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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
like guessed she was trapped
but being MSK, he should have tried to find out the truth
Nice part ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
part 6
nice part...
lovely...
Geet has met Adi and Pinky...
now the truth is yet to come out...

PS - can u post the link when u update in this thread?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73


why didn't Geet corrected nandini that Jay is not her husband...how can a lady having married to another man get ready to join her name with another man...she should have immediately cleared that he is not her husband...

if Maan himself given her mangalsutra then why he don't recognize that...

waiting for next part to know this mystery...

thanx for pm...


Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
v nice update.. lvd the concept n all.. great going.. waiting for the next😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
why did maan blame geet for dev's death
who was behind the messages and the bombing

SANA IS DEV AND MEERA'S DAUGHTER
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
part 7
nice part...
he gave her his body heat...
and he married her also...
but whats this Dev thing?
why is Maan blaming Geet?
poor Geet...
she was taken to prison?
how did she come out?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
The Lost Song




Part 8


"Pinky, Maan sir" Adi said as he entered the room and stopped as he saw Geet on the floor crying up and Pinky in all tears, "What's happening, I left you girls alone so you would both get compromise and," Adi said as he went and pulled Geet up, and Made her to sit in the chair, and he turned to Pinky and made her too sit in the chair, "Now stop crying Geet," Adi said as he took an glass of water and gave to her,

"Adi sir," Geet looked at him, "you are still anger on me, and think that I did everything," Geet asked, and Adi pulled a chair and put it near her and sat before her, "Geet, I am not anger nor I didn't doubt you," Adi said and Geet looked at him shocked, "but you didn't ask me anything," Geet said weeping up, "Geet, I know you and Maan sir, more that you both itself"

"Maan sir loves you too much and you love him even more, you both will give your life rather than giving away your love, that's why he is still keep your love with him even if it hurt him and so as you," Adi said and Geet cried up, "Adi sir," Geet said, "Geet, I know you are innocent and I know somewhere Maan sir too want you to be innocent but all those proof were so against you, and that Vikram, each and every thing was so against up you so perfectly,"

"But if you can understand that, why can't Maan," Geet asked, "Because Geet, you are part of my life, but for Maan sir, you are his life, without you he is lifeless, just like now he is, he eats, sleeps, does everything as if it his routine, and nothing more, he had no connection to this world, than Sana," Adi said his eyes filling up,

"Adi sir, what should I do, tell me Adi sir, I will do anything," Geet said, "tell him the truth Geet, tell him everything," Adi said, "How he is not even ready to hear a word, how," Geet said, "Geet, all that I know is Maan sir's love for you is still in his heart but his feel of hate is covering it up, bring back that love and make his love for you bigger that his hate towards you, and that love will compel him to listen to you," Adi said,

"Geet, I had seen enough, do something and bring back Maan sir from the hell he is living in, stop him from destroying himself, you had done once and you can do it now too, but this time it's going to be tougher than you think," Adi said and Geet thought for a second, "Adi sir, I don't care how tough it would be, I will get my Maan back, I will prove him myself, and I will not leave him this time until I am dead, I will take up anything for that sake," Geet said standing up,

"And I will do everything I can to help you," Adi said, "Me too Geet," Pinky said and Geet hugged her, "Thank you, Thank you Pinky, Adi sir," Geet said and smiled up, " Geet to get Maan sir back, you have to get back your own self first, that naughty, adamant Geet," Pinky said and she wiped Geet tears up, "Sure pinky," Geet said, "ok Geet, Maan sir had asked me and Pinky to come to the site with the files," Adi said,

"To the site but Adi sir, he said he will come here na," Pinky asked confused, "May be he is trying to avoid me, seeing me in the office," Geet said with a bad grin, "Geet, it's ok, will find a way, and Dadi maa is here along with Maan sir," Adi said and Geet smiled big, "Dadi maa," she said and wanted to go and see her immediately, "ok Geet see you soon, I know where you are staying will come meet you up," Adi said and went away,

Geet felt happy, she felt like she is getting back her life, my job, her friends, and now she need to get her Maan, Geet thought and went to her cabin and started her work, and was thinking how to get back Maan,

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Maan hated to enter the office, he doesn't want to see her but still he had too, it's his work, so he comes up, Geet saw him entering to the cabin and she smiled big, "No, Geet, don't get so emotional, you know Maan very well, that guy is on fire and his fire can be cut only by fire, so you have to be like him," Geet thought, "Baba ji, please be with me as you always had before, please," Geet prayed.

Maan didn't even turn once towards Geet's cabin, but his heart was beating high as he was sitting in his cabin and looking at his file, Geet's presence near him was killing him, her golden gaze and her sweet lips was lingering in his mind and his heart was begging him to see her once, but he controlled, Geet waiting up for his one look, but no,

And it turned 3 and Geet smiled big and went out and Made Maan's coffee, it was one of her favorite job, she made the coffee and went to his cabin and Knocked it, "come in" Maan voice came up, and seeing Geet coming in, Maan looked at her, "What," Maan asked, "Coffee," Geet said, keeping it on the table, "you don't have to think about me," Maan yelled up,

"Well, I too don't have any interest in thinking about you, but I am paid for it, as an secretary it's my duty to take care of my boss, I never step down from my duty" Geet said with attitude making Maan bust in anger, he raised up and hovered over Geet and Geet instantly back up hitting on the wall, and Maan stood close to her as his hot breathe was hitting on her face, "I know how loyal you would be Geet, I know,"

Maan said looking into her eyes with his eyes turning red in anger, "No, You don't know anything, you don't know nothing about me, you don't know about my loyalty, my trust and my love, you don't know nothing," Geet said looking straight into his eyes, no one would have dared to do that, but for Geet, even his anger filled eyes showed only the love for her, "Yes, I don't know you, if I would have, I would not have lost anything in my life," Maan said,

"You are so selfish Maan, always thinking about you, what you found, what you lost, your love, your life, your happiness, everything is you and you only, you have no time to think about other, think about me, once, if only once, if you had thought about me na, than we would not have been suffered but no, your anger had made you it's slave, you lost yourself to it," Geet yelled up,

And Maan's anger rose up and her held her both arms and pressed her hard on to him, "I would have been better if I had lost myself to my anger at first, instead of being lost in you, and your fake love," Maan said holding her close, "Don't you dare call my love fake," Geet said pushing him away, "Ask your heart, Mr.Maan Khurana, does it think that my love is fake, you know that wasn't fake, act if you think it's fake, but deep inside your heart, you know that it's true," Geet said and her tears came up,

And Geet turned and went away, Maan held his head and banged his table hard, Geet was right, Maan's heart always told that her love was true and it hurt him more, sometimes he felt like throwing everything away and just get back to Geet, but he felt like betraying his brother, to live with an girl who killed my brother, no, no, Maan would stop himself, he looked at Geet's cabin and saw that she was crying laying on her table,

Maan feel an pain for making her cry and his anger, his pain, it was too much, Maan decided to get out, and so he went out, when Geet looked at his cabin Maan was gone, "Sorry Maan, Sorry, I didn't mean to, but I had to, I had to make your heart speak, I had made a mistake of staying away from you, I should have done it this before, I thought of letting you go so you would be, but not now, not after knowing that you are still holding on to my love,"

Geet said wiping up her tears, and Maan didn't return back, Maan went to his house and to his room, and closed his door, Maan heart started to speak for Geet inside him and his mind argue, it was like two person fighting from inside of him, Maan's heart made him see the times he and Geet spend together, her sweet kisses on his cheeks now and then, Geet running into his arms and holding him close, making him feel complete, her tears to see him in pain, her soft hands holding his face and looking into his eyes,

"Maan," Her voice was haunting him, Maan turned around and dropped on to the bed, and Maan's mind made him see what was his worst nightmare, Maan was standing inside the room full of investigators, and Arjun came up, walking slowly towards him, "Arjun what's the matter," Maan asked and Arjun stood there with his eyes filled and worries on his face, "Arjun are you ok, is everything fine," Maan asked worried about Arjun,

"Maan, I am sorry," Arjun said and Maan looked at him puzzled, "Arjun what are you sorry for, I mean, what going on," Maan asked, "Dev," Arjun said, "Dev, Dev had gone to Canada for an meeting," Maan said and Arjun was feeling so sorry to break up the news, "Dev is, Dev is dead," Arjun said putting Maan in to shock, and Maan's world stopped for a minute, "Maan, Maan," Arjun shook him up from the shock,

"No Arjun, there is a mistake, no, Dev, had gone to Canada," Maan said not wanting to believe, "No Maan, he didn't, on the way to Air port itself, his car got busted," Arjun said not looking at Maan, "Busted, what do you mean by that," Maan asked tears running out without his own permission, "someone had kept bomb in his car," Arjun said, "Bomb, Dev, who," Maan asked his heart filled with Pain and anger,

Arjun stood there silently, and Maan turned around and caught his collar, "Who is that, who took my bro from me, who," Maan yelled making the whole room scared, "tell me Arjun, tell me now", Maan yelled up his anger and pain busting up on Arjun. "Maan we didn't find who did it," Arjun said and Maan roared in pain and frustration,

"Maan but we found one thing, the bomb was in your travel bag," Arjun said, "Maan I know you are not in a state to speak, but I need your help, I need you to say what happened today from the morning," Arjun asked and Maan closed his eyes blocking his tears, "Today morning I went to an temple with Geet and I came to my office from there and asked Geet to pack my things and send it to the office with the driver,"

"And when I was above to start, Dev said he will go instead of me and he wanted me to spend some time with Geet, so he said he will go and he said he will take my clothes itself, and went off," Maan said in tears, "Arjun, I was supposed to be in that car, I was suppose to die," Maan yelled up and Arjun caught him, "Maan, please," Arjun said, and thought for a minute, "do you think that driver," Maan asked and Arjun nodded a no,

"No Maan, the driver is also dead," Arjun said and looked at Maan, she stepped two steps back from Maan, because he know what he is above to say would kill me, "Maan, it's just my guess and it's my duty too, Geet packed your things right, so, I mean you just knew her a few months and," Arjun dragged and Maan jumped on to him, "What are you trying to say, My Geet did this, you are doubt on my Geet,"

"Arjun how could you even think like that," Maan said between his teeth, holding his neck, and Making Arjun difficult to breathe, "Mr.MK, Mr.MK" the guys there pulled Maan, and Maan looked at Arjun who was struggling in his hold and let him free, and Arjun coughed up, and Maan took the water from table and gave it to him, "Sorry," Maan said, "It's ok Maan, It's ok," Arjun said, "Maan, I too have seen Geet, but it's my duty,"

"It must be that Vikram, it must be him," Maan yelled, "I too thought of him Maan and already my team is on to him," Maan nodded and he was feeling like dying, his brother is dead and his Geet is being blamed, "Sir, Vikram Phone records and Message details," A Girl came and gave Arjun the reports. And Arjun got the reports, "oh he had called and messaged to only one number for last few months, strange,"

"And Maan, look at the messages, every message he received is about your actives, your each and every activities, when you had gone to sleep and your wake up time, everything is been messaged to Vikram from this number, looks like he had spy to watch you," Arjun said, "Guys trace this number that Vikram called," Arjun said the number out loud, and Maan looked shocked, "repeat the number," Maan said and Arjun did, "you know this number," Arjun asked puzzled looking at Maan,

Maan fisted his hands and his anger hit his nerves, "Maan tell me, this guy is the one who was giving information about you to Vikram, do you know him," Arjun asked and Maan held the chair and his anger was uncontrollable, that he held the chair and throw it and it smashed the glass wall and creating a mess, scaring everyone on the room, and making them jump up,

"Geet," Maan roared sky high and Arjun understood whose number it is and why Maan is acting like this, Arjun signed his team to stay away from Maan and waited for Maan to cool down,

Precap: Truth about Jay and Geet.. (Thank you all for your lovely comments and... it so encouraging... thank you... so much..)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
awesome ud
how vikram able 2 msg
from geet phone some one
helping vikram
waiting precap nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
awesome update
in past all the evidences were against geet, how?????
who did all that????
precap is good!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
SOMEBODY PLANNED TO KILL MAAN AND BLAME GEET
BUT DEV DIED AND MAAN BLAMED GEET

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