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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

20 ka page pe kya hai


😆😆 nothing ,,, but pahale batana padta hei.. warna space hi nahi milta,, pg udd jatey hei..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

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😆😆 aaj ghanti nahi bajegi pir bhi laal ho rahi ho..😉
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sab aagaye hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

bola tha pahale hi...
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😃 accha tha ,, tum sunao,,, family outing kaisi rahi...??



film ticket nahi mili... tho ek 6D film of 10 min ... wo dekha

then KFC mein gaye... mein veg burger .. hubby patha nahi kya kya khaaya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 nothing ,,, but pahale batana padta hei.. warna space hi nahi milta,, pg udd jatey hei..😆😆

ab tho ud bhi gaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







part - 72

A press conference was called by Dadima nd Maan on Monday mrng ,, Dadima nd Geet suspected d civil engg nd that was enough for him ,, he talked to Manish nd ordered him to make a check of 6 mhts salary as per d Co rule nd fired that CE without notice ,, he addressed d PC nd openly blamed d rivals( without taking their name) for creating prob in his work ,, Maan arranged d direct link of PC at all his offices nd sites so that all d employees cd watch him . ( a part of his speech for his employees nd labours)

Maan: ppl tried to disturb my site's work nd employees ,, d person from top to bottom ,, from officer to labour r d important part of KC ,, they r d pillars of KC ,, if anybody felt any prob they cd come directly to me ,, they r working for me nd i'm ready to do anything for their well being * KC believe in honesty nd hard work ,, we r here bcoz of our hard work ,, I trust in KC's manpower nd request them to trust me.

Every single person of KC was impressed with his words ,, his PC was shown on news nd business channel ,, d jury members knew that these things happened in corporate world nd some ppl tried to create porb in others work for their benefits nd name * after four days Maan got d Best young entrepreneur award in a grand ceremony ,, RM was feeling insulted , his name was on 2nd place ,, Dadima was with Maan ,, today their hard work paid ,, Maan wanted Geet to accompany them but she refused .

Dadima ordered Manish to organize a party for Maan nd declared one month bonus for all . It was a big day for all * All well known businessmen wr invited * now Maan was adamant to take Geet with him nd Geet was denying ,, she excused that she wd go with him separately but He was nowhere to listen her .

Maan: Geet I don't want any excuse u r coming nd that is final otherwise party cancel .

Geet: Maan u know d reason then why r u forcing me again?

Maan: ku , when me nd Dadima r with u then why this fear ? Dadima aap kuch kaho na esse ?

Dadima: Geet beta he is right ,, ku darti ho , hum hei na .

Geet: mujhse nahi hoga .

Maan angrily: to party bhi nahi hogi ,, jab tumhare liye unknown ppl value rakhty hei to kya jaroorat thi mere liye etna sab kerne ki ? Dadima Manish ko phone karo aur cancel karo party ,, nahi chahiye mujhe koi party . he got up nd rushed out from dining hall in anger leaving his meal in mid.

Dadima looked helplessly at Geet ,, she was in a fix ,, Geet felt bad but d one thing stuck in her mind that if ppl saw her with Maan they thought nd accused her that she had trapped him .

That night Maan left for FH in his anger ,, he left a msg for Dadima that he is going to FH nd cancel d party saying i'm out of country ,, Dadima tried to call him but he didn't take d call ,, she was very worried now ,, there wr only two days for party nd everything was set ,, night passed in anxiety ,, next day morng Geet went for her classes but Maan didn't come back nd didn't take any call ,, Manish was calling Dadima asking about MK coz he was not picking office calls also,, Dadima was helpless ,, what to do ? Geet came in afternoon nd find Dadima, N&S worried .

Geet: Dadima kya hua ? aap sab etne pareshan ku ho ?

Dadima sighed ,,nodded in a no but didn't say anything ,, Geet asked Nakul ,, she sat near Dadima nd held her hands ,, she was looking very disturbed .

N: Ma'am wo Maan sir gusse mei kal raat FH chale gaye aur kisi ka phone bhi nahi utha rahe hai ..?? Na office ka na Dadima ka .

Geet: kya ,, per ku ,, Dadima aapne mujhe bataya ku nahi ?

Dadima sighed : kya batatey beta . samajh nahi aa raha kya karen ?

Geet called Maan but he didn't take d call ,, she tried many timed but he didn't reply .

Geet: Nakul bahiya aapko pacca pata hei wo FH mei hei ?

N: ji ,, land line per phone kiya tha aur caretaker ne bataya ki wo wahin hai aur kaffi gusse mei hei .

Geet understood why he was angry nd doing all this ? but he was away nd not ready to talk ,, she looked at disheartened Dadima .

Geet: Dadima ,aap esse pareshaan matt ho ,, wo meri wajha se naraz hoker gaye hei aur mai hi mana ker wapas laungi ,, aap khud ko sambhalo ,, Geet patted her hand with hers nd got up ,, she called d driver to take out her car .

Dadima: Geet aap rahane do beta ,, wo aa jayenge .

Geet: nahi Dadima,, mujhe jane do ,, aur mujhse baat kerty rahana ,, Maan ka phone aaye to bata dena .

She took her bag nd rushed out instructing N&S to take care of Dadima ,, next min Geet was on d way to FH . There in FH Maan was in a very foul mood ,, he was spending his time in exercises nd tai-chi pouring out his anger,, he was ready to accept everything for her but she was not ready to face d reality nd hiding herself cowardly ,, giving importance to crap ppl nd strengthening their evil plans to tarnish her image ,, he wanted to support her but she was shunning .


Geet nd Dadima was trying to contact Maan but d situation was same ,, when Geet was near her destination it started raining ,, it was a Bay area nd rain was unexpected here ,, Geet reached at FH after one nd half hr nd informed Dadima ,, she entered d FH, sent d driver to inform Maan nd waited in d lawn ,, she too was upset on Maan's negligence .


Precap - a night in FH ... 😳

Part - 73



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

ab tho ud bhi gaya



😆beech mein lakshu aagayi hai veg burger leke
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Posted: 11 years ago
20 udd gaya tho update cancel kya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

sab chup kyun hogaye ho


page udd rahe hai na iss liye 😆😆

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