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Posted: 11 years ago
offoo.. maan bhi na.. bewkoof hi hai.. geet ko thik se samj bhi nahi raha.. or geet bhi na.. y cant she take maan's full charge n make him a good person.. dono bewkoof kahike..
nice update.. the story is really going oo good,...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 41

While Geet is chasing her dream Maan is struggling hard to survive...

He is fighting the demon inside him who is pocessing him and controlling him...

And he is left alone to struggle...

He doesn't want to let go of this devil for there is no Geet and he doesn't want a life without her...

He would rather be a slave to his addiction than any stupid girl who thinks that MSK would dance to her tunes like a robot...no...that's impossible...even when it comes to slavery he has the right to choose his master...and that is his drinks...that gives him pleasure while Geet has always given him trouble...

Though Maan rejects any treatment Dadi calls her son and pleads him to help her save her only potha...

Mr.Khurana may have stayed away from his son but he still loves him...

He loves his attitude and arrogance which is a typical Khurana characteristic...

And that ego has kept them apart all these days...

Now the senior Khurana is ready to give up his ego for his junior...

He arranges for Maan's treatment...

Maan is in rehab...

His father makes sure that his son lives...

Whatever maybe he is a Khurana, and he is his blood...

He can't see his mother suffer so much b'coz of Maan...

He had already troubled her so much and her only solace was Maan...

She never felt alone for she had her potha by her side always ...

Now she is so scared that her potha would leave her forever...

She prays to god to take her life instead...

And babaji answers her prayers atlast...

There are a few who still love Maan, his game...

There are a few loyal fans of his who are really concerned about him...

And a few friends like Armaan and Sid who really want to help him...

Maan comes to know that Geet is not here...

He is a little disappointed but he is happy that she has moved on...

Or is he realy happy?

No... how he wishes she was here with him?

But she is Geet Handa...and she is not like the other girls...haina?

Any other girl would have cried and begged him to stop drinking and would have surrendered in his feet now...but then Maan wouldn't have bothered her...

Now he is thinking about her 24*7...

Now he wants to show her that if she can move on so could he...

He is not worried about her absence...

But the more he tries to forget her the more he thinks about her...this frustrates him and he had to get himself drunk to keep her out of his mind...

Maan starts the day afresh but as the day passea he gets restless for his daily dose of liquor and ends up drinking in the evenings...this habit he can't get rid of even after so much trouble...

Dadi is happy that atleast he has restricted his drinks to the nights only...

Maan thinks about Geet all day and then gets angry with her for leaving him and not trusting him and he decides that he could hurt her by drinking as much as he wants...what an idea sirji?

Aapko pina hai toh pilo, kyun uss bechari ko kamakaam beech mein lathe ho?

Woh toh aapse bhaagkke kahin dhoor chali gayi...lekhin janab toh ussko kabhi bhi chain se jeena nahi dethe haina? Bechari bhaag bhaag ke tak gayi hogi...

Zara ussko pareshaan karna band karo ji...

Pehle Geet Maan ko kab pareshaan karna band karegi? Yahi aapka jawab haina?

Geet troubles him even when she is far far away from him...

Maybe she knows that too...

Next day is Maan's b'day...

He is not in a mood to celebrate or he is not even aware of it...

But his fans remember his b'day and they wish him...

Messages and bouquets keep coming but there is none from his enemy...

Yes, Geet is his rival now...

But why would she wish him for she is not a well wisher anymore...

That evening there is a party arranged for him by a few friends...

They have arranged it in a remote farm house where there is no acess to alcohol...

But Maan can't control his urge to drink as time passes...

He leaves the party saying that he needs to go home...

Some of his friends accompany him as they know where he would go...

And Maan stops at the bar...and no one could stop him...

He is very frustrated...he has been waiting for someone's call...

As time passed he got frustrated and here he is to get his dose of happiness...that's what he thinks...

Maan keeps drinking so that he could forget everything, but he could only forget himself but not Geet...

Now he knows why that Devdas is so popular...

But Geet is always right, now also he blames her for his drinking...what a lame excuse...

Even is she was here he is going to drink and put the blame on her only...haina babaji?

That's why Geet left him, but still MSK won't chamge...b'coz he is the MSK...the boss...he can do whatever he wants...

Some of his friends try to stop him as he is still in rehab...

This could be fatal for his health...

But no one could stop him...

They leave him alone...

Actually he gets drunk and throws them out...

Dadi calls Sam's brother and asks him to take Maan home...

He somehow gets him back...

After he leaves Maan starts searching for his drink...

But Dadi has clared the house and there is no trace of it...

Maan needs it badly to sleep...

He usually drinks till he faints...that'show he falls asleep...

But today he can't sleep even after so many rounds...

All b'coz of someone...that person will never let him sleep in peace...haina?

Maan gets mad and starts kicking off the things...

He smashes the furniture and dadi is scared...

Just then Nakul comes with a baggage...

Maan: ye kya hai?

Nakul: ye aapke liye hai

It's a gift from someone...

Maan is not in a mood for all this...

He stares Nakul...

Nakul keeps it on a corner and leaves...

Maan gets furious and rushes to smash the gift...

But he stops when he sees it...

He finds the letters "GEET" ...

Yes, it's from Geet...

Maan ka gussa aur badjaatha...

Toh usko mera b'day bhi yaad hai?

Nahi chahiye mujhe ye sab...

Maan: I never expected anything from you Geeet...

He keeps staring it...

Dimag kehtha hai ki bhool jao, koi faida nahi, par ye dil kehtha hai ki Geet tumme kabhi bhool nahi sakthi...

Aur ye Dil hamesha sahi hotha...

Haan Geet bhi mujhe kabhi bhool nahi sakthi...

Maan walks towards the gift...

It's very neatly packed and there is a huge card...

"GEET HANDA"

Maan is reminded of Geet's smiling face...

He had been waiting for this all day and finally he had got it...

A b'day present from his Mishti...

Aakhir Mishti Maan ko kaise bhool sakthi?

He is curious to know what it is...

He takes a closer look...

He opens it and is surprised...

Yes, it's his most favourite gift...

He had been waiting for this only...

Now he doesn't care whom it's from, he rushes to grab it...

That's the only savior for him now...

That's what gives him some peace of mind...yes, his drink...

Maan opens the cover in a hurry...

He has gone out of his mind and thanks Geet for this...

Whatever it may be between us...she know me very well, she knows what I need the most...

So, now he is ready to forgive Geet...

Maan: Geet, I love ypu...

Maan's eyes widen seeing what's in front of him...he is beaming with joy...

Finally he can sleep in peace...he has got his medicine...his sleeping dose...

Maan takes out a bottle and smells it...

He is so happy...he is on cloud nine...

This is what he was yearning for...

And this is the key to his heaven...

Maan looks at it with greed...

Come my darling...no one can keep us away...

We are made for each other...

Come, let's celebrate together...

Maan's eyes fall on something hanging from it...

All his happiness vanish in a second...

He finds a note along with it...

"Enjoy...The only thing you love in this whole world..."

Maan is reminded of the days at sanjeevani...

How she offered him just like this that day...

Her tricks won't work today...

She is no one to stop MSK...

Ek bar jo galdhi kar dhiya uss galthi ko MSK dubara kabhi nahi karega...

Thank you very much Mishti...

Really you know me better than me...

That's why you have sent me what I realy needed at this moment...

He just takes a sip and couldn't swallow it...

It feels as if he is drinking acid...

Yes, it realy is like that only...

But he never knew he would ever hate his drink as he does today...

Why? What the hell happened to me?

He forces it in...

But he is not at all happy...

All that comes to his mind is Geet's winning smile...

He hates that...he hates losing to this stupid girl once more...

No...you can't win this time...

He tries hard to drink but just couldn't...

He keeps staring at that all night and falls asleep thinking about his Geet...

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Posted: 11 years ago
dono k ego bahut badi hai...sahi hai...lage raho...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part😊
when will maaneet sudrenge
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update still he is blamming geet and loved geet's gift exactly its perfect gift for him
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 42

Next day...

Dadi comes to see him as it's already noon and he is still asleep...

She knocks but maan wouldn't open the door...

Dadi is realy scared...

She calls sam...

She too comes and tries to persuade him to open...

But Maan is stubborn...

He won't come out until he finishes every drop that his Geet sent him with love...

He has realy gone mad...

Ye ladhki mujhe pagal kardegi...

Aakhir ye mujhse chahathi kya?

Mein issko aaise hi pi pike marjaoon?

Ya ye mujhe rokhne ka naya tareeka hai?

Agar ussko meri itni fikar toh samne kyun nahi aathi?

Kyun mujhse dhoor bhaagthi?

Ye samajthi kya apne aapko?

Aur mein kissi ki baat ko nahi mantha...

Agar mein isski baat mankke issko pitha toh usski jeet hogi...

Geet sochegi..."Haan ye kabhi nahi sudhrega...mein hi sahi hoon...meinne issko chodkke sahi kiya hai...Aur mera shak sahi hai...ye kabhi daru nahi chod saktha..."

Agar mein issko nahi pitha toh bhi ussika jeet hoga...

Maan could see Geet's triumphant face...

"Dekho meinne tumme kaise ullu banadhi...dubara!!!!"

Ab bechara Maan kya karega?

Soch sochkke pagal ho gaya hai...

Sam: Maan, darwaza kholthe ho ya nahi?

Maan: nahi, tum sab jao

Sam: tumme kya ho gaya? tum pagal ho agye ho kya?

Maan: haan, haan, mein pagal ho gaya hoon

Dadi: Maan bete, ye kya hai? aap please darwaza kholiye, hum aapko kabhi kuch nahi kahenge, aap jo chaho kar sakthe, hum aapko kabhi nahi rokhenge

Sam: Maan, dadi ke liye toh darwaza kholo

Dadi: agar Geet hothe toh aap aaise nahi karthe

Maan opens the door immediately...

Maan: dadi, usska naam mat lo, I hate Geet...

Maan chilatha...

Maan: I hate you Geet Handa...

Sam: then why are you always thinking about her?

Maan: nahi, I don't remember her

Sam: then forget your past...think about dadi, think about us, we all love you, the world doesn't end with Geet, you have to see that you are not alone, you have your friends and family and your fans

Maan: haan, mein akhela nahi hoon

He will show her that he is not alone...

Yes, actually he is not alone...

Armaan, Sid and others from Sajeevani keep visiting him in turns every weekend...

Dadi is there for him as always and now Mr.Khurana too had visited him a couple of times...

Dadi is so happy that her son is here...

And there is this no 1 fan of him Sameera who keeps calling him and wishing him a speedy recovery...

And the fans keep messaging him on the social networks...

Maan gets in touch with them to keep his mind calm and stay away from his bad habits...

He just finds this crazy, what has he done?

Nothing...he has just been selfish all the time...

He played for himself...as he loved winning...

But that has got him so much love and fame...which he doesn't deserve at all...

Maan doesn't take that seriously but after a few days of rehab he realizes how crazy his fans are...

It's always good to be a celebrity it seems...

You will find so much love that you wish to achieve something atleast for them...

Maan decides to live up to his fans expectations...

He gets thousands of mails and many calls...

Sameera visits him everyday and her speech gives him strength...

He feels as if he has found a new reason to live...

Yes, he wants to play cricket again, he wants to live again...atleast for this crazy fan of his...Sam...

He owes her that much...

Her wish is to see him wear the blue shirt again...

And this is not a big deal for MSK...

He just needs to give up drinking and everything will be fine...

Maan somehow stays away from drinks...

But it's very hard for him to restrict his cravings...

It's not easy for him to concentrate...

Although he tries to focus on the game he couldn't...

His hands start shivering and he couldn't even see the ball clearly...

He then gives up thinking that it's over...

He feels that he has no more fire in him...

He is so exhausted and just needs rest after all that he had done to his body...

He feels as if he has lost his strength...it's time to hang up your boots...

He is angry with himself for ruining his career...

Now he is a total failure...

No one would want him in the team...

He is no more THE MSK...he would only be a lialbility even if he manages to get a place in the team with his influences...

He won't want to just sit in the benches as a member of the team without contributing...

So, he thinks it's better to quit...

He announces his retirement...

All his fans are disappointed...

Sam is the most disappointed...

After all the hard work he can't give up like this...

He had to try hard...

But he needs some kind of motivation...

She tries all the tricks...

She asks Armaan, Sid , her brother and all Maan's teammates to speak to him...

But no one could convince him...

agar Maan ne ek bar decide karliya toh apne baat ko bhi nahi mantha, haina?

One morning...

Maan has stopped going out...

He stays at home and spends him time with dadi...

He is in house arrest for he is scared that he would get back to drinking...

Dadi feels very bad for him...

He is like a prisoner in his own house...

And this loneliness is very dangerous for him than drinks...

This is killing him faster...

He has lost interest in everything...

He has stopped smiling...

He has stopped talking...

He has stopped his workouts...

He just kills the time watching TV...

There too he avoids cricket...it hurts him very much...

He is punishing himself for his deeds...

He lost his love just b'coz of his bad habit...

He lost his life and career too...

Now he is a burden for his family...Dadi...

He has become useless now...

He doesn't know anything but cricket and his cricketing days are over...

He doesn't know any other business...

What will he do now?

This emptiness tempts him to drink again...

He has no better company than that...

Btu he couldn't for he can't see dadi suffer anymore...

Dadi stays with him 24*7...

She makes sure he is not left alone anytime...

Either she or Sam give him company wherever he goes...

He rrely gets out of the house...

Dadi forces him to accompany her to the hospital...

The doctors tell him that Dadi's heart is weak and she shoudn't stress...

Ye bhi dadi ka hi plan hai...

Maan realizes that he had been the cause of all this and that he should take care os his Dadima now...

He has to keep her happy...

Meanwhile Sam is busy trying to get him back to the cricket grounds...atleast for his net practice...

He can play cricket with his friends and that way he will be engaged...

Sam comes with a surprise visitor one day...

Maan is confused...

Ye yahan kya kar raha hai?

It's none other than the little boy that Maan helped...no no...Geet helped...

Maan: tum toh Neyan haina?

Boy: haan

Sam: haan Maan, ye toh tumse koi baat karna chahtha hai

Maan: tum yahan kaise?

Boy: Maan uncle, aapne mujhe promise kiya haina?

Maan: what?

Neyan: bhool gaye ho? he is disappointed...

Maan: mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai, tum hi bathao, kya baat hai?

Neyan: aap ne kaha ki aap mujhe training doge jab meri tabyat teek hogi, ab dekho mein bikul teek ho gaya hoon

Maan tries hard to remember but he has never said anything like that ...

Maybe he doesn't remember for he was with Geet that time and he might have promised him to impress her...

Kya patha meinne kya kya promise kiya tha? Jab bhi Geet ke saath hotha hoon mujhe toh kudh hi samaj mein nahi aath ki mein kya kartha? Haina babaji?

Maan: haan, haan yaad hai

Neyan: toh training shuru karein?

Maan: training?

Neyan: haan

Maan: abhi?

Neyan: mere paas kit bhi hai, dekho

Maan: teek hai, par mein kaise?

Neyan: Maan uncle, agle mahene hummare tournament hai, state team selection bhi hoga

Maan: par tum yaha kaise aaye ho?

Neyan: mein toh yahi rehtha, Chandigarh mein

Maan: tumme ahcnak mere yaad kaise aayi?

Sam: tum usski madat karoge ya nahi? Meinne hi ussko yahan kaya tha, ye mere bhai se tummare barein mein pooch raha tha

Maan: tum aone bhai ke paas kyun nahi lekhe jaathi issko?

Neyan: nahi, mujhe aapse hi seekhna hai

Sam: dekha

Maan: lekhin I have retired na

Sam: come on Maan, you just have to train him

Neyan: haan uncle

Maan agrees to train him...

They start practicing from that day...

Maan was reluctant but Sam came to take him at 4 am ...

Maan just went to sleep...

He could hardly open his eyes...

Sam pours water over him...

Maan gets angry...

Sam: tummare wajhe se mujhe aadi raat ko jagna pada aur tum yahan so rahe ho, jaldhi utto

Maan: Sam, mujhe sone do, tum bhi sojao

Sam: Maan, Neyan ghar se nikhal chukka hai

Maan: what?

Sam: tumne promise kiya na?

Maan: kab?

Sam: hare, utto, utto

Sam pulls his quilt...

Maan had to wake up...

Maan pulls it back...

Maan: achha baba, tum chalo, mein aatha hoon

Sam: mein neeche intrezaar karthi hoon

Maan gets ready and he feels refreshed waking so earlt and heading to the ground...

It's such a nice feeling...

Just to get back to his favourite ground where he had trained as a kid...

He thinks about his childhood days...

He is determined to achieve something...

He is very happy to be associated with cricket somehow...

Maan is very happy that he could help someone...

He also gets back his form...

Neyan gets selected for the state junior team...

He is so happy...

Maan goes to the stadium to watch him...

And the board members want him to play for the Ranji team again...

Sam's brother had told about Maan's hardwork and his efforts to get Neyan in the junior squad...

Board members are pleased to hear that he loves his game so much...

They want to give him another chance...

Sam and his brother too insist that Maan starts playing again...

That would be an inspiration for a lot of youngsters...

Maan finally agrees to play again...

Sam is very happy...

It's a big win for her...

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Posted: 11 years ago
ye kya hua..maan hates geet
sam is close to him
aage kya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan still hates geet and sam became close
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Posted: 11 years ago
ye sam beech me kaha se aagyii😡😡
maan ka dimag sach me ghoom gyaa hai..
nice update/...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Nice update...


Some where I feel...jo kaam geet ko karna chahiye woh Sam karr rahi hain...


Geet pehle se jaanti thi Maan ke addiction ke baare mein...phir bhi uske saath nahi khadi hopayi...jab usse zaroorat thi...

Galtiyan toh sab karte hain...Maan ne bhi kiya...lekin...Geet toh usse pooch sakti thi...ki kya hua...lekin usne aasaan raasta chuna...

Mujhe acha nahi laga raha hain...kuch karo...

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