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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 37

Maan is in the news but for the wrong reasons this time...

Geet comes out to see what's the breaking news this time...

She is afraid that it may be a hit and run case...

Babaji? kissi ko kuch nahi hona chahiye...

Aur Maan? She just holds her breadth till she sees him on the screen...

Thank god he is fine...but what's the problem?

Maan is seen at a pub...

This is a CCTV footage that had been circulated in the media from mid-night...

Everyone has forgot the match and is only curious about the after match party...

Geet ko kuch kuch samaj mein aagaya...

The reporter..."jaisa aap dekh sakthe ki MSK uss waqt wahan kya kar rahe the? Suna hai ki MSK ka ye bahut purana aadat hai, aur jab kissi ne unke Girl friend ko cheda MSK nashe mein ussko tappad mara, dekho usski statement..."

Victim..."kal raat party mein Maan kcuh zyzda hi pee gaya tha aur sabke saath jagdah karna shuru kardhi...aur jab meinne galthi se uss ladhki pe takraya ussne mujhe tappad mara, aur mujhe jaan se marne ki damki dhi..."

Reporter..."jaise ke apne suna, MSK kal raat nashe mein the aur unhonne inko jaan se marne ki koshish ki..."

Ab toh media ko ek news milgaya toh do din ke liye issi se kaam chalayenge, haina?

Geet switches off the TV...

She can't watch Maan like that...

Just as she feared he had landed himself into trouble once again...

All b'coz of that bad habit...

Last night Maan had been taken to the police station and that's why he couldn't attend Geet's calls...

The officer switched off his mobile...

He had not done anything wrong...

He was just staying with Sam while the others enjoyed their drinking...

He was telling sam about Geet...

Sam was also happy that atlast he gave up drinking...

She wanted to see Geet and he was showing Geet's video on the mobile...

That's when that rougue came into the scene...

He was looking at Sam with bad intentions and Maan warned him to get away from that place...

Sam tried to drag him out of that place...

That's when that idiot snatched Maan's mobile...

Gunda: ye item toh bahut kamaal ki hai

He commented looking at Geet's photo...

Gunda: isska no hai kya? ek raat ke liye kitna mangthi? Lagtha hai bahut mahengi cheez hai?

That's it...Maan couldn't control himself and he gave him left and right...

Sam's brother came and stopped Maan ...

Then the two gangs clash and the Pub manager called the police...

Everyone had his own story and the media flashed the most interesting and spicy version...

That's what help them get the TRP's na?

Sam explained the truth to the police and Maan was left out...

But the news is that Maan used his influence to get away...

Geet in her anger believed that story...poor girl! She thought that it's all b'coz Maan got himself drunk and invited trouble himself...

Maan looked at the missed calls from Geet and called her...

But Geet is in no mood to hear anything from him...

She just starts shooting questions at him...

She never lets him explain...

She has already concluded that Maan has made a big mistake ...

She is not going to forgive him for that...

After aal her efforts to keep him away from drinking she had failed miserably ib the end...

Hse is so frustrated...she is also feeling guilty that somehow she might have been the reason for this incident...

Had she gone to Chandifagrh she might have accompanied him and he would have had no chance to touch the bottle...

But the truth is Geet, Maan would have reacted even worse had you been there and that rascal misbehaved with you...

But then you would have known the truth...

Maan: halo, Geet

Geet: kal raat aap wahan kyun gaye?

Maan: what?

Geet: mein sab jaanthi hoon

Maan: tum kya jaanthi ho?

Maan has just now woken up and has no clue about the flash news...

Geet: meinne dekha tha, aapko

Maan: achcha, toh tumme toh kush hona chahiye

Maan thinks about the match...

Geet: haan, haan mein toh bahut kush hoon

Maan: tummare liye toh mein kuch bhi kar saktha hoon Geet

Geet: mujhe patha haina, aap kya kya kar sakthe?

Maan: Geet, tum itna gusse mein kyun ho?

Geet: aapko nahi patha?

Maan: chodo na, ye toh har celebrity ke life mein hotha hai

Geet: dusroon ke liye aap celebrity ho

Maan: toh tummare liye?

Geet: kuch bhi nahi ho

Maan is shocked...

Maan: kya kaha tumne?

Geet: haan, aaj ek badh hummare beech mein kuch nahi hai

Maan: Geeet

Geet: mein bhi kitni pagal hoon ki meinne aap ke bathon ko itna barosa kiya

Maan too gets angry...

Maan: tum kehna kya chahathi ho? seedhe seedhe bolo

Geet: aap kal raat Sameera ke saath Pub gaye the ya nahi?

Maan: what? Tum mujhpe shak karthi ho? phir se?

Geet: aap jawaab kyun nahi dethe?

Maan: Geet, this is ridiculous

Geet: ye mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi hai

Maan: tumme jawaab chahiye?

Geet: haan

Maan: haan haan, mein Sam ke saath Pub gaya tha, ab kush

Geet just cuts the call...

Geet is very upset that Maan has broken his promise not to touch that poison again...

But he has failed to keep up the promise, she feels that it's only a fake drama to woo her...

He is not taking anything seriously, not even Geet but only his drinks...

So, let him do whatever he wants...

And she will mind her own business hereafter...

No more advises and no more intruding in his life...

It's his life, he has to take the call if he really wants to quit it...

She can't keep watching him 24*7...

That's the last time Maan hears from Geet...

Maan is fed up with her attitude...

She never had any faith either in Maan or in his love...

She keeps suspecting him day after day...

And now thuis is too much...

She suspects him ans Sam?

What the hell? Who is she to tell him whom to meet and whom to avoid?

She has no right whatsoever even if she marries him oneday to decide what's he doing...

These girls are always suspicious and Geet is no exception...

Maan also avoids calling her...

Let her apologize for her mistakes if she wants to continue their relationship...

This time MSK has done nothing wrong except loving her so much...

That's something he is yet to overcome...

He can't stop thinking about her and even though she is far far away he feels as if she is with him always watching him with her hawk eyes...

Maan thought that she would realize her mistake and come to him sooner or later...

Meanwhile Maan's buddies start occupying the void left by Geet in his life...

He needed some diversion and that helps him forget her...

He starts to hang out with them 24*7 and couldn't resist their compulsions to have a sip...

And that's the beginning of his downfall...

Earlier he has been suspended for a series for misbehaving in Chandigarh ...

The board had also found that he had already caused trouble in that drunken driving case...

Now the press comes up with a lot of stories about his drinking habits and make a mockery of his character...

Maan misses his game and he has no one to comfort and console him...

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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh mu kuch jyaada hi badthi jarahi hai aur ab geet ne breakup kardiya aur maan bhi geet ko avoid karna shuru kiya aur friends ke saath milkar phirse old maan bankar apna career daav par lagaraha hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭oh no what happen to Maan. He was doing to so good. I hope everything works out between them
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Posted: 11 years ago
VERY SAD
GEET TRY TO UNDERSTAND MAAN

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 38

Dadi has given up all her hopes after she realized that even someone like Geet couldn't change him for the better...

He has ruined his future himself and dadi didn't want to ruin Geet's life too...

Dadi thinks that Maan doesn't deserve Geet and her affection...

Maan finds solace in drinking...

But this time he feels guilty whenever he is sane and he keeps himself intoxicated to overcome that guilt...

He knows somehow that he is letting down someone...

He knows very well that Geet's anger would turn into hatred when she comes to know that he is drinking again...

But he couldn't control himself for he has become so addictive...beyond any rehab...

Geet on the other hand keeps thinking about Maan 24*7 and worries about Dadi too...

She decides to meet Dadi once and tell her everything... Why she has stopped coming to KM?

Why she has distanced herself from Maan...

Geet goes to meet dadi next morning...

She finds no one in the house...

Nakul comes and tells her that Dadi is still asleep...

Geet is worried...

She asks Nakul where the hell his Maan Sir is?

Nakul says that eh had not returned home last night...

Geet rushes to see dadi...

Dadi is awake but is not feeling well...

She is so depressed that she hardly comes out of her room...

Dadi is surprised to see Geet...

Dadi: Geet bete, aap yahan?

Geet: dadi, aapki tabyat toh teek haina?

Dadi: haan bete

Geet: lekhin aapko dekhke aaise nahi lagtha

Geet checks her...she is alright...

Geet is relieved...

But she is very disturbed...

Geet: dadi, chalo hum aaj kahin bahar chalthe hai

Dadi: nahi bete, aap ko hospital jaana haina?

Geet: woh aaj mein chutti leloongi, aap jaldhi tayaar ho jao

Dadi: par bete, hummara mann nahi kartha kahin jaane ki

Geet: toh teek hai, aap mere saath Sanjeevani aayiye, sab se milthe toh aapko achcha lagega

Dadi: Geet

Dadi looks into her eyes...

Geet knows what's in her mind...

Geet: ji Dadi

Dadi: kuch nahi

Geet: dadi, aap Maan ke barein mein hi poochne wale the

Dadi looks worried...

Geet: mein sirf aapse milne aayi hoon

Dadi: hum jaanthe hai bete

Geet: aap bhura nahi manoge na?

Dadi: nahi toh, aapne bhi kitni koshish ki, ab unki taqdeer hi aaisa hai toh hum kya kar sakthe?

Geet is also very unhappy...

She tries to hide her feelings but Dadi knows everything...

She only hopes Maan realizes Geet's love one day...

Geet takes dadi to sanjeevani...

Everyone is happy to see dadi...

They all surround dadi and greet her...

They avoid talking about Maan for they didn't want to make her sad...

They try top keep her happy atleast for the time being...

Armaan feels that he should help Maan somehow...

Dadi thanks Geet for the outing and she promises to come and meet them often and leaves...

Geet is worried about Maan, he has not come home...

Where could he be?

She tells about it to Armaan but says that she is only concerned about Dadi...

Dadi is so frustrated with Maan's behavior...

Geet vents her anger on Armaan...

Geet: tum logon ko peena hai toh ghar beitke piyo, bahar jaake apna beizatti kyun karwana chahathe ho

Armaan blinks...

Geet: what?

Armaan: kuch nahi

Geet: you people never think about family

Ridhi stares Armaan...

Ridhi: haan

Armaan: what?

Ridhi winks...she is just trying to calm Geet...

Sid just comes...
Sid: hi Geet... tummara Maan kahan hai?
Armaan and Ridhi try to stop Sid...
Geet is already upset and this Sid would make her cry...
Geet: excuse me

Geet is almost in tears...

She leaves for she doesn't want the others to see her crying...

Ridhi is very upset...

Ridhi: geeet

Armaan stops ridhi...

Armaan: let her go, she needs to be left alone

Ridhi: but she is my friend

Armaan too wants to help Geet

Armaan shares his thoughts with ridhi...

Ridhi: haan, mujhe bhi bahut bhura lagtha hai

Armaan: humme hi kuch karna padega

Ridhi: mujhe lagtha hai ki humme Geet se baat karni chahiye

Armaan: nahi, Geet iss barein mein baat nahi karna chahathi

Ridhi: woh toh hai, par Geet hamesha udaas rehthi, kissi se baat bhi nahi karthio, mujhe toh Geet ki chintha hothi hai

Armaan: I know

Sid joins them...

He also wants to help them...

Sid: hare yaar, iss Maan ko kya ho gaya?

Ridhi: tum ladekhon ko toh dusron ki koi kadar hi nahi, dekha dadi ko, kitna dukhi hai

Sid: haan, mujeh lagtha hai ki dadi ka pyaar hi Maan ko bigada hai, ek bar mar kayega toh teek ho jayega

Sid gets angry...

Armaan: hai Mr.cool, what happened?

Sid: I just hate to see Geet like this, mujhse bhi baat nahi karthi

Armaan: haan, hum bhi issiliye pareshaan hai

Sid: but Maan is not a bad guy, he was so nice

Armaan: yeah, but the problem is he is an alcoholic

Ridhi: par pehle toh aaisa nahi tha?

Armaan: nahi, pehle se hi problem tha

Sid: Geet ne hi usko sudarneki madat ki

Ridhi: phir Geet hi kuch kar sakthi?

Armaan: lekhin Geet bahut naraaz hai

Sid: mein baat kartha hoon usse

Armaan: nahi, iss bar Maan se baat karthe hai

Sid: that's a good idea

Sid laughs...

Armaan stares him...

Sid: what? He won't be in a condition to listen

Ridhi: he is right

Armaan: but we have to stop him

Ridhi: but no one knows where he is?

Sid: I know

Armaan: what?

Sid: hare, mujhe patha hai ki usska favourite place kaunsa hai

Armaan: toh chalo, hum chlake baat karthe hai

Ridhi: mein Geet se baat karke dekhthi hoon, ek bar donno milthe toh shayad sab teek ho jayega

Armaan: OK then, come on Sid...

Sid and Armaan go to meet Maan in that Pub...

As Sid expected Maan was there only...

Half conscious...he doesn't even recognize them...

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Posted: 11 years ago
poor dadi iss umar mein kitna kuch sehrahi hai maan ke kaaran armaan sid and ridhi wants to help maan and geet hope kuch acha ho
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 37
nice part...
great...
very good...
stupid gadha Maan...
already u have a reputation and u are blaming Geet for doubting and getting angry on u...
idiot have u ever cleared everything with her?
poor Geet...
once again he has fallen in the same thing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 38
awesome...
poor Geet...
shes also hurting...
but Maan is finding solace in the drinks...
Dadima has also lost her hope on this idiot...
hope this its the friends who make the gadha stupid ullu Maan to see sense...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
NICE
BAD THAT MAAN AGAINT STARTS TO DRINK BUT GEET IS ALSO SOME WHAT RESPONSIBLE FOR IT

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update, the story is progressing well.

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