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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
wonderful update..lovely maaneet moments..very cute convo between maan and dadi...😉pls pls cont soon..i'm madly in love with this story...👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
wow dey changed...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
read all parts
lovely story
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 15
Dadi was a little astonished to hear a different voice of Maan...She had seen Maan quite different after the death of her father...he was always talking in a very formal way...but today something she had seen was quite different...she had seen a shade of old Maan in his voice and she was happy to see this shade...
Here Dadi and his mother were also busy in finding a girl for him...but were rejecting most of them...
In the meantime Geet entered the hall and only heard the part where Maan says Love you. Somewhere it bothered her. Maan turned around and saw Geet. He thought that she might be going to see that movie...
M: Hey Geet. What are you doing here? I thought that you might be going to see that movie??
G: ( said a little skeptically) No I had a little work...
M: Okay
Geet was still curious about who Maan was talking to on the phone. Geet went to the table where files were placed.
G: Maan you were talking on the phone earlier...
M: Yeah I was
G: Who was it?
Get tried to portray that she did not care but still her voice held a possessive edge. Maan decide to tease her a little.
M: Oh Geet that was my Girlfriend!!
G: (Geet was astonished) WHAT!!!
M: Yeah Geet everyone has a girlfriend and I also have one...
and shrugged his shoulders
G: Yeah okay...and turned away
This really pricked Geet's heart a little.
Maan after a few seconds said with a smile
M: Geet by the way my girlfriend is my Dadima...
Geet felt a little stupid. She was embarrassed.
G: (taking a sigh of relief) Ohhh!
This was all she could say.
Maan Suddenly added...
M: Geet are you free?
G: Yeah I am why?
M: I heard that you graduated from London so I was thinking that you could give me a tour of your city...
G: Umm okay. How about we meet in half an hour in the lobby. Okay
Suddenly Geet got a call. It was one of her clients.
M: Who is it?
G: My boyfriend!!!! (sarcastically)
M: Really???
G: Yeah by the way my boyfriend is my business.
Geet said sarcastically. And both laughed
G: I'll meet you later (and walked out)
M: okay!
So after half an hour later they met up.
Geet wore a very casual stripped shirt with her blue jeans and flats. She had a casual coat in her arm to protact her from the cold weather outside.
Maan was awed by her beauty yet again. She was looking breathtakingly beautiful, innocent angel.
G: Maan???
M: Ohh yeah!!! I have arranged for a car from the hotel so let's go
G: Okay
G(Self thought) No doubt all the girls go flat on him... He is most handsome man!!!
They were walking outside..
Maan throws the keys toward Geet and Geet caught them instantly shrugging her thoughts.
M: Come on driver I have not got the whole day (sarcastically)
G: What?!!!!!! DRIVER???
M: Well you were the one who had to show me around...
G: Yes -
Maan cuts her off
M: So come ...
G: What was I thinking calling u a gentleman
M: Your fault
Geet ignored him
M: Okay fine I'll drive...Beside I don't want to end up in a hospital...
G: what!!!! What did you say?
M: Come on Geet lets go...seriously you argue a lot
G: Fine!!!then I will drive
M: Okay
Both smiled...
So they went out and started their tour. They went out to Geet's favorite places. (Don't know about much places)They day went well they had lunch at Hardees.
At Hardees:
In the end they were having ice-cream shakes. Geet took chocolate while Maan took vanilla
G: Hmmm...this is heavenly!!
M: Geet you are such a kid
G: And you act like a 70 years old grandpa...
Maan remembered their night at the beach. He smiled at that thought. That Geet and the Geet at the presentation were really different. She has so many faces
G: MAAN!!! Where are you?
M: No where...Umm Geet you are acting a little different today...almost like a kid
G: Maan I am always like that with my friends...So now bear with this friend
M: oh God!!!!
He said sarcastically.
G: Hey! Don't blame me you were the one who initiated this friendship thing
M: Okay...so Geet what's our next stop
Geet: Umm how about that Art museum...
Geet was very fond of the art. Both were enjoying and were describing their thoughts on different paintings.
Now it was 8 pm. They had roamed about many different places which were Geet's favorite places...Now it was time for dinner. Now Maan decided to go to an Indian restaurant...and Geet just knew the best place...
G: You know what Maan when I was doing my master's I used to come here a lot...as I used to miss Indian cuisine a lot...Come I will take you to the best place...
Here the restaurant which Geet took Maan into...had a very cozy environment...there were handicrafts on the walls...steel glasses on the tables...typical Indian culture... although it was not one of the high fi restaurants in London but still there was a lot of crowd...
The waiter came...
W: Hello Geet Ma'am. Welcome... You came after so many years...
G: Yes Nathan...I came here for a business meeting so I decided to come here too and meet you...
N: Thank you Ma'am...you are the only customer who gives so much respect to us people...
G: Com on Nathan...now don't give me your excuses...
N: No Ma'am let me thank you you...as you are the only one who bought me here to give me a job when I could not help my own family...
G: Nathan this was because I knew the owner of this restaurant...that is why he gave you the job...Now just forget it...how are your mother and your sister...
N: They are fine Ma'am...they always pray for your well-being...you have to meet them one day.
G: No this was my last day at London...will meet them some other time...Tell them that once I will come again I will not leave them...
Maan was a silent spectator to all this conversation...Her every move just stunned him...She was such a kind, helpful person...yet her inner personality she kept her hidden...
Mr. Mehta the owner of the restaurant came...
G: Oh!!! Hi uncle??
Mehta: I am fine my girl...How are you???
G: Uncle I am fine...
Mehta: Thank God you have shown your face after all these years... How is life going...
G: My Life is rocking Uncle...
Mehta: Geet I am sorry about your loss...Hope now everything is good...The day Pari told me I just couldn't believe...
G: Uncle...it okay...When God has to snatch something then it takes no time...but now all's well...I have coped with the loss...Hope I will cope further also...
Maan could hear the change the voice and the emotions in that voice...but he didn't say anything...
Mehta could not see this girl...He knew that this girl was quite different from what he saw 5 years...Mehta knew Geet from when she stayed in London...She used to come to this restaurant when she was feeling very lonely and was missing her parents and specially her mother's cooking...she had a particular place to sit that is at the end of the restaurant which was separated from the rest of the sitting area...in order to lighten the mood he diverted the conversation...
Mehta: Who is that boy...wait wait...Is that you Boyfriend???
G: No Uncle...you know me for the past 5 years and do I have a boyfriend from past these years that I will have one now...
Mehta: OH I just thought that may be you...
G: No uncle actually he is my friend...we met 3 days before in the business meeting...
Mehta: Geet you accepted friendship so early...as far as I know you don't
G: Uncle this case is different...
On the other hand Maan was happy that she called him his friend in front of others.
M: Ok then...where do you want to sit today???
G: Same place...
M: You know what I didn't let anyone else sit on that place. That place is just like that you left...
G: Thank you uncle!!! So sweet of you...
Both Maan and Geet reached the place at the corner...
N: What would you like to have...???
G: Same order for me..and Maan will tell his order...
M: Yes I will take butter paneer...and aloo kay parathay...with lassi...
The waiter leaves...
M: Geet you know these people...??
G: yes Maan I know them...every other day I used to come here... this restaurant has the best taste...so homely environment...Don't you think??
M: That it is...
After this both have their dinner...
M: The taste is the best...
G: Look I told you...
Mr. Mehta came...
Mehta: Geet you don't have to pay the bill...I will consider that I have given treat to my daughter...
G: Thank you!! But really uncle you just not need to...
Mehta: You treat me as you uncle...that why cannot I
G: But uncle...
Mehta: Geet I want no words now...
G: Now I will not say a word...I know you...
Mehta: Ok then do you want dessert...or anything..
G: No uncle Thank you very much. Already you have given me and my friend a treat. I can't ask for more...I missed this place so much...it was nice to have dinner here...Ok Uncle I will take your leave now...
Mehta: ok Geet take Care and you can call me when ever needed
G: Thank you Uncle!!!
Later both Maan and Geet left the place and moved forward towards the car...In-between their walk...they started their conversation
M: Geet today I really enjoyed myself...after so many years I have done what my heart said...by the way you bought me to a place for dinner now it's my turn to take you to a place for dessert...

Precap: Now where will Maan take her for dessert??

Firstly Happy New Year to all Of U Peaple!!! Hope this year bring us all the happiness, success, health and prosperity to our lives...
So here was the first update of this year!!!
Thankyou so much for commenting and liking this FF!!! It is only because of u ppl that i am updating this... or else i would have stopped long ago!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
nice update...
loved it...
happy new year...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
hi Happy New Year! Thanks 4 da pm n marvellous update! so they are nw friends! Geet upset wen Maan sed its his gf bt den tells its his dadima! Geet showing Maan London! Maan mesmerised by her beauty n she by hw handsome he looks! They argue again! They gt out n njoi n have dinner! Maan listens to da convo btwn Geet n Nathan n den Mr. Mehat n Geet! He admires Geet! Maan takin her 4 dessert! update soon, well written! Pls incl direct link in update! Thanks! Sorry 4 askin!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
something is changing...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR
lovely update
Geet didn't when maan said he spoke to his girl friend
Maaneet moments were sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Loved there bonding!!
Hope maan knows abt his angel soon😉
I don't want him to fall for geet n any mu's between them.
Waiting for the next! !
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Posted: 11 years ago
very lovely update..maan have seen the sweet geetu side...love the way this story progressing..pls cont soon.yaar n happy new year to you too..

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