Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 70 pg 70 thread 3

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

maan and geet becameone

but maan did not bring his bodyguards and vikram has him followed

dcp and vikram have hatched a plan to kill them both

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

awesome update dear...precap is super interesting...can't wait to read ur next update...😃

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Awesome part...But geets character sometime seems too unrealistic for an agent coz..she may not fight good due to inexperience ..but being too scary n not thinking circumstances cam never happen if she is trained to b agent...coz those r basic things an agent learns b4 anything

but loved maaneet n their romance a lot...

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

awesome update!!!

loved maaneet moments!!!!

hope they break free from this trap!!!!!!

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

superb part...

maneet moments...😳

maneet become one...

vikram trapped maneet...

what next?????

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uma

@umamaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Hi!

iam fan of this story of yours.This is my first comment of this story.awesome update,lovely maaneet movements 😳.precap is scary 😲.Eagerly w8tng 4 next update.gr8 going dear.

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maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Mission Impossible: The Don N The Diva

Part 57

Geet was looked at the silent forest around her, "something is wrong" Geet thought, "I will call Maan now" Geet thought and took her mobile as she rushed back, suddenly out of nowhere two guys jumped before her and one of them grabbed her mobile from her in a quick move, "who you are calling Dear, MSK," one guy asked as he stepped close and Geet stepped back as an fear filling her mind, and suddenly she felt an strong hands holding both her arms strong from behind and she turned back to see two more guys,

"Calling MSK ah, don't strain dear, we will help you, I will send him the message, but first I need to decide where to ask him to come and get you, right" the guy said and Geet looked at him with fear, "come on let's take her to somewhere, but where?" he asked his gang, "oh, I saw an old half burned build in the out shirt of the village and it's a bit deserted too, no one will come there, it's safe" one guy from the gang suggested, "good one," the gang's leader agreed,

Geet felt like screaming up but her mouth and throat went dry totally, and only her tears came up, after all the struggle she tried to scream but before that one strong hand covered her mouth and a strong hand held around her waist, pulling her from the ground and then another guy pulled her legs up and carried her in, Geet struggled up in their hold but they were so strong to deal with, "Maan" she called inside her mind crying up,

The gang took her to the same building where she saw her brother for the last time, the build still looked fresh and burning up before her eyes, she can still hear Ranveer's scream, and she cried up like hell, they took her in and made her sit in a chair, "who the hell are you guys, why are you doing this too me," Geet screamed at them, as her mouth turned free, "what would we know, we don't ask question to our boss, he asked us to do, and we are doing it" the Gang leader said,

"who the hell is your boss" Geet yelled again, "Vikram Singh Rathore" they said shocking Geet, " should we close her mouth" a guy asked as they tied her up, "no need, we need her to scream then only MSK can find her soon na," The Gang leader said with a grin shocking Geet, "ok guys, pour this petrol everywhere in this building and once we light it up, the whole building must burn down fully in minutes along with MSK and this girl" The guy said shocking Geet more,

"Please don't do this, please" Geet pleaded, "sorry dear, had too, come on boys," he said and everyone took one can of petrol and started spreading up all over the place, "Baba ji" Geet prayed up, and after a few minutes they came up, before Geet, "Now time to call the main Man," He said and took Geet's cell and started typing an message,

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"Look here, the injury is quite big, we need to operate her immediately, before the blood clots up," the young doctor said, "how much does it cost" the little girl's father asked crying up, "the treatment charge, tests, medicines and operation charge everything will add up to one and half lakhs" the doctor said and the guy started crying, "That much money, Baba ji, what will I do now, doctor I don't have that much amount" the guy cried up,

"Don't worry about that" Maan walked up towards them, "you start the treatment and don't worry about the money" Maan said in his strong voice, "Mr.Khurana" the Doctor saw him shock with his wide eyes open, and Maan nodded an yes, "Hello Sir, am Rahul, I had my training in KH only" he said and Maan nodded an ok, "now start the treatment" Maan said, "sure, sure," he said and went away, "remember that little girl must turn perfectly alright when she gets discharged ok," Maan said in his bossy voice, "send the bills to me" Maan ordered again,

The doctor nodded an ok and went away and Maan stood there and the little girl's father suddenly fell on Maan's legs, "ji, thank you, thank you," he said crying and Maan pulled him up, "it's ok, stop crying and be brave for your kid and your wife, if you lose your control who will keep them strong," Maan said aloud, "now don't worry your kid will be perfectly alright" Maan said, and took his card out and gave to him, "if you need anything, call me, now I need to go" Maan said,

As Maan turned and walked from there, his mobile beeped up and he took the mobile and saw it and an grin spread his face, seeing the message from Geet, "poor girl must have been turned bored without me," Maan thought and opened up the message,

"Maan, Vikram is here, he chased me and I am now hiding inside the old building in the out shirt of the village, I am so scared Maan, please come soon, he is searching for me here only, please come before he finds me, I am so scared" Maan read the message and his heart started to beat high, and his face changed tensed and he rushed from there, "I will not let anything happen to you, Geet, I am coming," Maan rushed up,

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"Boss, will he come here" one guy asked the gang leader as they were all hiding behind the building looking at the entrance, "as per Boss's words, he would definitely come for his heroine" the leader said, "have you see him before" another guy asked, "no, but I guess we will see him now, and remember as soon as he enters in, we throw the fire and get away from here, ok" the leader said and everyone nodded up,

They were all looking at the entrance and waiting for the hero entry, "Boss, look there" one guy said pointing his finger towards a guy running towards the building, "looks like he came, be ready, once he entered, we need to lid up the fire" he said and the other guys took their lighters and showed to their boss, "ready" they said, "get back, here he comes," the boss said as the guy come near, "Geet" the voice was strong and firm, and as soon as he entered in, they all lighted up their lighters and throw inside the building already coated with petrol, making the fire born up,

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"Geet" the voice was strong and Geet knew whose voice it was for sure, "Breej" she thought, "sir" Geet called up and Breej rushed towards her and suddenly found the fire spreading up, around them "What the" Breej asked, and started removing the rope tied up Geet, "Sir, it's Vikram," Geet said between their process to get her free, "I know," Breej said and pulled her from the chair and looked around,

The petrol effect was great, the fire was spread all around them pulling them in middle, "Geet, Get out" Breej shouted and Geet moved forward, the front door was burning up, actually the lower part of the building was all burning up and the one gap without the fire was an small window space on the top of the building, Breej looked at Geet, and his fear of something might happened to her made him worried, Breej then looked around to took the rope which was used to tie up Geet, Breej took the wooden chair and smashed it on the ground, breaking it up and tied the rope to it, making it strong,

Geet was staring at him and she couldn't understand his speedy act, Breej then try to throw the rope tied wood towards the window and it wasn't easy with the fire and smoke to aim, but finally it got stuck up, in the space and Breej smiled up, he pulled up to see the strength and it was strong, Breej then tied the rolled around an wooden rack and he held the other end tightly, "know rope climbing right" Breej asked and Geet nodded an yes, "then go, fast" Breej said and Geet looked at him scared, "sir, but you" Geet asked, "don't worry about me, I know to save me, you just go" Breej cried up, but Geet's heart was feeling too weak to leave him there, "for heaven sake, for Maan's sake, you are the only one who can save him, so go" Breej shouted,

His finally words gave her the courage and she nodded with tears running down her eyes and held the robe and started climbing up, she was fast in it and soon she reached the window space and sat up there and looked at Breej who was in midst of anger fire, and Breej loosed the roped he was holding, "Geet, you can't jumped from there, pull this rope up and use it to get down," Breej shouted up, "But sir, how will you" Geet trembled up, "Damn it, just do what I say, get down, now Geet, before the fire catches up" Breej yelled scared up,

Geet don't know what to do, she knew Breej will never be able to come out from there, but she too had no choice and so she started to do as Breej said, as Breej saw her climbing down, he felt and relief an looked around and try to find an way out but there wasn't any, Breej saw that the fire was closing him and sudden he saw an water bottle there, he took the water bottle and poured on his shoes and around him a bit, hoping it will keep the fire away a bit from him, and stood still, but the heat was too much to bear now and so as the smoke,

Geet jumped down and looked at the building burning high, "Sir, Sir" Geet shouted to her maximum and she can't see anything except the fire and her tears were blocking her vision too much, "Geet, Get out of here, don't try to come in, don't think brave just run away" Breej shouted as he feared Geet might come in to save him, which is hard now, "Go and Get some help, go" Breej shouted from inside, but was disturbed by the coughing because of the smoke, "what if it turns late, I will try to" Geet said scaring Breej,

"Don't you dare Geet, Get away from here, it's an promise on your Maan" Breej shouted up, as he knew this would stop her, Geet got stun for a second, she looked at the burning building as the past came before her eyes, it was the same build, her brother was burning up inside, "Get out for here, and never come back, it's an promise on your warrior" her brothers voice came up to her mind and her tears were flooding up, "Veer ji" Geet shouted to her core suddenly, and Breej too caught her voice,

"Veer ji" Geet shouted again, Breej heard her scream and looked shocked and suddenly the heat, the smoke and the fire around him and the scream felt so familiar, making him feel dizzy, Breej can feel the heat raising up and he removed his coat and jean and waited up, he had been special trained to these kinds of situation and he believe he could make it out somehow, but his mind was creating illusions, he saw an little girl and a guy, and an huge gang chasing him up, he started hearing voices and he held his head, "No, I can't give up" Breej thought to himself, and even if he takes a few steps he will straight fall in to the fire,

Breej looked up and saw the fire had already climbed up and he knew anytime the roof would burn up and fall on him and he was ready for that too, Geet was running down the path, calling for help, "Help, please, someone help" Geet was yelling out crying and she tripped up and lost her balance to fall into the strong arms of Maan, "Geet" Maan freaked out looking at her messed up and tear flowing face, "you are ok right" Maan asked worried holding her face, wiping her tears away and kissing her forehead and Geet pulled from him,

"Breej, Breej" Geet said slowly and Maan looked at her puzzled, "Breej" Maan asked, Geet had no words now, she just held Maan's arm and pulled him towards the building, and Maan got shocked up to see burning building, "Breej" Geet pointed her finger towards the building and Maan understood it, Maan pulled Geet away and rushed away from there, making Geet shocked, "Maan" Geet shouted,

Maan knew there is an valley nearby and rushed to it and jumped into it freezing water, he felt the cold water of the flowing valley to soak him up totally wet and rushed back, and Geet looked at him shocked, Maan without looking at Geet rushed inside the building, it was too much smoke and heat that he wasn't able to see anything, his wetness kept the fire away from him thought he can feel the heat, "Breej" Maan shouted up, "Breej where are you" Maan shouted up, and suddenly he stabbed on something and looked down, and got shocked to see it was Breej,

And Maan saw that Breej had tied his jean around his waist strong which was burning with fire and his leather coat around his head, "Smart guy" Maan thought and pulled the jeans and the coat from him and removed his shirt and covered Breej, rubbing the fire from his skin here and there and scooped him up in his strong arms and came out, and put him on the ground, "Breej, Breej" Maan tapped his cheeks, But Breej didn't react and Maan saw the burn wounds here and there all around his body, "Geet, he is wounded badly, we must take him to the hospital" Maan said and scooped him up again,

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"Doctor, Doctor" Maan shouted as he carried Breej inside the hospital, "Mr.Khurana" The doctor looked at him shocked, "Treat him soon, he had caught in midst of fire," Maan shouted up, and he showed the way to the room and Maan carried Breej to the room and put him on the bed, "looks like some serious wounds, Mr.Khurana, I will start the treatment right away, you go and fill the forms in the counter" the doctor said and Maan and Geet came out, and went to the counter, Geet was so worried for Breej and Crying up,

"Sir, Patient name" the nurse in the counter asked at Maan, "Breej, Breej Ranjit Singh" Maan said and Geet looked at him shocked, "he is from," The nurse asked again, "Delhi" Maan said, "His profession sir," the lady asked, "Chief Inspector, CID" Maan said and Geet was staring at him, "He knows, he" Geet looked at him shocked and walked away from there, "his blood group" the nurse asked, "I don't know," "was he under any medication," she asked again, "I don't know much about him, I just know him, not that closely" Maan said and the nurse nodded an ok,

Maan then turned around to see Geet missing besides him and walked up to find her, and he finally found her sitting on the bench outside the hospital, under a big tree, staring at the vast space before her, "he knew it, he knew it all along, he knew I was cheating, I was acting, he knew who I am and why I am here, he knew" Geet mind repeated up,

Precap: Breej, Vikram and DCP face to face (on Friday)

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jasraj123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

waiting
accidentally happened to be first😆😆

nice update
brij saved geet and then maan saved brij. thank god they all are saved and omg maan knew about brij already and
he knew about geet's lie as well😕😕😕

and nver showed it. it's getting very interesting

Edited by jasraj123 - 11 years ago

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uma

@umamaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Marvelous update 😊.

Thank god all 3 r f9.Now i feel brij gets his lost memory.

Thanxxx for 4 updtng 🤗 dear.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

hi thanks 4 da pm n intense amazing update! superbly written! All r safe! Breej saves Geet! Maan is fine as well! Maan knew abt Breej n Geet! update soon!

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