SS: Adhuri Dhadkan... Last part - pg 36, 26th Dec 2013

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Rituja

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Posted: 11 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

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me first...yiiipiiee...
Congrats on starting an ss ritzz.. and first things first
I am flat on your poems!!!❤️

i mean how gud can you be yaar... the way u started maan's pov and connected the same line with geet's pov...outstanding... just too beautiful.
they will be getting married.. he has fallen for her deeply..his feelings for her are true and deep
whereas she has lost the reason of her survival.. she thinks she wont be able to love him..

the start itself is so beautiful yaar... pata nahin aage aur kitna dhamakedaar hoga!!
cant wait for you to start updating...

Saasein mein le to raha tha

Un saason ko lene ki wajah aaj mili

Dil to har pal dhadak raha tha

Is dhadkan ko uski taal aaj mili...

Saasein to mein le rahi hu

Un saason ki wajah kahi kho gayi hai

Dil to abhi bhi dhadakta hai

Uski aawaz par kahi gumsum ho gayi hai...

am in love with those lines!!!

P.S. i loved all the verses you wrote ritzz...one of your best creations ever 🤗

Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 11 years ago

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me 2nd😭😭😭

cheating hai yeh huhhh

but love the intro

maan is waiting to start his new life with dreams of love while geet is being tied in a relation due to force

love the concept and waiting for it

but why is geet doing this in majburi???

Congooo for the new ss 🥳

n love the poems specially the last 4 lines ❤️❤️❤️

waiting for the story to begin!!!!!!!

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 11 years ago

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gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely start dear

loved maan's character in this story

so maaneet r getting married maan loves geet but she dont

does geet love someone else

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Sonali

@maaneetkisonali

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Posted: 11 years ago

congrats for the new ff di..
i m in love with the poems u wrote...
they are just outstanding...
lovely intro...
can't wait for more...
update soon

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

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Posted: 11 years ago

Intersting cncept.nice cs,cnt soon and thanks fr pm:)

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Read the prologue! Awesome... Especially the poem... so rhyming.. loved the way u portrayed the POV of both in the form of poem... so they r getting married and Maan loves her but she doesnt... will be waiting for further parts. continue soon..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow kya poetry thi
it summed up their feelings for one another perfectly
but why will she never be able to love him
we hope he will make her fall in love
if not that at least care for him
love after marriage now that i love to see
cheers for pm