MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December

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CONCEPT

PENCILS r made wid erasers to give u 2nd chance.
But d real logic is, eraser on d pencil was made small for u to remember that chances r limited.
This is life so are we...


hey guyz dis is a os again.I will complete will u marry me & den I will start to write my bar dayz...hope u like the concept.

Character:
Geet: A prostitute.lives in Mumbai & always wait for freedom.
she desire that some day her desire to be free to go out,to see world will come true.her parents died when she was very small.she was living with her maasi.she use to call her maasi as AAMA...

Maasi:her name is kalyani.she runs a kota in Mumbai. She is a huge selfish lady who only think of herself not of others.she use to talk to geet in a nice way just to remove work from her & earn money.

Maan khurana:A Guy filled with happiness & bubbly smiles. Have two best friends. Who always guide him in his life.he wanted to be a film director in future & after giving his final exams he decided to go to acting university of USA & dream to work in Hollywood & make fame for himself.
he loves his parents a lot & respect them but there is one more person in his life who is more important then parents & that was his bauji...

bauji:a police officer.very polite & always want that his maan should get all happiness & be happy.

Dad:want his son to be as successful as he is.
he always want that maan should get all he desire & all world's happiness.

Natasha:maans college crush. The most hot girl of the college. Always behind money & love to change boyfriend's l8ke tissue paper.

Prologue:

Love is a fire. The one who jumps in it would never come out of it.
The story revolves around two individuals who fall in love & fight for their love...

Maan:I will die without u...
Geet:I can't leave without u...
Maan: please tum bahar aajao..plze. .
someone was opening the door...
Geet:maan plze chaley jao...wo loog tumey maar dalegey..plze run away..
maan:I won't go without u geet...not this time...rukho mey kuch karta hu...
Geet:maan...

so howz it let me know...

INDEX:


PART 1

PART 2

PART 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91917583

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8

PART 9

PART 10



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nimi216 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plze give liks & comments should I continue with this ss...
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Continue ya we can encourage u
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Originally posted by: nishnal

Continue ya we can encourage u



Ty plze do read my os & ss...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Itnteresting concept..

Cont sn dear , will be waiting 😛
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wonderful and intriguing prologue...

continue soon...
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interesting concept...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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very interesting concept n CS...continue soon
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nice start
update soon👏
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Sounds Interesting yar...
Nice prologue..
Looking forward for it :-)

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