MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Love2read
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One request.

Can u write in english so readers who are not familiar with Hindi can also understand and enjoy ur story...

will surely do dat...

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

NICE UPDATE PLS GIVE LONG UPDATE

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sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

maan shocked

they talked

very short WAITING

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simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

awesome part
maaneet talking with each other

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Love2read

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

thanks nimi.

ur work was awesome.

really commissioner know the trick to tackle with teen kids..

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Awesome update...
Maaneet finally met properly
Geet only want freedom
Geet is gonna help maan to impress that girl...sorry forgot her name...
Maan's father always confuses me...

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...RIDDHIMA...
Awesome update...
Maaneet finally met properly
Geet only want freedom
Geet is gonna help maan to impress that girl...sorry forgot her name...
Maan's father always confuses me...

wht he confused u dear...

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love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

chalo geet aur maan mil gaye...dekhte hai inka yeh milna kya rang late hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

PART 5

Hey guys a request to all please help me with few south indian surnames which will go with geetanjali & maanraj.

I want two surnames please suggest as I m totally confused.

It's been a week,

geet was sitting in her room . suddenly her phone starts ringing.

Geet:hello...

maan:geet maan here...

geet:hmm...oh haan say.

Maan:you no what your suggestion really worked I took natasha out with me & spoke to her & all...we saw movie together but yaar still I haven't proposed her...

geet:oh...that fine at least in a week you took a step ahead.

Maan:hmmm...

Geet:so how was it...

maan:it was good but yoy no what she was only talking about her x-boyfriends & what they gifted her where all they went together & all...

Geet:what ..

maan:yes something was weird I mean why she was telling me about her x...

Geet:hmmm ...

maan:& yesterday she herself did hi to me.. & your avoiding formula also worked...

Geet:hmmm...

maan:hmmm...

Geet:if I asked you to do something will you do that...

maan:ya say it...

Geet:leave her...

maan:what...

Geet:yes leave her...she is not behind you she is behind your money...

maan:no geet natasha is not that type of girl.. you are getting her wrong

geet:how you no that even you don't know her so well right..

maan:yes but I have never heard such stuffs about her so...

Geet:ohk do as I say...u talk to her & say that one of your friend have got a new car & he is super duper rich...then let me no what she says. Ohk...

maan:ohk...

geet:ohk I m keeping now have some work bye...

Maan:bye take care...

geet smiles.

After keeping call of geet maan calls natasha.

natasha:hello...

maan:natasha maan here...you coming to college?

natasha:ya in an hour or so...

maan:ohk...see you there..

Natasha:ohk bye...

In college,

prem:yaar maan tune suna kya kabir ne nayi sports car li yaar uske baap ne di ussey as a birthday gift...

(Maan have heard kabir got a new sports car on his birthday his dad have got it fot him)

maan:tua usmey koansi badi baat hai...merey pass bmw sports hai...

(So what's big deal in it...even I hae bmw sports official)

prem:ohey...usne lamborgini li hai yaar...

(Oh...he got a lamborgini dude...)

maan:ohk...

prem:talking to you is just stupidity...you are always the same...

Maan:so don't talk...early morning you have started your nonsense & I am not your girlfriend to handle that.. go & eat alvina's brain I m with more important thinks today...

prem:f*** off I m going...

maan:bye...

Natasha:hey guys...whats up...

prem:bye natasha...as some1 is in bad m9od I suppose...

maan:teri...go now...

Prem:ohk...dude chill...

Natasha:what happen maan everything fine...

maan:ya...just worried for project...you say..

Natasha:ohk...

maan:hey will you come with me for a dinner date...

Natasha:date...

maan:I mean dinner & date as in we would go together so date...

Natasha smiles...

Natasha:ohk...

maan:so cool...today I will come to pick you then...

Natasha:ya sure...

maan:you no what kabir have got a new sports car his dad have given him...he is just super buper rich...& the car is just fabulous...I will borrow that from him fpr us...I m sure he would give ot to us...

Natasha:sports car...

maan:ya...

Natasha:they are so expensive right...

maan:yes his dad is daam rich...

Natasha:oh...

Natasha smiles.

maan:so today what time...

Natasha:aa...actually maan not today we will go some other day...

I just got a work which I forgot...

maan:really...

Natasha:ya I m really sorry but can't help myself ..

Maan:ohk...u carry on...I have a lec to attend.