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Posted: 11 years ago
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painful update...both are misunderstanding each other...😭...I pressed the like button many times , but it is showing error posting again & again...maybe my net connection has slowed down as I am downloading castle tv show torrent download...sorry for that...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I downloaded the link of the update again & this time like button is working...😃
















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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh no one more misunderstanding between maaneet :(

maan thinking geet married someone else & geet thinking maan had a daughter nw ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The lost song

Chapter 5


Geet relaxed after a few minute and Jay was silently standing near her, "Jay, I can't be here, let's go from here, I can't" Geet said finally, "ok Geet, your wish, but before that, I want you to talk to Maan," Jay said and Geet looked at him shocked, "Geet, five years you didn't go in front of him, or spoke to him, thinking that you will hurt him more, but what about you Geet, these five year you were living with an burden in your heart,"

"Jay I can't, he is married and he forget me and he is living a happy life, I can't go before him," Geet said turning around, "Right, he is happy now, with wife and kids so, so what Geet, if he can move on and be happy, why can't you," Jay asked and he turned her to face him, "Look Geet, if he had let it go, then there is no meaning for you to hold on, you have to let it go and you can't until you speak your heart to him,"

"Let him yell, shout, but pour everything before him from your heart, then if he accepts it or not, whether he believes it or not, It's another thing, atleast you would be free, it's like an god given chance of bring him before you and so use it well dear, after that you don't have to go before him, please Geet you don't have to live with it anymore, just go explain, argue, yell, do whatever you want and come back, please," Jay pleaded,

Geet too thought about it and finally shook her head, and gave her bag to Jay, "wait here, I will be back," Geet said and went inside her office, Geet went inside the lift, "I want to explain everything," her mind thought, "I want to see him," her heart thought, Geet walked inside the office and as she stepped close to his cabin, her heart started to beat high. "I can't do it," She thought but she got hold of her and knocked on the door,

"Come in," the very familiar bossy voice come up, Geet knew what kind of welcoming she would be getting, yet she stepped in holding her heart in her hand, as soon as Geet entered, Maan stood up and came towards her, but giving a few distance he stopped, he was waiting for this moment for an long time, he planned to held her close and ask her why she did everything to him, he planned to yell, shout, even slap her hard, because he was sure that she would be his own, when he meets her again,

He thought he would do that with a feel that it's his Geet, and he have the right on her, but now, he closed his eyes and turned around, She is not mine anymore, Maan thought, "What do you want," Maan asked without turning around, "Maan," her sweet voice hit his heart making it painful happy and he closed his eyes tight, "Get out of here Geet, before I do something," Maan said without turning towards her,

"I don't care what you do, I had been living with it for Five years and I can't anymore, so listen to me," Geet pleaded, "listen to you, listen to you," Maan anger busted out and he turned and gripped her arms, giving her pain, "Once I listened to you Geet and for that, I lost my brother, I wouldn't do the same mistake twice, Geet" Maan said and Suddenly he saw the Mangalsutra in her neck and let her off and turned away,

"Day and Night, my mistake of believing you is haunting me Geet," Maan said and turned around to see her tear packed eyes, "the lies hidden in those eyes, in that heart which I worshipped, had ripped my soul apart Geet, now what, what explanation will bring Dev back to me, ah, what explain will bring Meera back to me," Maan shouted and Geet looked shocked, "Meera, what happened to Meera,"

Maan looking at Geet, "Not everyone's love is faked Geet, she loved Dev and for that, she lost her life as she can't live without him, she committed suicide," Maan said and Geet stood there her tears flowing down, Meera was her friend, more than a friend, Seeing Geet crying his anger raised up, "Now, for whom you are faking Geet, for whom, no one's here to see your drama, or believe it" Maan said with a anger combined with pain,

"Maan, please, please, yes, I did an mistake once, that too without any knowledge of what I am doing, and I confronted too, after that whatever happened had no connection with me Maan, I am innocent, I had nothing to do with Dev's murder, trust me, I know I lost my place in your life atleast forgive me" Geet pleaded, "I too liked Dev, he was my friend and Meera was like my sister and you think," Geet said and Maan gave an sadistic grin,

"Sister, friend, Love, family, do you ever know the meaning of those words Geet, and do you know how much it will pain to lose those relationship, betrayed by your true love," Maan asked looking at her with his anger filled red eyes, "And do you know, how much it will pain to be doubted by your true love, to lose your true love for something you didn't do," Geet asked and Maan waved his hands off,

"Enough Geet, You seems to enjoy your life without me, then why did you come back, to give me more pain, what more do you want to destroy in my life, what more do you want to take away, the only thing left is, my soulless life, do you want to take that too, but please if so, say it straight but do back stab me again" Maan said, his words tearing her heart apart, "so please leave from here Geet,"

"Maan, please, believe me, how will I make you believe, yes I was fooled by Vikram and Breej once, but after that what happened was beyond my control, Believe me Maan, how will I even think to hurt you, I loved you with my life, you are my everything, I just want to make you happy," Geet cried and Maan looked at her his anger raising again, "Enough, I have no space for drama's anymore, so now what, you came here to prove yourself and make my life an happy one,"

"That you are going to work for me, and turn my hell burning life to an wonderful life again," Maan asked with a sadistic grin, "Yes," Geet said immediately without even thinking and Maan looked at her shocked, Geet was shocked by her own reply, "Yes, I am gonna prove my innocence and make you feel for doubting and hurting me like this Mr. Maan Khurana," Geet said wiping her tears up, and Suddenly it was the Geet who was hiding inside an hard shell for five years speaking up, may be Maan's presence made her alive,

"Can you accept it," Geet asked now with a smiled in her worn out face, "Ok" Maan said looking at her, "OK, let me see how well your acting will be this time because this time I am not going to be fooled by your fakeness Geet, and I am warning you, I will be paying back for the pains you gave me," Maan said and Geet smiled up, "Let's see Mr. Khurana, and you don't have to be fooled, because you are already an fool, can't see the truth standing right before you," Geet said provoking Maan's anger,

"Geet," Maan's anger raised as he caught her waist and pulled her closed to him, pressing her hard to his body, as an practice of their pervious arguments and pressed her waist more, killing the little space between them, and looked at her face, with was just an inches from his, and Geet too looked at his anger filled face, suddenly they both felt the raising heat and tension within them, Maan pushed her away immediately and turned around and so as Geet,

"Good luck Maan, I mean Boss, get ready to be proved wrong," Geet said and Maan grin, "you too get ready to act, hope you got some nice acting classes these years," Maan said and Geet went away and Maan turned as Geet closed the door behind him, "Damn, what have I done, I accept her in this job, what am I thinking, she is married now, what difference will it make if she proves her innocence or not, the damages are done already,"

Maan wondered why he accepted her for this job, but only his heart knows the reason, that he doesn't want to lose Geet now, whatever may had happened, he wasn't ready to lose her from his sight now, Maan went and sat in his chair and looked up, Geet run down and she was not crying but her heart was filled with an confidence, "I will prove him," she thought and stopped, "why should I proved myself to him,"

"He is married, and has a kid, and why in the hell do I have to prove myself to him, when I have not space in his life anymore, Baba ji, what have I done, why did I speak like that, instead of convincing him, I challenged him, Oh my god, what have I done," Geet thought as she walked towards Jay who was waiting for her, he looked at Geet confused as he was thinking something as she walked towards him,

"Geet, what happened," Jay asked, "I, I, will work here, I had challenged Maan that I will work with him to prove myself, that I am innocent," Geet said shocking Jay, "What, why, I mean how," Jay asked surprised, "O, I explained him everything but he is not ready to hear me, I know I did a mistake but I confronted it and that's over, but after that, all I did was love him with my heart and soul,"

"But he, in one second he forgot everything and called my love a fake one and thought I was responsible for everything and throw me out of his life, just like that, and still he is thinking that I did those things, no Jay, it's not right, how could he, I mean how could he do that to me, it's enough, I will prove him that I don't have any connection with those things and making him feel for losing me," Geet said in a determined tone,

"But how," Jay asked looking at Geet, "By my love, my love for him will do that for me, and make him feel how wrong he was and how big the mistake was to throw me out of his life," Geet said with a spirit which Jay didn't see for a long time, "Magic of MSK" he said with a grin and Geet looked at him puzzled,

"I had been doing many things to make you, you, my old bouncing, roaring Geet, for five years but it didn't work, but just on small talk with MSK and you are back out roaring," Jay said and Geet scorned at him, and grabbed her bag and walked towards the office, "Guess, that means, I can go, Good luck Geet, call me, and take care," Jay shouted from behind and Get turned and waved at him with a smile,

After five years, Geet was feeling suddenly Alive, so alive, she rushed up to her cabin, Maan was in his cabin and Geet was in hers, when the phone rang up and Geet took it up, "Hello, can I speak to Maan sir, it's urgent and his mobile is switched off," An old familiar voice spoke, giving Geet tears, "Adi sir," Geet said slowly, "Geet," Adi too recognized her voice immediately,

"Geet, is that you, really," Adi's voice screamed from the opposite side, "yes" Geet said slowly, "But how, I mean," Adi was shocked and surprised, "It's an long story," Geet said, "ok, Is Maan sir there," Adi asked suddenly getting into work, and Geet looked at his cabin and saw Maan walking out of his cabin, "Adi sir, I think he is gone for an meeting with the ministry now, any Message," Geet asked,

"Yes, tell him, me and Pinky are coming tomorrow to Mumbai, to join the team there," Adi said and Geet smiled big, "Really," Geet smiled big, "yes really," Adi said, and when we come there we will have an detail talk, I have so many questions for you," Adi said a bit seriously, "Adi sir, I will answer, for whatever you wanted to hear, I am so happy and will be waiting for you," Geet said feeling so happy,

And Adi cut the call, Geet sat there and was feeling so relaxed, that she is back into her own life after five years, Adi Sir, Pinky, the thought gave her their old and good times, which they spend together with smile and laughter,

Precap: Truth about Maan and Sana Revealed,
Edited by Crazy_For_MSK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...precap is interesting...btw it is ch 5 dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update !!

what's the mystry of dev's murder & why maan holds geet responsible for this ..will be waiting to knw tht ..

good tht geet changed her decision of leaving & challenged maan to prove her innocence to him ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
geet challenge maan
he accept her challenge
precap nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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GEET WENT TO CLARIFY THINGS WITH MAAN BUT HIS ATTITUDE WOKE THE SLEEPING SHERNI IN HER AND SHE CHALLENGED HIM TO PROVE HER INNOCENCE

AT LAST SHE IS ALIVE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey totally love it
waiting for next parts
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for the next part...

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