MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

MAAN WAS ATTRACTED TO GEET ON SEEING HER FOR THE FIRST TIME

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

PART 3

Maan got ready for college. He comes out & takes place on the breakfast table.bauji was already sitting over there.

Maan:good morning bauji...

bauji:good morning beta..

Maan:tua aaj kya bana hai breakfast mey..

bauji:your favorite cheese omelette & wheat bread.

maan:hmmm.. yummm

bauji:ya...

maan:bauji aaj mey waha jane wala hu...

bauji:ohk...good par ek baat dhyan rakhna...

maan:hmmm kya...

bauji:wo tum jaha ja rahey ho waha mey aapne jawani mey jaya karta tha...

maan:kya...aap...

bauji:haan beta mey...in fact aadaat baan gayi thi ue meri...par mey issey tumari aadat nahi bane duga...mey tumeh bhej raha hu khuki I got want you to go on a wrong way...& if u did like me then u will spoil your life.

maan:kya baat khahna chate hai aap..

bauji:I won't confuse you...waha tum ja rahey ho par sirf maze lene ghar ya pyaar karne nahi...

maan:yes bauji...yesa kuch nahi hoga..

bauji:I hope you follow it...

Maan:ohk I m getting late so bye...love you..

bauji:mujhe bhi aaj police station jana hai duty dena hai aaj...chalo I will drop you..

maan:ohk lets go..

bauji drop maan to college. Maan & natasha where sitting in the canteen talking to each other.

they made a plan to go for a movie at night. Maan don't want to miss this chance so even he agreed. maan called his bauji & asked him not to worry about him & he won't be going to the place as he is npt interested.

Listing to this even bauji was happy.

prem & kabir join them.

prem:arey suan na project tua ho jayega par seminar ka kya karegey...

Kabir:ya yaar sabne aache topic liye hai..

maan:hmm..ham na Mumbai ke baremey karte hai...what say..

prem:na..

Kabir:yes Mumbai's night life...

prem:oh ya...night life...superb..

maan:hmm...chalega you both deside kya kaarna hai..

prem:kal raat ko jate hai..

maan:ohk I don't mind...

Kabir: ohk then tomorrow fix...

Next day,

Maan ,kabir & prem reach to a place.

maan:oye ye hum kaha aagaye...

prem:arey yehi ek place hai jiska interview aaj taak koi nahi soachta...& best place we will get full marks if we did it properly.

Kabir:yes maan & we have taken bauji's permission also so chill...

maan:kya shit ...tumhey pata hai ye place is like...I mean yaha par who comes...

Kabir:maan chill...aur chal we don't have pura din..

maan:you guys go I m waiting here only...I won't go inside...

Prem:as you wish chal kabir...

kabir & prem goes near bhua...

Kabir:wo hum yaha interview lene aaye thay...

prem:haan wo aapse phone par baat ki hogi commissioner ji ne...

bhua:oh haan tua tum loog ho...aacha thik hai par ek baat yaad rakhna jo ladkiya free hai unka internew lena..

prem:interview...

bhua:haan haan wahi...aur kissi key bhi kamre mey maat jana ghus jana nahi tua pata hai na kassey kassey photo milegey.. aur tumari teacher ko bhi pasand nahi aayega..

Kabir:hahah...ji aunty...

Bhua:aacha jao...

maan was standing outside looking here & there.bauji saw maan standing over there.

bhua:tu nahi jayega inke saat...

maan:ji nahi wo mujhe ye naahi pasand...

Bhua:aacha tikh hai jasi marzi...

Maan smiles. Suddenly it started raining & maan runs to take a shelter. he stands near a poll to be safe from rain.

he was drying himself that time he saw a pair of hand on the opposite side terrace.

The hands had bangles & a melodious laughter.

Maan tip on his toe to see hows standing over there.

he sees her hair & eyes.

maan sees her face his eyes popped out.

precap:same as b4

Edited by nimi216 - 12 years ago

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Nice update...
Totally different concept
Maan got attracted to geet in first meeting
Waiting for their official meeting

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

maan was attracted to geet
nice part dear loved it

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Different concept

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

nice part
maan attracted to geet in first meeting itself

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Love2read

@Love2read

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Wow maan and geet meeting...

Fantastic..

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

thank God Maan himself backed out...

yeh Bauji ka mujhe samajh nahin aaya...ek taraf saamne kheer ka katora rakh diya and then saying khana mat...he himself arranged that meeting then himself saying ki bigadna mat...yeh kya baat hui...what is the need to send him there in first place when he don't even know about that type of place...

so Maan decided even not to step inside that building...but he have seen Geet now...what will he do now...

very interesting...

thanx for pm...

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

lol maan doesnt wanna go in a kotha.. lol nice ff yaar.. cont soon.. cant wait for maaneet first meet

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nimisha khurana

@nimi216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

thank God Maan himself backed out...

yeh Bauji ka mujhe samajh nahin aaya...ek taraf saamne kheer ka katora rakh diya and then saying khana mat...he himself arranged that meeting then himself saying ki bigadna mat...yeh kya baat hui...what is the need to send him there in first place when he don't even know about that type of place...

so Maan decided even not to step inside that building...but he have seen Geet now...what will he do now...

very interesting...

thanx for pm...

i just loved your comment will disclose all ur doubt in next part.

tysm 4 the comment...😛