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PART 8 - PAGE 31

Hey chahat!

Originally posted by: kabslocks

nice prologue, continue

Thanxs dear.
Will continue soon

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Hey chahat!

Intresting prologue. ..

My personal suggestion would be don't give a character sketch!

It would be interesting to know the characters as the story progress😉

Waiting for the first part!😃

Hi dear.
Thanxs 4 liking it.
I m also thinking same abt character sketch.
Will update soon.
And give me ur suggestion to encourage me.

intrstng prolouge waiitng 4 d update😃

Originally posted by: christipie

intrstng prolouge waiitng 4 d update😃

Thanxs dear.
Will update soon.

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice

continue soon

Thanxs dear.
Will update soon.

Part 1

MUMBAI
Ek ladki kuch bacho ke sath barish mein khel rahi thi. Aur uske maa usse andar bula rahi thi.
Rano - geet!! geet beta andar aa jao. Tum kabse barish mein khel rahi ho thand lag jayegi beta. Kabhi toh meri baat maan liya karo.
Geet - bus maa 5 min
Rano - pichle aadhe gante se tum 5 min hi kar rahi ho.
Geet - ye last 5 min bus abhi aa rahi hu.
Rano - tekh hai.
After sometime geet came inside & went to change her dress.
Rano - geet aaj khane mein kya banau aaj jo tu kahegi wahi banega.
Geet - maa kuch tekha aur chatpata banana. Aur sath mei AACHU!!
Rano - kya hua? Sardi lag gayi na. Maine kaha tha barish mein mat khelo.
Geet - maa kuch nai AACHU hua h. Kuch deer mein AACHU tekh ho AACHU jayugi.
Rano - ha muje pata hai ki tu kitna tekh hoti ho. Ruko mein abhi tumare liye adrak wali chai lekar aati hu. Aur kabardar jo yaha se uthi toh mujse bura koi nai hoga samji.
Inder - kyn meri bachi ko daant rahi hu. Waise bhi kal chali jayegi toh sabse jyada tum hi isse miss karogi.
Rano (emotionally)- tabhi toh main bol rahi hu kyn itni dur jana hai isse. Yaha ke clge mein bhi toh admission le sakti hai.
Geet - maa plz aap firse ye emotional rona mat suru karo. Muje aacha nai lagta.
Inder - ab bus bhi karo rano usse rula kar bejna hai kya?
Geet - maa aap toh janti haina ki mera dream tha waha padna tha (ST - aur kya pata muje woh bhi mil jaye jiska maine saalo se intzaar kiya hai).
Rano - phele arjun banglore chala gaya ab geet ja rahi hai. Itne bade ghar main akele kya karugi?
Geet - offo maa, aap samji nai main aur bhai aapko papa ke sath romance ka mouka de rahe hai.
With dat geet ran out of door.
Rano - geet ki bachi ruk tuje main batati hu muje romance karne ko bol rahi ho. Kaha ja rahi hai ab?
Geet - jaha roz jati hu. Jaldi aa jaugi.
At the same time in delhi, a man is sitting in the park and drown in past.

Flashback

Mahi(in complaining tone) - meet tum hamesha humse phele kaise park aa jate ho? Hum jitna bhi phele aaye phele nai aa pate. Aisa kyn
Meet - kynki muje tumse milne ki jaldi hoti hai isliye main tumara yahi intazaar karta hu.
Mahi - par fir bhi kabi toh hume phele aane do na.
Meet - tekh hai kabi aisa din bhi aayega ki tum mujse phele yaha is park mein aakar mera wait karogi.

Flashback end

Man - main aaj bhi uss din ka wait kar raha hu mahi jab tum mujse phele yaha aakar mera wait karogi.
After sometime man went towards his home where his family waiting for him with disappointment in his heart for not finding her.

In new delhi
Next morning at 5:30 am in a palace like mansion. A man is practise his tai-chi wearing only a baggy trouser. He has a perfect body and sharp feature. After dat he went to his room to take shower n ready for office. At sharp 8 he came to dinnertable for breakfast with his family.
Man - good morning everyone.
Dadi - gud morning maan bete.
Dev, Nt&vicky - gud morning bro.
Dadi - nakul breakfast serve karo.
Maan - dev kal jo meeting thi woh kaisi rahi.
Dev - aachi thi. Unhone deal sign kardi.
Dadi - dev maan kabi aap dono business ki baate chod sakte hai.
Nt - dadi ye kya kah diya aapne. Agar ye dono breakfast dinner par business ki baat na kare toh inka din pura nai hota.
Vicky - right bhabhi. Kyn dadi (wink at her)
Maan - VICKY!!!
Dadi - kya vicky, aur naintara sahi kah rahi hai. Ab woh chodo aaj evening ko ngo mein ek funtion hai aur aapko aana hai.
Maan - dadi aap toh jante ho ki main evening ko nai aa sakta kynki ( vicky at maan talk )
Vicky - kynki muje apne secret jagah par apni secret gf se milna hai.

Iss baat ko sunkar sabhi hasne lagte hai aur maan ko gussa aa jata hai.
Maan(angerly) - vicky limit mein raho warna tumare liye acha nai hai. Aur dadi main nai aa sakta.
With that maan went out for office.
Dadi - vicky aap baar baar maan ko kyn tang karte hai. Aap jante haina woh kaha jate hai fir bhi.
Vicky -kya karu dadi bro hamesha serious rahte hai toh main unka mood badalna chahta hu bus isliye. Sorry dadi aage se nai hoga.
In the car
Maan - kaha ho tum mahi? Kyn chod kar chali gayi tum muje. Main har roz ye sochkar park jata hu ki tum muje milogi par tum kabi nai aati. Plz aa jao mahi plz aa jao mere pass

PRECAP
A driver standing outside a car and geet went to him.
Geet - excuse me driver uncle sorry apko aise roka. Kya aap muje ye address bata dege? Maine kitni deer se dund rahi hu mil nai raha pata nai kaha chala gaya?
Maan suddenly lift his head from laptop to see who talk just like her.

NOTE - I KMOW THERE IS NO MAANEET IN THIS PART ITS IMPORTANT FOR STORY AND THANK U ALL WHO LIKE AND COMMENT ON MY STORY. PLZ ENCOURAGE ME WITH UR LIKES AND COMMENT.

nice start come soon with anotheer part

So geet is mahi and maan is meet lovelly update