New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
bechari geet.. armaan ridhi n frnes wnts to help them.hw sweet na,... great update..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 39

Sid goes and starts the conversation...

Maan orders drinks for them too...

Sid: Maan, stop this

Maan thought that he is one of his friends...

Maan: lelo lelo, it's my treat

Sid: what?

Maan: aaj mein bahut kush hoon

Armaan: tum kush ho?

Maan: haan,I just had a great eccape from life time imprisonment

Sid: ye kya bakwaas hai?

Maan: tumne kabhi pyaar kiya hai?

Sid: haan

Maan: toh tum bhi ek prisoner ho, mere baat suno aur tum bhi escape ho jao

Armaan: what are you doing? Subhe subhe yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: I'm celebrating

Sid: celebrations? You are out of your mind

Armaan: what's there to celebrate Maan? You are out of the team now

Maan: what team?

Sid: India are playing Srilanka and what are you doing? Khelthe nahi toh kam se kam dkeho kaise sab khelthe hai?

Maan: MSK nahi hai toh kuch nahi hai, tum bhi mat dekho, sab bakwaas hai

Armaan: haan, sab bakwaas hai toh ye kya? ye bahut achcha hai

Armaan snatches the bottle from him...

Maan gets angry...

He tries to hit Armaan...

Sid stops him...

He gives the bottle back to him...

Armaan gets a call from Ridhi...

She is with Geet...

But Armaan is not in a position to answer her call...

He cuts the call...

Geet ko patha chalega ki ye log Maan ke saath hai toh Geet unse bhi naraaz hogi...

It's better to keep it under cover...

Maan pours for them too...

Maan: come on let's celebrate MSK's freedom

Sid: freedom?

Maan: cheers Dr, I;m very happy

Armaan: haan haan, hum dekh sakthe hai

Maan: what? See, I'm a free bird now, no one to control, what do you think? You stupid girl, you think you can control me? MSK ko? Never, come stop me if you can, Geeet Handa...

Sid: Maan, stop this yaar

Maan: why should I stop?

Armaan: kam se kam Geet ke barein mein toh socho

Maan: uska naam mat lo, mere ye haal ke zamendar uss Geet handa hi hai

Sid: tum toh nahse mein ho, issiliye aaise bakwaas batein karthe ho

Maan: nahi, ye sach hai, Geet ne meri zindagi barbad kardhi, kyun Geet? kyun mere zindagi mein aayi thi? Aur kyun mujhe dokha dhi?

Armaan: dokha?

Maan: haan, Geet Handa betrayed me, usske boli bali aankhon ne mujhe dokha diya

Maan shouts and everyone looks at him...

Maan empties his glass in one sip...

He throws the glass in anger...

Armaan: Maan, enough, come, let's go home, dadi is worried

Maan: dadi?

Maan just remembers dadi...

Maan: dadi, I'm sorry dadi...i'm sorry

So saying Maan faints...

Armaan holds him and they take him home...

Armaan had mistakenly swithed on the call instead of cutting it...

Geet hears everything and she feels very bad ...

But she is even more angry for Maan is using her as an excuse for his drinking this time...

This hurts her more...

Now she has become a reason for him to drink...

She needs to get this cleared...

She will make sure that he wipes her out of his memory...

If she could she would just erase those days she spent with him...from his memory permanently...

But she cherishes those moments...for she loved him genuinely...and still loves him...

She can pretend that she hates him but she can never deny the fact that she cares for him and will care for him always...

But how dare he uses her as an excuse to drink?

What will dadi think about her?

Dadi will think that Geet's absence is the cause for all this...

Had she been with him Maan would have stayed away fron that ...

Geet decides to finish this off forever... She will make him realize that it's none of her fault that he is suffering...it's only his own mistake of breaking his promise and drinking again that is the cause of all the trouble...

Geet goes to KM to meet him...

Geet enters his room and finds him unconscious...

It's no use speaking with him in this condition...

She takes a tub of water and purs over him...

Maan wakes to find Geet furious...

He smiles at her thinking that it's his imagination...

Maan: chale jao mere dimag se, chale jao

He then tries to get back to sleep...

Geet holds him...

Maan: hare, tum toh mere dimag se utharthi hi nahi? Abhi dekho

He searches for his drink...

Geet: yahi chahiye na?

Maan: mujhe dedo

Geet: nahi doongi

Maan: ab toh sapnon mein bhi mujhe tang karne aajaathi hai, babaji, koi issko samjao ki chale jaye mere zindagi se, MSK ko kissi ki zaroorat nahi, woh toh apne aap bahut kush hai, nahi chahiye kissi ki pyaar, nahi chahiye kissi ki ghyaan, nahi chahiye, nahi chahiye

Maan looks at her worried face and he is also worried...

Maan looks at her eyes...

Geet hides her tears...

Maan: tum ro rahi ho?

Geet wipes off her tears...

Geet: nahi

Maan: joot mat bolo Geet

Geet tries to turn away from him...

Maan turns her face towards him...

Maan: mujhe nafrat hai Geet, tummare aasaoon se

Geet treis to say something...

Maan stops her...

Maan closes her mouth...

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Geet realises that she is losing her control and it's not good...

She pushes him away...

Geet: dhoor raho mujhse, haath mat lagao

Maan: kyun Geet? Mera choona bhi tumme ab takleef detha?

Geet couldn't answer...

She just keeps staring him...

Maan: bolo Geet, jawab do

Geet: haan

Geet replies in anger...

Maan steps back...

This hurts Geet evenmore...

Maan: phir yahan kyun aayi ho?

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no now what is going to happen between. I thought Maan was finally changed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭 what is going to happen to both of them now. i hope it gets better soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
i dont like this geet. she should be trust on maan love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 39
awesome...
nice...
poor Geet...
what the hell Maan?
seriously the guy has lost it...
stupid gdha...
just feel like kicking this Maan idiot...
Geet is so hurt...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 40

Geet struggles hard to face the wrath of his anger...

He has gone mad...

Geet is a little scared but she had come to put an end to this...

And she will not leave him like that...

If he drinks it's his wish she has no problem with it...

But why drag her into this mess when it's no fault of hers...

Why is he creating a scene that it's all b'coz of Geet...

Maan waits for her answer...

Maan: chup kyun ho gayi?

Geet: mein kyun chup rahoon?

Maan: toh, bolo Geet, mujhse milne kyun aayi?

Maan was happy seeing her ...

And he knows that she too wanted to see him...

Geet: mein aapse milne nahi aayi

Maan: toh mere kamre mein kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: woh...mein

Maan smirks...

Maan: mujhe patha hai ki tum yahan kyun aayi ho

Geet: aapko kya patha hai?

Maan: tum mujhe apna gyaan dene aayi ho, haina?

Geet: what?

Maan: mein kitna galat hoon aur tum kitni mahaan ho, tumne kabhi apne galthi ke barein mein socha?

Geet: kya? meinne koi galathi nahi ki sewa aapko

Maan: kyun rukh gayi?

Geet: seva aappe viswaas karne ki

Maan: bakwaas band karo, tumnekabhi bhi mujhpe viswaas nahi kiya, hamesha shak karthi thi

Geet: meri shak toh sach hua na

Maan: kaisa sach? Tum kya jaanthi ho mere barein mein?

Geet: mein sab jaanthi hoon

Maan: nahi, tum kuch nahi jaanthi ho

Geet: aap dokebas ho, vada karthe ho aur nibathe nahi

Maan: meinne koi vada nahi kiya

Maan still thinks that she is angry that he went out with sameera...

Geet: aap ne uss din apna vada nibaya aur uss Gandhi cheez ko haath nahi lagathe toh ye sab nahi hotha, aur aap ka ye haal nahi hotha

Geet ye bolthe bolthe kudh bahut dukhi hothi...

Maan ne Geet ko aaise takleef mein kabhi nahi dekha...

Maan is confused...

Ye toh ab Sam ka naam bhi nahi lethi?

Itne jaldhi naam bhi bhool gayi?

Geet: uss din aap wahan kyun gaye? Aur ussko pine se pehle aapne ek bar bhi mere barein mein nahi socha?

Maan: tum kehna kya chahathi ho?

Geet: aapne nashe mein uss aadmi ko nahi mara toh aaj aap team mein hothe

Maan: agar tum mere saath aathi toh ye sab nahi hotha, haina Geet?

Geet: kher, mein kaun hothi hoon aapko pine se rokhnewali? Ye aapki marzi hai

Maan: what?

Geet: aap ko jitna pina hai piyo, mujhe koi itraaz nahi

Maan: toh phir tummare problem kya hai?

Geet: aapki gandi aadat ke liye aap mere naam ko kyun istemaal karthe ho?

Maan: ye kya naya tamasha hai?

Geet: aap ko kya haq hotha hai meri beizatthi karne ki?

Maan: meinne aaisa kab kiya?

Geet has recoeded that conversation...

She shows him that...

Maan had no idea what he was doing...

Now that he is a little steady he is ashamed of himself...

He hates himself for shouting out Geet's name in the bar...

Yes, she is right, he has no right to spoil her name...

Geet: aap ko daru pina hai, toh shok se piyo, ye aapki zindagi hai, aap jaise bhi ussko barbad kar sakthe ho, par meri zindagi kyun barbad karna chahthe ho?

Maan: woh...geeet

Geet: aaj se aapke muh se mera naam nahi sunna chahathi hoon, aap aaj ke badh kabhi mera naam nahi lena

Maan: suno

Geet leaves immediately...

Maan: hare suno

Geet doesn't stop...

Maan feels very bad...

He has made a big mistake...

But what to do? Maan can't stop thinking about her even when he is fully drunk and forgets who he is...

She had occupied every part of his mind, and it's not that easy to get her out of his mind as she thinks...

He had been trying to do that all this time and has totally failed...

Now he vows never to do anything that will hurt Geet...

For all the good things she did to get him out of that bad habit he had paid back very well...

Geet helped him get back his respect while he has lost his respect and also spoiled her name too...

Wow...what a way to thank Geet...Maan ne toh kamaal kardhi...

Geet will never forgive him for this...

Maan decides to leave delhi for if he stays here he will create more trouble for her...

People know Geet Handa as a respectful Dr here...

And a few of their friends also know about them...

If Maan makes fun of her in some friend's party then the news will spread easily thru common friends...

Maan leaves for Chandigarh...

He can do what ever he wants there...

Even sam has stopped calling him now...

All the good people have left him after he got back to his bad habit...

He is left with his bad company now...

He now stays at home and turns it into a bar...

Dadi tried to stop him but he is in no mood to listen...

Even his Dad came in person to warn him as his health is deteriorating...

But Maan deosn't listen to anyone...

He had decided that he has had enough...

After he came to know that Geet hates him he thinks that there is no use living...it's better to die of drinking...

And one fine day he collapses and is admitted in the hospital...

Geet gets to know about it from the media...

She knows that this will happen anyhow...

Now everything had gone beyond control...

And there is no hope left...

But Geet had to move on...

She has a career ahead...which she loves...

She loves helping people who are disabled stand on their own without depending on others...

She wants to specialize in that...making the immobile mobile...

She had seen a few children who are like that in her college days...

She has completed her internship at Sanjeevani and is ready to fly to the UK...

She had got this opurtunity to get hands on training with the leading research institute...

Chief has specially made arrangemants for this and he is also happy that Geet has promised to join Sanjeevani later...

That's her dream...get to learn the latest treatments and come help those children back here in our country...

So there is no time to think about this Maan who misuses his fortunes and wastes his talents...

And she believes that this separation would make him realize his mistakes...

Armaan, Ridhima, Sid and Vicky everyone is happy for Geet...

Vicky pretends to be happy that now he is relieved that he need not fight for everything and the house is all his...but he too would miss her mischiefs and their fights...

They send off Geet and she takes off to pursue her dream...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Update padhne ke baad mujhe yeh gana yaad aaya...


Yeh Kya hua...kyun hua ...kab hua...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no...yeh kya hogaya...sab ulatpulat hogaya...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 40
nice part...
OMG yeh kya hogaya...
how could u do this to our Maan and Geet?
poor them...
Maan is regretting so much but the idiot chose this bad habit again...
hes such a fool...
and Geet has left to London...
and Maan's condition is like this...
yaar this is not fair...
what is his future then...
and Daadima?
poor her...
cont soon dear...

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