SS: Adhuri Dhadkan... Last part - pg 36, 26th Dec 2013 - Page 22

Maan ne to dil jeer liya Mera hayeee...how much he loves geet 😊

i loved that ending part you did great job buddy short and sweet story

Awesome SS
Loved it a lot
Maan fell in love with her at first sight whereas Geet was still living in the past. She was still the girl who loved Armaan... She just refused to let go of his memories without realizing it will only give her pain... The beach scene with armaan was cute... Then the accident... Geet was so heart-broken. But for her parents she decided to sacrifice. The way she locked armaan's memories was beautiful. She was letting him go slowly. The honesty she showed n told maan about her past... It showed her willingness to give everything to the relationship... Although she was confused rather denial about love. Though Armaan always remained in her heart, through the small gestures, their friendship, his comforting hugs n forehead kisses... Maan carved his way into her heart. He made a special place for him in her heart. How he comforted her during bidaai, told her to let go of armaan's memories n comforted her after the nightmare or asked sorry for no fault of his, just warmed her up to him. She was growing comfortable with him with the subtle teasing n gentle care n moreover support from family. Unintentionally though, Maan's care was slowly giving away hints of the extent of his love to her. The dance was so cute as she realized his love. Slowly she was developing feelings for him unaware. The talk with nandini however cleared her head, her feelings for him now crystal clear. She realized, Maan didnt replace armaan but created a space of his own in her heart. The eagerness to confess in both soul was evident. The accident just confirmed her of her love for him. Her confession before surgery was lovely and beautiful. Maan taking care, tricking her for medicines with his closeness was so cute. Then finally both accepting each other in terms of love and life partners was heavenly. Pihu teasing Maan was so funny. Poor Maan so irritated and finally the much awaited kiss. The whole journey from the 1st meet to their acceptance just showed the progress of their relationship and strength of love. Now in all sense they had truly fallen in love with each other. It was simply beautiful. The poems were beyond excellence n songs were so apt to the situation. Hats off to you for the poems. Well done mbd.😃 thanks for the pm. Do continue writing.