SS: Adhuri Dhadkan... Last part - pg 36, 26th Dec 2013

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Nice update.poor maan.hope geets forget her past soon.

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

beautiful dear

u pen down their emotions excelently

one request plzz in future use this song here: KHAMOSHIYAN GUNGUNANE LAGI from movie ONE 2 KA 4

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Very nice update.. very few ppl are like who accept other feelings..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

oh my feel so bad for them both
she wont be able to forget armaan due to his name
and she says she cant fall in love again
but he loves her
yet he cant tell her
he was still ready to marry her despite knowing all
and so was she
is that wise or not i dont know
but now that they are geting tied together in such strong bond they have to give it their 100%
pihu he is sad as she loves someone else
and your brother's name will never let her forget her lost love
well never say never
ahhh this will be hard for them both
specially maan since he loves her so much
but he will wait for that love to be returned
cheers for pm

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

im so sorry late hogai

but its fine

i dont know why u thought i would slap u for last update i think bcoz u killed armaan

but its fine with geet i want only maan

ok coming to this update loved it

n the honesty which geet showed was just wowww

i mean not all can confess the truth to their own people then confessing them to a total stranger who is going to change her whole life soon is totally a different matter but kuddos to her courage for it

n maan he is like a dream man

i dont know if such men exist in real life

have seen many geet's in real life but maan not sure if there are hardly any

but i love him yaar seriously

abhi toh usko pyaar ka ehsaas bhi theek se nahi huva hai aur uska pyaar already cheen gaya

but i truly wish he gets his love

in a way he is getting his love geet in his life but then she isnt completely his n maybe 1 day she will but hope till then his patience doesnt break down

n the lines they are just beautiful

main toh bohut phele se kehti aayi hu ke tere poems bohut ache hote hai par ab din par din aur bhi ache aur dil ko cho le aise hote hai

waiting for next update n take care

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

beautiful and touching updt ritzz..
i loved they way how u handled this entire situation very maturely..
such things r quite sensitive but u did really well...
he has already accepted her in his heart and no way wanting to let go
but she just thinks hez her destiny and she has to live with him no matter what...
their inner turmoil was beautifully depicted...just too gud
am short of words ryt now...
continue soon

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

awesome update

but felt bad for maan, poor he love geet but can't say this her!!!!

update next part soon!!!!!

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abhayprsingh

@abhayprsingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

ek saal kaise kata hoga geet ne..!! jis se pyar kia usi k sth ko tarasti rahi..kash geet maan ko apna le..

while reading part 2 dis poem came in my mind.. hope u'll lyk dis.. nd pls update soon..

Uss pyar ki tadap ko koi smjhega nai..
Uss dard uss kashish ko koi janega nai..
Tm to chale gae chodh k..
Khali mujhe kar gae..!!

Tujhse hi to thi zindagi me raunak..
Tujhse hi to thi meri khushiyan..
Kya khel khela hai..
Kismat me mujhe aaj fir jhanjhora hai..!!

Koi hai jo tujh sa hai..
Tere bin tera hi ek chehra hai..
Kya karun main??
Nai pta mujhe..!!

Badh rai hu aage..
Tujhe bhul kr..
Yaadon ka teri sahara tha..
Ab mujhe sath kisi or ka nibhana hai..!!