MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread-10- UPDATED Pt 77 / Pg 110/ 3rd May ........

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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





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Character Sketch



Maan Singh Khurana -- 26yrs old
A businessman , born n brought up in d cradle of happiness * lost his parents 4

yrs back but handled d business with d help of his Grand Mother who is very

precious to him * Very deciplined, rough and high headed person * have lots of

property and business in India and US * lives life on his turms * well built

,handsome and dream of every girl but he gives damn to them * loves his

classmate and settled in US.



Geet Singh Handa -- 23yrs old
A very beautiful, brilliant ,simple,sober and matured girl * an orphan , lost her

parents few yrs back * an (ECE) graduate, lived in hostel * some selfish relatives at d

name of family .



Savitri Devi
... Maan's G Mother , co-owner of KC.
Brijveer Shingh Handa
Geet's cousin

Rajji / Tito
Geet's cousins


Darji

Meera / Prem
Geet's classmates and friends .

LateYash and Ritu Khurana... Maan's parents , friends of Geet's parents.

Late Mahinder and Rano Handa... Geet's parents .

Sam(sameera)... Maan's GF.



Some others according to story...









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Index

Thread - 1




Thread - 2

Thread - 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3923812/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-3-updated-pt-22-pg-129-26th-feb


Thread - 6
Thread - 7


Thread - 8

Thread - 9


Thread - 10

Part - 70-- below


Part - 71

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4000633/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-10-updated-pt-77-pg-110-3rd-may?pn=11


Part - 72


Part - 73


Part - 74


Part - 75
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Part - 77
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for all epis
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 70


Same day in India...

Maan knew that Geet became upset after seeing this nd he was well prepared ,, not only Geet his presence in HP panicked Darji nd his rest of d family ,, Dadrji called Maan at his Haweli's number nd requested him to meet ,, Maan agreed nd Dadrji was there in few min worried nd feared ,, he never thought that Maan cd visit HP again .

Maan was all prepared to welcome him ,, Darji sat in front of him with lower head .

Maan: aap milna chahty thy , kahiye ,, waise Brij ki harkaton ko dekhty hue mujhe essa nahi karna chahiye tha ,, lekin aap Mahender uncle ke pita hei essliye unki wajha se socha ki ek baar mil lu.

Darji : Maan beta waise to ab kahane ko kuch raha nahi lekin mai purane rishton ka wasta deker kuch mangna chata hoon ,, umeed hei tum niraash nahi karoge.

Maan: kahiye, kya chahatey hei ?

Darji : Geet ke bare mei to tumhe aur Savitri ji ko pata chal hi gaya hoga ,, wo ussi raat yahan se bhaag gai thi ,, ( Maan clinched his fist at this nd greeted his jaws but kept silent for Geet) .

Maa: aur aapke honhaar bte ne usse Maar dala aur nadi mei phek diya.

Darji looked at him horrified but denied: nahi beta ye jhoot hei ,, uska to kuch pata hi nahi ,, lekin pind mei apni Izzat bachane ke liye humne logo se kaha ki wo Savitri ji ke sath chali gai America ...

Maan: jo sach nahi hei ,, khud ko bachane ke liye aapne humara estemaal kiya ,, aur aapke ladle Brij ne humare hi caretaker ko pareshan kiya aur bhagne ke liye majboor kiya ? agar mei apna muh khol du aur sabko bata du ki Geet humare sath anhi hai aur aap sab ne jhoot bola hei to aap jantey hei aapka haal kya hoga?

Darji: mai janta hu ,, aur Brij ki harkaton ke liye mei bahot sharminda hoon ,, aage essa nahi hoga . pind mei jo thodo bahot izzat rah gai hei usse hi bachane ke liye mai tumse bintee ker raha hoon ,, kisi ko matt kahana ki Geet aap logo ke sath anhi ,, ye meharbaani ker do hum per ,, waise bhi jaldi hi hum ye pind chodker Chandigarh ja rahe hei ,, bas izzat se chale jayen yahi chahaty hein ..

Maan thought for few sec nd then put a condition in front of him .

Maan: mai aapki baat ek shart per manuga ,, Dadima ko Geet aur uncle/aunty ke sabhi cheeje chahiye ,, aap logo ke liye wo koi matlab nahi rakhti ,, jab unki beti ko pyaar aur izzat nahi de sake to unki cheejon ki kya karoge ? mujhe wo sab saman chahiye ,, ek ghante ke under mei wo sab lene aa raha hu aapke ghar ,, aap mujhe wo sab de do mai apna muh band rakhunga,, manjoor?

Darji : theek hei ,,jaisa tum chaho,, bas kisi se matt kahana ki Geet aap logo ke sath nahi hei.


Maan: theek hei ,, aur apne uss Brij ko samjha ker rakhana ,, ess baar usne kuch kiya to wo jail mei hoga ,, mera ya Dadima ka ek phone kaafi hei police commissioner ko ,, fir matt kahana ki warn nahi kiya .

Darji: nahi ab wo tumhare caretaker ko tang nahi karega ,, mai chalta hoon.

Maan: theek hei ,, aur wo sab saman lene mei aa raha hoon .

Darji nodded.

Darji went nd Maan went to grab some memories for Geet ,, Adi knew many thing about Handas nd with his help Maan captured Rajji's pics to show Geet ,, Rajji helped Geet at that time nd Maan was sure that Geet missed her .

He collected many things of Geet nd her parents from Handa Haweli nd brought them in his Haweli ,, now they belong to this house not to that ,, he packed some of them in a bag nd kept rest of them in a room . He called Geet who was waiting for his call .

Maan: hi Geet .

Geet: Maan , sab theek hei na ?

Maan : haan Geet, daro nahi aur tumhe ek baat batani thi ,, aaj darji aaye thy subha ,, mujhse milne ( he described her what he said to Maan) , Geet , yahan HP mei unhone sabko yahi kayha hei ki tum Dadima ke sath ho US mei ?

Geet was shocked with this piece of news ,, to save them nd that B***** Brij they lied nd used Dadima nd Maan's name .

Maan: Geet if u want I can sent them jail in attempt of murder ,, it is very easy for me. Geet what do u want?

Geet was silent for few sec ,, Maan asked her again then she replied : nahi Maan , kuch matt kero ,, mai nahi chahati ki kal ko koi Rajji ya titto per koi ungliyan uthaya ki unke bhai ne essi giri hui harkat ki hei ,, mera wahan ab koi rishta nahi kisi se ,, tum kuch matt karo ,, aur plzz aa jao jaldi se wapas ,, Maan tum kab aa rahe ho ?

Maan: hmmm,, I think someone is missing me. ( he teased her to change her mood)

Geet: yup , Dadima is missing u nd ur KC .

Maan: aur ?

Geet: aur ?

Maan: hmmm,, aur kaun ?

Geet: Maan, thanks a lot, for Rajji's pics .

Maan: anything for u princess.

Dadima as listening all this with a smile ,, she spoke from behind lil loud so that Maan cd hear.

Dadima: Maan , aaj tumhari princess ka Bday hei .

Maan: what ? no Dadima , her Bday is after few days ,, I know her DOB.

Geet smiled nd Dadima took d phone from her nd said : Beta today is Basant -Panchmi nd Geet born on this day,, so we can celebrate her Bday on this day too.

Maan: really Dadima ,, its Gr8 ,, give her phone Dadima ,, I have to wish her.

Dadima handed phone to Geet nd Maan wished her Happy Bday ,, he said that he has a very precious gift for her so wait for him .

Geet: thanks nd i'm waiting for u Maan.

Maan sighed romantically,, bid bye nd cut d call ,, He packed his bags nd at afternoon he left for Delhi to catch d flight for US.


Precap -Geet got something precious for her ...


Part - 71

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