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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulouxs update!!!Thank God Brij saved Geet and Maan saved Brij...Maan knows about Brij...precap is interesting...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb part...
Brij saved geet...
Maan saved brij...
Maan knows everything about geet and brij...
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme update..omg maan knew abt geet's lie? Waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome 👏update

Breej saved geet n then maan saved him... thank god... all r safe

Maan helped little girl😊... so nice

Geet come to know maan knew about her ... i was expecting this only as maan didn't reacted with breej-geet early convo...


Breej n dcp,vikram face off ... what about maaneet😕 ...????...




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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh wow, what updates lovely😊
maan knew abt breej. so he knew abt geet too
waiting eagerly 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet kisko budhdhu banane chali thi...he is maan singh khurana...usko sab kuch pata hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva






Part 58

Geet was sitting silently shocked, pained, shamed and everything that hurt her heart, she was cheating on her warrior and he knew it already and doesn't even say a word, or ask her anything, Geet felt like running away from there and hide somewhere, Maan saw her sitting still and knew what she would be going through, he went near her and sat close to her, making her feel his presence there, but didn't say anything,

Geet felt an shiver as she felt his closeness and she laid her head on his shoulders and Maan adjusted himself so she can be comfortable and snaked his strong arms around her and held her tight, there was an heavy silence in the area, neither Maan nor Geet said anything for a long time, after a long silence Geet got the courage to ask him "Maan you know who I am, why I am here, who send me here" Geet asked so softly, that it felt like an small murmur,

"Yes," Maan said firmly, yet kept his voice low, and made his hold strong on Geet, Giving her the courage needed, "How Long" Geet asked, "For a long time, when I found that you are my Choti Rani," Maan said making Geet tremble up, "How" Geet asked slowly trying to look at his face, Maan too looked at her pained gaze and gave a grin to make her ease up, "Did you forget who I am, MSK, Maan Singh Khurana, who has an control of everything around him," Maan said with a pride

"So that's why you were keeping me away from you, that I might so something to you," Geet asked innocently looking at him with her baby face which made Maan smile a big one, shocking Geet, "Don't be stupid Geet, I kept you away from me because you were hurting yourself, trying to save me, and I was scared of losing you forever so only, I wanted you to be safe, out of my own crazy world and stupid war going around me and that Vikram," Maan said and kissed her forehead,

"Then why didn't you tell me that, yell at me for lying to you, for cheating you, for acting before you and your family, after knowing the truth" Geet asked moving away from his hold and sitting straight and looking away in front, " why would I, what wrong did you do, Geet" Maan asked and Geet looked at him amazing, "you didn't even get an small upset nor face any pain and anger after knowing the truth," Geet asked and Maan smiled up sweetly at her and held her hand,

"After knowing the truth, I was upset, I felt a pain, not because of you, but because of us, our relationship turned complicated because of me, whatever had happened and is happening it's all because of me, my life, if I had been a good guy, you wouldn't have to come here as an spy, if I had been an employee of some firm or living a simple life, this would not have happened, My life was complicated and thus, your life too turned complicated, It's me Geet, the person to get angered on was me, me," Maan said suddenly turning angry,

"Maan please, please don't do this, please don't take up all the blame" Geet said, "Geet, I know how hard it was for you to lie to me," Maan said turning hard, "Maan when you knew everything why didn't you confront me" Geet asked holding his hand and pulling herself close to him, "Why would I, I knew what you were feeling and I didn't want to make you feel worse, and I thought you would say to me by yourself when you found who I am, when you didn't, I thought you might be thinking of something else and so only holding back, I didn't want to push you, Geet, I was scared of hurting you"

Geet looked at Maan and Held his face in her hand, "Maan you do everything keeping me in your mind, what will hurt me, what will make me happy and you understand my every reaction," Geet said, "and I don't know how or why" she continued, Maan smiled up looking at her teary gaze, " because you are my life Geet, I live only to love you" Maan said hugging her up and Geet too hugged him tight, "I Love you Maan, I love you," Geet said and Maan kissed her neck and held her tight,

"Geet, let me check on Breej and the doctor, they might need something" Maan said and stood up, and Geet too stood up and walked with him into the hospital, "Doctor, How is he now" Maan asked as he saw the doctor, "well Mr.Khurana, it's good that his wounds are not so deep and he had not other damages, and also we found some unique chemicals in his blood specifying he was using a dangerous drug" The doctor said shocking Maan and Geet, "What No he is an CID official and he can't use drugs" Geet jumped up

"Relax, Not in a bad sense but still this drug will keep a certain part of your brain memories weak, we usually give this to the people who are having constant nightmares or sleeping disorders or amnesia patients, but don't worry, I will take care of it, but I need some family members permission to undergo an full medical examination and understand his state" the doctor said, and Geet and Maan looked at each other, "I will sign" Geet said looking at Maan, "you" The doctor asked, "His sister" Geet said and the doctor nodded a ok, "ok then, I will send you the forms, please sign it" the doctor said, "And ah, the details about him should not go out, it's not good for his career," Maan said and the doctor said an yes,

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It turned night and Maan and Geet was sitting on the bed, the doctor arranged an room for them to stay at night in the hospital itself, "Geet, it's too late, lay down" Maan said and Geet nodded up and stood up and removed her dupatta and keep in the side and went and laid on the bed and Maan stood up and removed his shirt and sat beside her looking at her, and Geet too looked into his eyes as if searching for some answers, "Geet what are you looking at",

Geet sat up and looked into Maan, "Maan, I still can't see you as an bad guy, my Maan can't be like that, but still can't find an reason, but sure, there is an reason behind your acts, you are not bad, drugs, weapons, which harms people and the agents disappearances, you can't do that, you can't, not even I your dreams," Geet said and Maan's face lid up with a big grin, "but your department has proof's that I am bad" Maan said,

"Hell with the proof" Geet said and Maan smiled a bit more, "you have any proof's that I am good" Maan asked and Geet nodded an yes, "what is it" Maan asked looking at her puzzled, "what proof you have" Maan asked again, "my Baba ji, if he can turn bad than I will accept you are bad, if you are wrong than the universe is wrong, everything is wrong, I trust my Baba ji, thus I trust you too" Geet said,

"Geet, stop comparing me with the god" Maan said suddenly turning hard, "I am not comparing you with god, for me, you are the god," Geet said and Maan held her face close his in his both hand cupping her small face, "why" he whispered his hot breathe hitting her lips, "why do you love me this much" Maan asked looking into her eyes, "because you are my life, I live only to love you" Geet repeated Maan's words and Maan looked at the immense love for him in her eyes, and he pulled her close and took her lips up for a passionate kiss,

The Kiss melted up Geet and she fall back on the bed and Maan hover on top of her held her waist in one hand and her wrist in another, pinning her to the bed and the kiss continued till they suffocated for the air, Maan then pulled up and looked at Geet, who was breathing heavily, she looked too beautiful when she was breathing hard with her swollen lips and her closed eyes, Geet slowly opened her eyes and looked at Maan, who was starring at her face, Geet sudden felt shy and hide her face into his arms, and Maan hugged her up and laid back,

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In the Morning Adi came up, when Maan and Geet were sitting outside Breej's room, "Adi sir" Geet stood up as she saw him first, "Geet, Maan sir, is everything ok" Adi freaked out and Maan nodded his head an ok, and Adi turned to Geet and hugged her up, "Thank god, Maan sir said what happened to you, will never leave that Vikram alive for troubling Maan sir like this, how dare he thought of" Adi said fisting his hands as he pulled Geet from his hold and his face was burning up,

Geet for a second thought it was someone else as she never saw Adi getting angry, "Adi, we are fine, it' ok" Maan said, "but what will I do if something, and how many times I have told you not to avoid your bodyguards, then Why sir" Adi turned sad and his tears raised up, "Adi sir, the mistake was mine," Geet jumped in, "I am sorry" Geet said, "never mind, Geet, don't be sorry, you both are fine, that's enough" Adi said and Maan held his shoulders, "sir, How is Breej now" Adi asked and Maan said he is fine,

"Geet, DCP might call you if Breej was missing, and by now I knew Vikram and DCP would have known that you both are fine, and must be planning something new, and I got the information that Vikram is coming India today, and could meet up with DCP" Adi said and Geet starred at him shocked, and looked at Maan with her shocked look, "hmm, yes Geet, Adi too know everything" Maan said and Geet looked at Adi, "sorry Adi sir" Geet said feeling guilty again, "No, No Geet, why are you asking sorry all, please, forget it, I know you Geet, you are just trapped, I know even when you wished to do something you wouldn't be" Adi said and Geet smiled up,

"Maan sir, Dadi maa and Dev are worried, I told them you had extended a day more in Shimla to have some private time with Geet, they had arranged everything for your engagement day after tomorrow, so you better go home sir, I will stay back with Breej" Adi said and Maan nodded up and Maan and Geet went away to start their journey to Delhi,

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The day was shinny as the afternoon sun burned up and Maan was looking outside the window, the last two days had put him through lots of emotions, "Maan" Geet's voice made him turn around, Geet was glowing up in an white saree, "wow, Geet, you look beautiful" Maan said out loud, "Dadi maa gave this," Geet said and her face suddenly turned sad, "Maan, should we do this, I mean, Dadi maa still asking about my brother and lying to her, I don't feel good" Geet started and Maan stopped her off, "no Geet, don't feel or think of anything, I will take care of everything, trust me," Maan said,

Geet nodded an ok and Maan's mobile rang up, and it was Adi, "What" Maan screamed, as he heard Adi and Geet looked at him shocked too, "Adi, you come back immediately to Delhi," Maan said and cut the call, "what happened Maan," Geet asked worried, "Breej had gone away from the hospital without even telling anyone, he just left" Maan said and Geet got tensed, "what, why" Geet freaked out, "relax Geet, he might have thought, it's not good to be there in my care," Maan said and Geet still felt puzzled, "whatever, he will be fine, you talk to him later" Maan said,

Geet then came back to her room and called up Breej in her new mobile, but he cut the call, then she messaged him and kept on calling and started worrying as he didn't pick up the call, as of now Geet knew DCP was involved with Vikram, and it scared her, Geet feared whether Breej would fall into trouble,

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It was 10.30, the darkness screamed big at that night as Breej was climbing up the stairs when his mobile vibrated in his hands and he looked at it and knew it was Geet, he cut the call and rushed in, and stopped up as he heard Vikram yelling up, "how did they get away, everything went well, then how, then how DCP" he shouted, "That I too don't know, may be your guys are not that good as you think, they never did anything good" DCP added up,

"DCP, please, do you have anyone who could do that work, destroy Maan and Geet", Vikram shouted up, "Tell him an yes sir", Breej entered shocking DCP and Vikram, "Breej", DCP looked shocked, "yes sir, Breej, your Breej, what's going on sir" Breej asked his face pained and angered, Vikram took his gun up suddenly feeling an threat, "Vikram if I had to finish you I would have done the second I saw you, so stop playing, I don't care about you a hell," Breej said and turned to DCP

"Why Sir, Why, I had always seen you like my father, I trusted you, you were like my everything, and I can't believe that you had hid something this big from me, why, why did you hide this from me, why" Breej shouted , DCP looked at Breej and his emotions were confusing, "Breej you were so close to that Geet, so only" DCP started, "Sir my closeness with her was, she was a girl and an agent and I didn't want her to die because of that stupid MSK, so only I stopped you like that",

"And saving MSK also was for you only as I thought Vikram was into it and you wouldn't like it, if I had know that you are involved with this jerk, I would have let him die off on that day even", Breej shouted up shocking DCP, "I Thought you trust me, I thought you were thinking me as your son, but no, you didn't, you didn't trust me, you thought I would choose someone else than you," Breej said and hit the wall strong, "you remember sir, when my Dad died, when my mom, my sister and I was standing with no one to help, you took up my family in your hands"

"You were always there for me, and my family, you taught me the law, you taught me what's wrong and right, you made me who I am and you thought I would forget everything and" Breej said as his eyes turned red with tears, "Breej" DCP said as he hugged him up, "sorry Breej, I am sorry, forgive me, I trust you, I trust you with my life," DCP said, "Enough of this Drama", Vikram said aloud, "oh shut up, or else I will put an end to you now and forever" Breej yelled,

"Sir, now tell me, what you need, what I had to do" Breej asked standing straight, "great one more to increase your share," Vikram asked and Breej looked at him with his anger burning up, "what, I promise to give an 10% share to him in my each dealing," Vikram said, "and how much, you need" Vikram asked looking at Breej, "I don't want your money, I want MSK punished, one way or other, he had killed my friends, so it's my duty to kill him" Breej said anger filling up, "ok, sure, but you also had to kill Geet, she knows too much," Vikram added up,

"No problem, if DCP sir had given permission I would have done it long before," Breej said looking at DCP, "Do it soon, tomorrow Maan's Engagement" DCP said, "Have any plans Breej" Vikram asked, "MSK is so strong, to be fought with in a straight forward " Breej said and looked at Vikram, "first we have to break away his strengths" Breej said and Vikram and DCP looked at him puzzled, "his strength is his family, their trust, if it's gone," Breej said with a evil grin, "how will that happen," Vikram asked excited,

"DEV" Breej said with an evil grin, "Dev Singh Khurana, what if he throws Maan out of the family," Breej said and Vikram and DCP looked at him confused, "why would Dev do like that, he loves his brother" Vikram said confused, "Not his really Brother" Breej said shocking Vikram and DCP, "what,", Breej smiled big and looked at the shocked face, "MSK was adopted, he was never an Khurana. And this fate were known only to his family, and all stories we heard about MSK's birth was an fake one and Dev doesn't know anything about the underground works of Khurana's" Breej said, "No one knows, expect Maan,"

"Once Dev throws MSK out of out of Khurana's title ship and he turns just Maan, he will be powerless, and if we destroy him then, no one will care for him nor Dev will know anything about Khurana's underground business, he will just take over MSK's construction and other business and live happily with it," Breej said and Vikram and DCP was looking at Breej with surprise, "I am sorry Breej" Vikram went towards him and hugged him tight, "wow, I must have included you in my plans before even, if I had, now I would have been already the king of don's"

"Never mind, Better late than never, you are too good, but still how would Dev throw MSK out," Vikram asked, "All it takes is some sweet words of poison" Breej said with a smile and Vikram and DCP started laughing in happiness, "Tomorrow Maan will celebrate his engagement in the streets after Dev throws him out" Breej added making them more happy,

Precap: Vikram meeting up Dev and putting up an Drama, Maaneet's cute romance (on Tuesday, going out for the weekend, so can't update in the weekend, so only a bit long gap so everyone enjoy your weekend and have fun..)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb intense update! Well written! Maaneet talk! Maan is nt angry! Geet cannot see him taking all the blame! Maan assures her! Geet loves him n will always b der 4 him! lovely romance! Breej confronts DCP n Vikram! So Breej helping them! They gng to use Dev! I think Breej is js pretending to help them! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow.. Maaneet is so immensely in love with each other. Maan n adi knew all @ geet from so long. N nw breej confronted DCP also.
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Maan said he knows. about Geet long back after all he is MSK
Geet feeing guilty but Maan raise her guilty bcoz DCP only using her
She have full conference on Maan that he never do anything bad
Brig pretending that he is with vikram and DCP and both fell in his trap👏

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