Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 70 pg 70 thread 3

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#401

part 70 B
awesome dear...
excellent...
Vikram is a fool...
and Maan shot him...
finally the evil is gone...
Maan and his family can live happily now...
very good...
they are married now...
they all are so happy now...
only good times now...
so beautifully written dear...
lovely story...

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#402

lovely ending..

thanks for pm dear..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

sorry for late commenting ...busy due to some family problems...

Coming to the update , can't believe that this story is over...loved maaneet's journey from childhood to boss-secretary & then finally husband-wife , but in all of them the true love of warrior- chhoti rani never died...I loved each & every character , be it small or big...but I will love to mention the character of dev specially which touched my heart...He had the every reason to believe vikram & blame maan , but still he blindly trusted maan...it would be better to say that he worshipped maan...I seldom love other characters beside the leads , but this character is soo cute & soo beautiful...😃...

Very excited to read ur new work...hope to read some amazing supporting characters too in that...😳

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#404

awsome ending..but iam sad that its ending cuz mi is the first suspense story that i read intrestingly...awsome story it was.i will miss it so much.plzzz bring season 2

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swpna

@swpna

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#405

nice part...loved it...

loved adi and maan..

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

such a wonderful story thank you 😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful FF! amazing story! superbly written! terrific awesome end! Maaneet married! Lovely wedding! fab songs! nice pics! All happy! Love all ur works! epilogue was nice bt u did nt say wt baby they had!

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Perfect

Each scene is exciting. Loved all the characters. Each emotion is beautifully expressed. Totally entertaining. I was glued till end.

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Gosh !!!!!!!!! Now that was just A Epic Story
filled with love , loneliness , desperation , Eagerness, Action ,Hurt , Pain
and Secrets
Every Emotion was covered beautifully the suspense was kept at all
the right places
Thank you for this Action packed yet Emotional story
I just loved it