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Posted: 11 years ago
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so Geet will be again working for Maan as his secretary...

dev is killed...by whom...why he was killed...

and how did Geet find job here when she didn't applied any...is it Jay's plan...

yaar u have created so many confusions in the beginning only and I am not enjoying it...it seems like a maze...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
nice update
waiting for maaneet's meeting!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itna confusion kyu hai bhai .. its so complicated !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SO GEET IS AGAIN GOING TO WORK AS MAANS SECRETARY
BUT WHO SENT HER THE JOB OFFER
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update!!
so Geet will again be working under Maan... interesting... so destiny is playing its role...
will be waiting for the next part eagerly!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Little bit confusion
Dev killed by whom
Waiting fr past to reveal
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
The lost song

Chapter 4

Geet got ready and came out and Nandhini was waiting for Geet, "can we," she asked and Geet nodded, "So how hard it was for you to get this job," Nandhini asked, and Geet smiled, "Hard, it was just like that," Geet said shocking Nandhini, "Really, well, lucky you, I had to go through a one month procedure to get finalized, you know," she said and Geet stopped frozen,

"One month of processing for her and nothing for me," Geet thought and Nandhini looked at her who suddenly stopped, "What happened," she asked and Geet nodded a nothing and went away, "So you have previous work experience ah" Nandhini asked, "Kind of," Geet said but was feeling uncomfortable as it was making her to think of Maan, "Good for you, I am so nervous," Nandhini said,

"Never be, it's just a job, you will be fine" Geet said and then they took a cab and went towards their temporary office, as soon as they reached the office, Geet felt an nervousness herself, she was feeling the same as when she entered the Khurana concern for the first time, "Baba ji," she prayed and stepped in, and Mr.Arnav was waiting for them, "Hello Ms.Nandhini, and I guess you must be Mrs.Geet,"

"Hi, I am Arnav Manager here," he introduced and had an handshake with Geet, well, Ms.Nandhini finance team will be working there at the right hand side cabin, and you can join them, and Mrs.Geet, that's your cabin, your Boss, haven't arrived it, and when he comes, your work will be started," he said and smiled and went away, "wish me luck," Nandhini said, "Good luck," Geet said and Nandhini went away,


Geet too went to her cabin and kept her bag there, "This is not that bad," Geet thought trying to relax, and in a few minutes the office was so busy, but her boss didn't come yet, Get looked at his cabin which was besides her and was separated by an glass wall, and a curtain which was opened now, Geet wait and started feeling bored, she went and looked through the glass wall into her new boss's cabin,

A teardrop fell on her hands after a minute and she touched her cheeks, she was thinking about Maan and how she used to see him through the glass wall, came to her mind, and her tears were running down without her permission, stupid she thought, suddenly there was so much of noise and suddenly nothing, which reminded her of Khurana office again, "Boss," she thought and stood there near the glass wall leaning close to the curtains,

"why am I seeing him like this," Geet thought yet she didn't move, and she saw the boss's cabin door being opened and her heart started to beat high, and it finally stopped for a minute when she saw Maan walking inside the cabin, suddenly Geet forgot everything, her eyes filled up, her smile widen up, she can't believe it, her Maan, her Maan, she wanted to run towards him and hug him up,

She saw him walking with the same attitude and roughness and sat on his chair, and opened a file, he was so same, so himself, Geet looked at him, those eyes which pour love and anger, those lips, which had kissed her and hurt her with words, she wanted to touch his cheeks, she wanted to be in those arms, which used to hold her and protect her, she felt helpless, she wanted to jumped before him, in spite of the fact he will be anger,

Geet walked here and there, she can't hold herself, and she wanted to go to him and flew into his arms, even if he kills her now, Maan's mobile rang and he took it, "Hello," his voice was clearly audible to Geet in her cabin, she felt like breaking the glass now and jumping on to him, atleast in scolding she could hear his voice she thought, "What," he smiled and it took Geet's breathe away, "ok, Come over here, now, I will be waiting" he said with a smile and Geet was so happy to see him smile,

Geet waited for the moment, when he would call her and she would go in front of him, and she stood there near the glass wall, but Maan was busy with the files and blueprints, suddenly Geet saw Maan's cabin door opening and a big scream, stopping Geet's heart for a second, "Papa," a sweet little angelic girl shouted and Maan got from his seat and the little girl jumped on to him as Maan scooped her up,

"Oh My angel," Maan said, "Papa missed you so much," Sana said with her cute upset face, "Papa too missed you dear," Maan said, "can we," she asked and Maan nodded, and walked out and Geet too slowly moved and stood near her cabin door, "Arnav, I am going out, will be back by after 2," Maan said,

"But Sir, your meeting with Minister," Arnav asked, "Postponed it, tell him, he has an meeting with his daughter", Sana answered for Maan, "you heard this young lady, anyways will take care of that" Maan said and went away with Sana, "Maan sir's daughter is just like him," Arnav said, Geet who was watching, went inside her cabin and locked the door behind her, and leaned on it,

Maan is Married and has a daughter, he forgot me totally, that he throw our love that easily away, all that we shared was just nothing, that he married someone else, "Geet, not only in this life, but in my every life, you will the only one, I will love and share my life only with you, it's Maan Khurana's promise," Maan's words echoed, "Geet, I Love you so much, it's still paining to know that you betrayed me, but still my love for you is more than my pain,"


Lie, lie, everything was an lie, Geet said as she lost her strength mentally and physically and dragged down to the floor and held her knees and started to cry forgetting that it's office,

Teri khataa hai mere jiyaa
Teri khataa hai mere jiyaa
Un pe bharosa kyuun tune kiya

Sab jhoothe jhoothe vaade the unke
Chal peechhe peechhe aayaa tu jin ke
Wo piyaa aaye naa
Piyaa aaye na wo piyaa aaye naa

Ab sab hi un khwaabon ki tu dagar chhod de
Ab sab hi un khwaabon ko tu khud hi tod de
Woh piya aaye na
Teri khataa hai mere jiyaa..

Har khataa kee hotee hai koi na koi sazaa
Gham likhe hon kismat mein to ban hee jaatee wajah
Ab sabhi gham ashqon mein simat se gaye
Ab sabhi aansoo palkon se lipat se gaye
Woh piya aaye na..

Geet cried for more than half an hour remembering her days with Maan and his words, her eyes were pouring tears and her heart was pouring Blood, she can't handle it, she thought to get out before Maan come again, and stood up and wiped her tears and called Jay, "Jay where are you," she asked and from her voice Jay could guess she was crying,

"Geet," Jay said, "Where are you, still in Mumbai," Geet asked wiping up, "Yes, In my friend's house, but what happened, are you crying," He asked worried which Made Geet to cry more, "Geet," Jay screamed in the phone, "Please, come and take me home, I can't be in this office, I don't want to be here," Geet Pleaded, "Ok, Ok, I will back, I have your office address, I will come there, till then be in the office even ok, and please relax, I will come, ok," Jay said and Geet cut the call,

Geet sat on her chair and waited for Jay, and wished he would come before Maan comes back here, it was lunch break and Geet was waiting for Jay's phone, Geet jumped up hearing a sudden knock on the door, "Geet," Nandhini's voice made her relax and she went and opened her door, "Hey, everyone is out for lunch come on," Nandhini called and before Geet could answer Geet's mobile rang,

It was Jay, "Hey Geet, I am at the parking, come on," Jay said and Geet smiled up, and took her bag, "Hey for lunch you are taking your bag, leave it here, they won't steal it," Nandhini said looking at Geet, "Oh, Jay had come to pick me up, actually," Geet started and Nandhini started to smile, "So, your husband had come to take you out for an lunch ah, hmmm, wish I could have been married too, ok enjoy but be here before the boss comes" Nandhini said and went away,

Geet shook her head and rushed down, and Jay was waiting for her, seeing him, she cried out and ran towards him, seeing her like that Jay was shocked and worried, "Geet," he rushed towards her and held her and Geet laid on his shoulders and started to cry, "O my god, what happened, Geet, please, don't cry Geet, please," he said as he patted her head, after a few second, Jay pulled her from his hold,

"For God sake Geet, don't cry, what happened," he asked finally, "Maan," she said and Jay looked at her shocked, "Maan," he asked confused, "Yes, Maan, Maan is the boss here," Geet said shocking Jay, it can't be, he thought, Jay thought for a minute in silent, "Geet, didn't you talk to him," he asked and Geet nodded a no,

"Jay, he forgot me," Geet said and cried more, "Non sense Geet, he will not forget you, what happened Geet," Jay asked looking at her messed face, "Maan is married and he got a child, I saw it with my eyes and I didn't even go before him, he forgot me and started a new life, now who am I Jay" Geet asked and started crying up, and Jay stood there confused and shocked, as Geet and Jay was standing there in silence, they forget to notice an black BMW entering the parking lot,

"Geet, look it's ok," Jay said finally coming from the shock and wiped her tears and pulled her front hair messed around her face and tugged it around her ear, Maan who parked his car got out and saw the pair and stood there shocked, "Geet" his lips said without any sound, and his anger raised up when he saw someone else touching her, he fisted his hands, and he was so surprised as his possessiveness for Geet was still fresh, with all those pains and anger in him for her,

Nandhini, who came down saw Geet and Jay and smiled and turned around to leave, "Hello Ms." Maan's bossy voice stopped her and she turned to see him standing there near his car, "Boss," she said as she went near him, and she started to shiver high, "Do you know them," he asked pointing to Geet and Jay and Nandhini nodded an yes, "She is your new Secretary Mrs.Geet and that's her husband," she said shocking Maan, "Husband?" Maan asked,

"Yes sir, she is staying with me only, and so I knew and," before she could continue Maan waved his hand to stop and went inside his office building and rushed went inside the lift and closed his eyes hitting the lift wall with his anger and frustration, "How could she marry someone, how could she even think of that, how," Maan yelled and his anger was overcome by an pain, he pressed the stop button making the lift to stop between two floor,

"Maan, My love, my life, my soul, everything belongs to you only, I love you Maan, more than I love anything in this world, I love you," her words echoed, "I am fool to believe her, I am fool, everything was an lie, a play" Maan said pained and angered and frustrated, and leaned on to the lift wall and stood there,

Sach lagaa thaa jo be-vajah hum ko
wo bharam ho gaya hai
Mod aane the jis fasaane mein
Wo khatam ho gayaa
Bhoole hum bhoole wo
Kaise sab se kahein baat ye..

Ab chalo hum dheere dheere bihal se gaye
Ab chalo hum jaise bhi ho sambhal se gaye
Woh piya aaye na.. wo o.. piya aaye naa..

Teri khata hai mere jiya
Un pe bharosaa kyun tune kiyaa

Precap:

"Maan, please, please, yes, I did an mistake once, that too without any knowledge of what I am doing, and I confronted too, after that whatever happened had no connection with me Maan, I am innocent, I had nothing to do with Dev's murder, trust me, I know I lost my place in your life atleast forgive me" Geet pleaded,

" Enough Geet, You seems to enjoy your life without me, then why did you come back to give me more pain, what more do you want to destroy in my life, what more do you want to take away, the only thing left is my life, do you want to take that too, but please if so say it straight but do back stab me again" Maan said, his words tearing her heart apart,

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And to all the questions in your mind: what's happened in Maan n Geet's past, Who is Maan married to, and who is Jay, who is their villain, to know all this keep reading the FF will be revealed slowly and soon, in every part...

And can I ask one suggestion, can I be a little bold when it comes to Maan and Geet scenes, not too bold, but to an extend...

Thank you, Love you all...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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painful update
both misunderstood each other and thinks that the other moved on
precap is more painful!!!!!
yes u can be bold in maaneet scenes😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi.. nice updated dear... painful, so each thinks each other forgot and yet they love each other... hmmm... hope you will give those answers... precap is good..😊😊

Yes you can be bold... Will wait to see how bold... 😉😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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painful update
too much MU
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