurat nai hai main chali jaugi aapko problem hogi.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT
Chahat
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
just...read all the parts..!!
awesome start ...dear..continue sooon...
good work..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maneet meet. in the..next part..I can't wait...n those flashbacks are intersting!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Oh Wow they finely met again ...
n precap not bad maan ab use geet k ghar ka address bhi pata chal jaye ga !
Smart move mus say!😉

waiting for the next!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
nice update geet is gong 2 delhi 2 meet his Meet😃
maan feels smthing is gong 2 change
geet is nt able 2 find d address so came near maan's car nd askd maan's driver nd maan got curious 2 c her nd finally maaneet met👍🏼
precap is nice waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u dear
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Thank u dear
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Originally posted by: swetaa100

just...read all the parts..!!
awesome start ...dear..continue sooon...
good work..!!



Thank u dear. 😊
Will update sone
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
sweet part
now both maan and geet are in same city..
geet talks reminded maan of his childhood friend..
hope they came to know about eachother soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetaa100

maneet meet. in the..next part..I can't wait...n those flashbacks are intersting!!!



Will update soon

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