MG~ SS~The Torment --Thread 4-UPDATED Pt 29/Pg103/5th Mar. ... ... .

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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





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Character Sketch



Maan Singh Khurana -- 26yrs old
A businessman , born n brought up in d cradle of happiness * lost his parents 4

yrs back but handled d business with d help of his Grand Mother who is very

precious to him * Very deciplined, rough and high headed person * have lots of

property and business in India and US * lives life on his turms * well built

,handsome and dream of every girl but he gives damn to them * loves his

classmate and settled in US.



Geet Singh Handa -- 23yrs old
A very beautiful, brilliant ,simple,sober and matured girl * an orphan , lost her

parents few yrs back * an (ECE) graduate, lived in hostel * some selfish relatives at d

name of family .



Savitri Devi
... Maan's G Mother , co-owner of KC.
Brijveer Shingh Handa
Geet's cousin

Rajji / Tito
Geet's cousins


Darji

Meera / Prem
Geet's classmates and friends .

LateYash and Ritu Khurana... Maan's parents , friends of Geet's parents.

Late Mahinder and Rano Handa... Geet's parents .

Sam(sameera)... Maan's GF.



Some others according to story...




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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 23


For beautiful eyes ..look for d good for others .

For d beautiful lips ..speak only words of kindness.

And for poise .. walk with d knowledge that u r never alone.


Now it was Maan's routine to help her after finishing his works * it was 3rd day and had to take her to hospital * Maan reminded her and Dadima * Dadima helped her in getting ready .


Dr checked her wounds, changed her bandages and temp plaster * her wounds were healing and Dr called them after 3 more days for hard plaster * Geet again asked for her leg's movement and Dr repeated his same reply .. at least after 1 week of hard plaster with some support * half-heartedly she came back with Maan in KV again * all these things wr becoming very difficult to bear ,,, she was bounded to bed in a room surrounded with unwanted ppl and her expressions wr hurting Maan ,, he knew she is not happy with all this but he and Dadima wr happy to have her close to them * both reached KV and Maan settled peevish Geet in d bed * Dadima came there with juice for Geet and Nakul brought coffee for Maan and her * Geet was in a foul mood and didn't take d juice glass she turned her back and lie-down crying over her miseries * Maan and Dadima became worried for her ,, both wr in a very odd situation * d fissured relation between them blocking all d ways .


The girl who was suppose to be a part of d family was here but in which situation ?


Dadima left from there with wet eyes and Maan was cursing himself for giving pains to them * he came near Geet ,, sat near her on d edge of bed ,,, his heart ached seeing d trail of tears from her eyes .


Maan: Geet , why r u hurting ur self ? u can pour out ur anger on me ,, i'm here to bear anything * if u r not happy with my presence and help then I'll arrange some one else for ur help * Geet , will u be comfortable with a stranger?

Nafrat ka hi sahi lekin ek rishta to hei humare beech jo hume pecchle kai mehino se jode hue hei ,,, Geet jo ho gaya wo badal to nahi sakta fir ku khud ko takleef de rahi ho ? Geet esse apne Babaji ka hi ek faisla samajh ker sahan ker lo * Plzz Geet , esse khud ko dukh matt do ,, mere gunah ka bojh pahale hi bahot hei usse aur matt badhao .

Geet felt his pain in those words * he was really repenting for his misdeeds otherwise d person who became selfish and lied now pleading to her and helping her bearing her hatred * she was witnessing his caring side and he was true at his place at least she knew him and his Dadima * she didn't feel any discomfort when he lift her in his arms and held her *she didn't know why his closeness giving her a sense of protection * she realized that a nurse can't lift her and it's a matter of few days after that she could walk . He is much better than a stranger . She sniffed , wiped her tears and tried to sit on bed * Maan at once held her from waist and helped her * she glanced at his dull face * Maan placed d pillows behind her back to give her comfortable support * he heard her weak voice ... Thankyou .

Maan looked at her stunned ... She is thanking him !!!

Geet: Thanks a lot MK ,, u and ur Dadima r doing a lot for me .

He came in sense listening her next set of words ,,, he don't deserve this word .

Maan: Geet, plz mujhe thanks matt kaho * mai eske layak nahi hoon .

Geet : it's OK MK , I was very disturbed and frustrated so behaved very immature and over look ur and ur Dadima's care * I hurt that elderly lady . I'm sorry and thanks ,, i'll try to cop up .

Maan: no Geet , don't say sorry plzz , we deserve this and u r not immature ,, u r very sensible , very matured and understanding * plz let us help u ,, n don't hurt urself .

Geet nodded and gave a dimpled smile to him ,,, he beamed

Maan: thanku so much ,,, juice pee lo na ab .

Geet: no , I want coffee.

Maan: OK , coffee , mai leker aata hoon.

He left from there with a zeal ,,, her lil smile sooth his all pains and a sweet smile crept on his lips . He entered in d kitchen and said that today he'll make d coffee * Dadima who was there and instructing Nakul for lunch was shocked .. Maan coffee banayenge !!!

Nakul looked at him with dropped jaw ... Chote Saab coffee banayenge !!!

Maan: Dadima , Geet wants coffee and I'll prepare that for her .

Dadima sensed his happiness and guessed that Geet gave some positive response ,, she too felt relieved .

After a long bitterness this lil gesture of co operation from Geet was enough for Maan * though he was a very reserved person but for her he was ready to do anything * he decided to spent more and more time with her bcoz she was stuck to bed and feeling bore * d lose was big and he can't cover up d damage but Maan was determined to erase all her pain and insecurity .


In India Adi was formulating Maan's plan and trap a guy of Brij gang who inwardly wanted his authority in d gang but he and few remained mum bcoz Brij was rich and they have owned lots of properties of Mahinder's share and Khuranas * this was a good opportunity for that guy and his family to improve their economical condition and who in this world doesn't want a money vending machine * d guy was a crime partner of Brij and knew all his secrets * After setting everything Adi informed Maan .


Maan talk to that guy and his father about d lease deed of land in a very professional manner * that farmer family knew SD and Yash Singh Khurana's status and their rift with Handas.

This was a big insult for Darji and Brij and they wr fuming with anger knowing this fact that a small farmer was taking care of Khurana's farms which they wr dreaming to grab. Brij was in a tough situation coz if he goes against that farmer and that guy then he'll dig Brij's grave disclosing all his crime. A single mistake from Brij side and Maan will play his game ..."Live by the sword, die by the sword"


Precap --- Geet became sentie...


Part - 24
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congratulations... 😊

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Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

congrats for the new thread
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aarre waah, dekho babbie., motu apke nw thread pr congrats wish krne aaya hai...😆
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Lakshu,priya,lily, dona,mauaa,indu,rashmi,jeev,mona and sona...Jhappiieesss..🤗


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