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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





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Character Sketch



Maan Singh Khurana -- 26yrs old
A businessman , born n brought up in d cradle of happiness * lost his parents 4

yrs back but handled d business with d help of his Grand Mother who is very

precious to him * Very deciplined, rough and high headed person * have lots of

property and business in India and US * lives life on his turms * well built

,handsome and dream of every girl but he gives damn to them * loves his

classmate and settled in US.



Geet Singh Handa -- 23yrs old
A very beautiful, brilliant ,simple,sober and matured girl * an orphan , lost her

parents few yrs back * an (ECE) graduate, lived in hostel * some selfish relatives at d

name of family .



Savitri Devi
... Maan's G Mother , co-owner of KC.
Brijveer Shingh Handa
Geet's cousin

Rajji / Tito
Geet's cousins


Darji

Meera / Prem
Geet's classmates and friends .

LateYash and Ritu Khurana... Maan's parents , friends of Geet's parents.

Late Mahinder and Rano Handa... Geet's parents .

Sam(sameera)... Maan's GF.



Some others according to story...





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Index

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Thread - 2

Thread - 3

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Thread - 8
Thread - 9

Part - 65

Part - 66

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Part - 68


Thread - 10
Part - 70...


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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 65

Next day was Sunday ,, Geet nd Dadima went out for weekly shopping ,, Geet's classes wr going to start from Mon so she tried to give full company to Dadima ,, Maan called Dadima nd talk to both ,, d day was very perfect for all ,, Geet slept in Dadima's room .

Next morning Geet got ready for college nd came to dining hall but find Dadima worried ,, she was talking to someone on phone ,, Geet sat there quietly ,, Geet got d clue that she was talking to some broker regarding KC's shares ,, after few min Dadima cut d call saying that she'll find some solution in an hr,, she had sweat beads on her forehead ,, Geet sensed that there is something serious matter,, she got up nd made Dadima to have water ,, Geet held Dadima's hand nd caressed that to console her

Geet: what happened Dadima ? why r u so worried ?

Dadima looked at Geet worried nd said: Geet Maan is not here nd someone is selling KC's shares on very low prize nd rumored that KC is on lose track ,,this man is a very old nd trusted share broker ,, he knew Yash nd after him still working for us very honestly ,, someone contact him to sell KC's shares on very low prized nd conditioned that not to sell any person related to Khurana * he tried to asked d reason bcoz sometime Co purchased their shares from market for security but he didn't mentioned d reason ,, we have only one hr boz share market is going to open after 2 hrs ,, we can't use any well known KC staff ,, everybody knew them .

Geet: who is that person nd why he is doing this type of conspiracy against KC ?

Dadima: Geet in same business many have grudges nd competition ,, in last few months KC got some big projects . MK's name is on d top of best young entrepreneur award list ,, we r sure that Maan wd get this .

Geet: Oh!! It means someone is doing this deliberately to damage KC's name.

Dadima: I have d same doubt bcoz there r only two weeks for d award function nd any lil negative thing effect Maan's name ,, I can't say this Maan also ,, he became tense there ,, don't know what to do ? My child's hard work wd go in drain * I have very limited time.

Dadima was on d edge of crying , though she run KC after YSK's death with Maan but Maan was new , very young nd disturbed that time ,, he was in college that time ,, they faces many loses that time but slowly with d help of Dadima nd his hard work he again got d same position ,, now he was going to get d reward of his hard work but some business rival trying to pull his leg .

Geet thought for few min ,, checked her account balance on net nd then decided something .

Geet: Dadima do have any idea about d amount of shares nd is that broker is ready to keep everything secret ?

Dadima told her d amount which was not so big bcoz d person was doing this to damage KC's repo not for profit ,, nd broker was trusted .

Geet: Dadima call d broker nd fix my meeting with him nd do as I said ,, Geet narrated everything to Dadima nd she agreed with Geet's plan ,, she called d broker at once nd told him ,, he agreed but put a condition that d seller wanted to meet d buyer at d time of deal ,, Geet signaled Dadima to go ,, d broker got Geet's number from Dadima nd told that now he directly contact to GS nd informed her after fixing d meeting in few min.

In between Geet run her mind ,, she knew d seller was playing smart so she has to be very careful regarding her identity ,, he'll deffo spying her so she set her board to play ,, she called Arjun nd pJ requested them to reply d call regarding her nd told him/her that they knew Geet nd she worked in d company for some days nd she is a student who lives in Uni hostel. Everything was set from this side ,, Geet decided to spend whole day in college nd opt cab to go out .

After half an hr d broker informed her about her meeting with d seller in his office ,, Geet took all d things along with her checkbook nd rushed out to go to meet d person ,, she was on time nd d recp brought her to d broker's office ,, where she saw a couple who was already there ,, Geet wished d broker nd he introduced her to d other party . Geet saw that d man was scanning her from top to toe nd there was a tint of lust in his look.

Broker: Ms GS meet mr Rahul Mehta who wanted to sell his part of shares .

GS: hi mr Mehta ,, nice to see u . Geet forwarded her hand to shake giving a look to d girl who was sitting next to him ,, a very beautiful extra mod girl .

RM : hi ms GS ,, so u want to purchase d KC's shares. He took her hand with a smile ,, pressed that lil tight nd rubbed his thumb on her hand ,, Geet pulled back her hand giving him a fake smile ,, she has to bear this jerk's nonsense for her benefit ,, she settled on a chair cursing him inwardly ,, d girl who was with him saw his action nd looked at him nd Geet annoyingly.


GS: I think u put ur shares in d market to sell so anyone is free to buy .

RM: why do u want to buy these shares ?

GS: Mr Mehta gen d business of selling nd purchasing of shares handled by brokers nd now a days we cd do on line but u r d 1st person who wanted to meet d buyer so here I am ,, d thing why I'm interested in KC's shares so I want to tell u that KC is a big firm nd if i'm getting its shares in very low rate nd that is in my budget so i'm doing so , simple.

RM: who told u KC is a big co ,, there r many .

GS: business market shows that .

RM: but with this low rate of shares KC came down nd ur money cd go waste .

GS: share marketing is like a gambling nd it depends on luck ,, nd most importantly I want KC's share nd I was trying to get from many days but d rate wr very high nd out of my reach but now I'm comfortable to buy that .

RM: ms I have 15% of KC's shares nd I have a condition before giving it to anyone ,, if u agreed only then I sell u my shares.

GS: nd what is that ?

RM : if u don't mind I want to talk to u separately .


Precap - a crook deal ...


Part - 66

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congrats babie
kya sahi time par entry maari maine😆
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Congrats for the new thread👏
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yeh dekho lakshu phirse gayab hogayi hai
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Originally posted by: priya111111

yeh dekho lakshu phirse gayab hogayi hai


😆😆 jaldi se update deker aati hu..😛 tab tak lakshu ko dhoondo..😆
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