DADI'S LAST WISH !! (completed!)

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Priyasi
waiting...

Will give first part tonight!

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

congrats on the new story

awesome intro

so whatever dadi wished for maan come true!!!!!!

and last she wished a girl for maan...

eagerly waiting for its start!!!!!

continue soon!!!!!!

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-
congrats on the new story
awesome intro
so whatever dadi wished for maan come true!!!!!!
and last she wished a girl for maan...
eagerly waiting for its start!!!!!
continue soon!!!!!!

Thank U for liking!

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: aparna3011
waiting dear

Will update at night!

Still at work!😕

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Part-1

According to dadi these relatives should leave after the rituals. ..but nothing of that sort happened! It was as if I was there guest! Its been more than a year since dadi left me ...I made sure to make myself busy..

There was a talk in the market saying what ever I touch becomes gold! Agree what ever I invested in only brought me profits but still! Come on I work hard for it!

From the past few months I was feeling more lonely! I didn't like my so called relatives. ..Though they never bothered me..but recently I started hating anything related to money!

These days wierd things started happening around me..

I still remember that day or should I say night when such a strange thing happened with me!

I was all tired at work n was trying to catch some sleep in the middle of the night I heard someone knocking my door.. at first I thought to ignore ... but then I felt what if there's something important so lazily I walked to the door... muttering curses. .

God !

People can't let me live in peace. .. muttering some curses under breath somehow managed to open the door!

Only to shut my eyes from the sharp light ahead!

Then I heard a sweet voice asking me something which I couldn't comprehend. ..

Is today ur Happy birthday??

No!

Opps! Sorry. ..

N then there was nothing when I opened my eyes! Up on thinking about it I felt may be its due to my lonely life. ..

Thinking of birthdays dadi always said about birthday wishes which come true! So thought maybe this birthday I'll try making a wish! What more weird can I come up with I thought shaking my head!

How I wish I had someone to share my birthday with!

With that thought I slept!

But then someone woke me up pushing me off the bed..wait, wait how can someone enter my room it's locked from inside. ..

May be its a thief!

Hay ! How can u call me thief??

I heard the same voice which I recognised immediately

That's what we call someone who enters a closed room.. n please for god sake off that light will u !

I definitely go blind with those lights!

Oh sorry! Its complementary for us u know!

What!

She switched off the lights thankfully making the room dark!

Now I can't see any thing

Yes coz u have to switch on the lights to see anything!

Oh yes!

As I saw her I couldn't blink my eyes. ..

OMG! Ur sohandsome!

She exclaimed. .Even before I could react!

N u r gorgeous!

She blushed! Can you believe it she actually blushed!

To be continued. ..

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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Sia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

wow first update is finally here

Geet just knocked at his door at night to ask if it was his birthday or not and went away when maan said no

wow Maan will make his birthday wish when his birthday comes

i mean really those so called relative stayed at maan's place for a year and tolerate them too

waise aacha hi hai that they stayed warna Geet kahan se aati but ek saal me dono kabhi nahi mile weird

but jab mile toh ek dusre me ghum gaye

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Sia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

wow me first one to comment on this update yeppiee

hey mujhe nahi pata maine comment kitna bura likha hai so just ignore that

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

interesting update

its not maan's dream she actually come in his room in middle of night

but who is she

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Nice part ye chakkar kya hai phele maan ke paas paise nahi the ab useke paas othne paise dat he startdc2 hate money nw geet came nd askd aby bday he said no tho sry boldiya aur gayi phir maan ne wish kiya waapas aagyi hope wo geet hi ho waitng 4 d nxt part

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Part- 2

Excuse me but who are you??

I don't know!

What! Ok leave that! How did you come in???

Through the door silly!

I saw him looking at the door strangly. . Then he turned towards me n asked another question. .. Wonder if im here to play KBC with him...

Babaji what did you land me into..

Look before you ask one more question. . I'm ur dadi's last wish!

I felt him recalling that day..

I wish babaji bless u with an angel when the right time comes. ..

Oh so she already looked for a girl for me. ..

No ! It's babaji's choice I fought back. .

Wonder why he's finding my snapping him cute.. weird create y is he gaping at me like that!

Excuse me do u even sleep with open eyes...

No! N you were saying something. ..

Ya, c even u wished to have someone with whom you can celebrate your birthday right. ..

I can c slowly he was getting scared. . Can't help it even I told babaji the same. . It won't be easy for him to digest. . Somehow made him sleep convincing him that he can ask rest of the questions in the morning! I guess he was too tired as he immediately slipped into deep sleep. ..

Across the bright shinning stars.. above all the galaxies ...above the line where the dreams meet reality existed the magical land of us..where I stay!

As I entered I could c ghere was a pleasant music playing on one side n few butterflies dancing to those tunes...

Once I reached in I found my two most favourite people watching the repeat telecast of just what happened below!

Excuse me if u r not yet done I can arrange some popcorn. .

Wow I would love one Misthi the one with lots of butter for me please. ..

Babaji! Here I'm upset n c u both are enjoying! (I Cribbed cutely)

Beta everything seems to be fine y r u worried!

Dadi asked getting suspicious. .

Look dadi ur grand son seems to be a question bank! As u have seen I'm ur last wish... which I confessed to him!

Which isn't good for him.. n top of it he so handsome I mumbled under my breath!

Misthi! Look u really don't have to worry about it he'll anyway forget everything in the morning!

Ya, as he did last time right! I asked narrowing my eyes. .

Ok so u have any other idea???