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Posted: 11 years ago
very emotional part yaar..just because dev lust..maaneet are suffering..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lenageorge

superb ss yaar
read all the 11 parts in one go
geet sacrified herself for annie
maan is feeling helpless in this situation
hope maan realize the situation and it's only him can make geet okay


Thanku so much dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

wonderful story !! read all the parts today !! maan went out of control, seeing his geet in somuch pain and suffering !! may be only geet would be able to stop him from torturing self...they have to let go the painful past...for their future happiness...!!


Thanx a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago






Kaare Badra

Part - 12


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From this part onwards... the story will be back from Geet's side...

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I fought with a strong unsettling feeling with a thudding heart when I opened my eyes. My surroundings were unfamiliar but the entire place carried a warmth to calm me. I tried thinking about my whereabouts but before I could give myself some time to get in to terms with all the new feelings I was experiencing, I again heard some loud noises.

I thought I was still dreaming but the sounds were too loud to ignore. So I walked towards those noises which were coming from down the stairs. I looked here n there to find someone to know where m I ? But strangely I didn't fear to move in an unknown place. It carried a sense of belonging so taking firm steps I descended the stairs to floor below, which looks like a basement n as I reached the last step, the noises became clearer making me freeze at my place.

Maan... Please don't do this to yourself... Open the door...

Bhai... Pleassseee... Darwaza kholiye...

I couldn't hear a word anymore as recalled the incident before I fainted n the realization sunk - in about the place I m at. The worried faces of Aniee, Yash n Meera were enough to take my fears to a new height. And I couldn't hold myself from asking in a very low n anxious voice...

Kya hua ??

Geet...

Both Meera n Yash rushed towards me to check if I was ok ?? But what feared me the most were the down casted eyes of Aniee, who did turn after hearing my question but didn't meet my gaze.

My heart was beating so fast as if it would come out any moment. I have spent last 2 years running away to avoid this day. So taking a few cautious steps forward I called her again, in a way, I know she'll have to look back. With each of those few steps, the fear of was multiplying, with each breath I was praying to prove that nagging feeling to b wrong.

But one look in her eyes was enough for me to know what she has done...



Aniee ?? Nooo... my voice cracked as I realized that the worst of my fears were coming alive, this was what I had been running from. I wanted the earth to swallow me, wanted the time to stop so that I don't have to face the worst of my nightmare. I broke down n fell on my knees crying as Aniee rushed towards me

I m sorry Bhabhi...

No Aniee... How could u ??? U promised me...

I m very sorry...

Why Aniee ??? Why ??

Bhabhi...

I told u... He'll never b able to take it... Why ??

Main kya karti bhabhi... nahi dekha jaa raha tha aap dono ko yun ghut ghut kar jeete hue...

Kneeling in front of me she joined her hands crying n apologizing but I was too lost to understand anything right now. I was sobbing uncontrollably when Meera came n held me coz I know very well the amount of damage done.

Geet... Please ... aapne aap ko sambhalo...

Yes Geet... Hez already going mad since he got to know the truth... its only u... who came stop him...

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My heart was beating so fast with mixed emotions of fear, guilt, happiness, anger n pain. Fear of facing him knowing that there could b no escape now, guilt to have made him suffer without any fault, happiness of having him so close after so long, anger on him as he had been hurting himself when he knew it hurts me the most and pain as I know hez been suffering since he know the harsh circumstances we had been thrown into by our destiny.

Aniee, Yash, Meera n the servants have all gone back upstairs. They left after one of the servant found the duplicate key of Gym n opened it for me to enter n handle an angered broken soul.


As I enter the dimly - lit room, I tried to b as quiet as possible. But when did either of us required words to make our presence felt. I froze after taking just two cautious steps with the site in front of my eyes whereas Maan stilled at his place. I know he could sense me around him.

The silence lingered between us but neither he turned nor I called him. Our hearts were crying with longing while our eyes pouring their pain in the form of tears. When the heavy silence became too painful to bear I whispered his name, knowing he would be drowned too deep in his self - loathing to take an initiative.

Maan...







Edited by its_me - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I m exteremly sorry...

My net stopped working...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read all the parts
Loving this story
Hope geet will control maan's anger
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Posted: 11 years ago

Uploaded dear ... on the pervious page - Page 37...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates dear...thier pain is depicted so well
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Just read all the parts
Loving this story
Hope geet will control maan's anger


Thanku so much dear...

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