MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
different concept...
continue plz...
v'll definately support u.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1
Hey everybody,
this story which I m writing is a small os which will have maximum 5 parts.I don't expect lot of like & comments but yes do expect a bit of it...hope u like the story.
note:I would send pm for this story only to the one who comment as I have observed that many people don't read or even open the inbox so whoever want pm plze leave a msg.
This os is strictly 18+ so read on your risk...
any problem please pm me...


It was a bright morning,
A young boy was sleeping on the bed.it was morning 9'oclock.
rajveer(dad):beta it's 9 get up fast jog par nahi jana kya...
Boy:dad wait yaar...kya rooz rooz jogging...
rajveer:arey...get up fast terey bauji bhi aa rahey hai...
Boy:bauji aa rahey hai...
the boy gets up very fast & getz ready...
they come down wearing tracks.
Bauji:arey maan beta aaj tua sharp 9:30am kya baat hai..
maan:wo bauji aap aane waley thay na...
Bauji:terey bauji puri zindagi thodi tujhe sambhal ne wale hai...sudhar jao beta..
maan:bigda hi kaha hu aabhi taak sudharu kya..
he laughs & all start jogging. This is Mumbai where people get up late & start up late...

On the other hand, there was a girl nude sleeping with a boy...
the girl gets up & change her clothes.
Man:kitna maza aaya rani ek aur round kara dey..
girl:chal saaley...ja yaha se...paisa ek hi raat ka diya tha na chal abhi vatak yaha se...
man:aaj jata hu kal wapas aauga rani tujse maza lene...
girl:pheley paisa dena fir aana...samja..chal kalti maar...
the man takes a exit from the room.the girl takes bath & wear suit & comes down..
Bhua:kya hua aaj itna gussa kyu...
girl:bhua aaj kal kassey kassey loog aate hai yaha par...shi...sara body dhuk raha hai...
bhua:ja thoda aaram kar ley...aaj raat ek aur customer aane wala hai..
girl:hmmm...
bhua:aacha sun geet ek aur kal na ek purana customer aane wala hai..mey soach rahi thi agar tu uske sath pura din bitayegi thua aacha hota..
geet:bhau chalega...wasey bhi ye saab se bore ho chuki ho koi naya aayega tua maza aayega...
bhua:aacha ja aaram kar..
geet smiles & goes up stairs.
Maan goes to college.
Prem:ohey kaha kho gaya yaar...chal na..
maan:arey rukh na natasha aayegi...
prem:arey yaar wo natasha ki tua mey..
maan:oye..
prem:arey kitne ladke ghumati hai wo...
maan:arey uska breakup hua hai abhi...
prem:oh issliye tu chance marega..
maan:hahah...ya something like that..
prem:chal lec chalu ho jayega aur kabir wait kar raha hoga..
maan:aacha chal...
they come inside the class.the professor give them a project. Which they must submit in next two days.
maan come back home.
rajveer:kya hua aaj kafi jaldi aagaye..
maan:haa wo project mila hai..
rajveer:hmm...ohk...mey 1 week ke liye office ke kaam se UK ja raha hu...bauji aa rahey hai yaha par..
maan:ohk...bye..
maan goes inside his room & to relax himself he on his laptop.
He goes to a adult website & watch sum videos...
suddenly bauji comes to his room.maan close his laptop furiously.
He got scare...
maan:bauji aap...
bauji:itna dar kyu gaye mey hi hu...
Maan:nahi wo aap aachnak aa gaye tua issliye...
bauji:darta wo hai jo galat kaam karta hai..
maan:bauji...
bauji:chalo batao kya kar rahey thay..
maan open his laptop.
Maan:poud film dekh raha tha...
bauji:beta tum bhi na...kabhi nahi sudhrogey...
maan:kya karu...maza aata hai...
bauji:chal mey tujhe aasli maza deta hu...
maan:kasey. .
bauji make a call & then gives a address to maan.
maan:ye kya hai...
bauji:ye ek jagah hai jaha par you can do what ever you want jao maze karo...
maan:matlab...
Bauji:matlab tujhe pata chalega tu waha ja...parso ki tarik li hai mene...waha jana fir batana kya hua aur maza aya ya nahi...
maan:hmmm ohk...
it was night...
a man enter geets room.
geet:tua tu hai naya client...
man:haa...mera naam kunal hai...
geet:oh...kunal...bada handsome dikhta hai tu tua..
kunal:tu bhi item dikhti hai..
geet:shukriya...tua kaha se chalu karna hai...
kunal:kapdo se hi chalu kar dey...
the man comes near geet & remove her clothes...even geet removea her clothes.
He lied her on bed & comes on her...he kisses her & suck her mounts.
kunal:you are amazing...
Geet:sahab kiyu tadpa rahe ho khatam kardo..
he trust inside her & geet screams.
After few hours,
kunal gets up & wears his clothes.
Kunal:tujpey paise dena saach mey paisa wasul hai boss..
geet laughs...
geet:hu hi chiz mey yessi ki saab fida ho jaye...
kunal:chal meri biwi mera intazaar kar rahi hogi..
geet:kya sahab biwi hote hua ham jaso ke pass aana padta hai aapko..
kunal:meri biwi teri jitni sayani nahi hai na...
geet laughs...
kunal exit the room..
Geet sleepa there itself..

precap:maan to meet geet...

Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
u so fast u read everything
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good one continue it
but pls maaneet ko milana end mein
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Awesome start !!
Cnt wait for them to meet

do update sn
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IT IS DIFERENT BUT DOESNT SEEM TO HAVE A HAPPY END
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update..
But was shockd wen maan's bauji didnt say maan anything abt the film..
N more over he himself is sending maan thr ..
Hmm.. Nice...
Looking forward for maaneet meeting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue
nice...
poor Geet...
does she even know what shes doing and her Bua is making her do?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1
nice...
poor Geet...
so Maan is gonna visit her?
cont soon...

PS - post the link when u update in this thread dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2
Maan was sitting in canteen talking to his friends.
Kabir:arey maan wo dekh natasha aa rahi hai..
prem:arey wo tua yahi aa rahi hai..
maan:arey haa...aabhi..
Natasha comes near maan.
Natasha:can I sit with you guys...
maan:ya sure why not..
Natasha:thank you...
Natasha:hey prem I heard your girlfriend is troubling you a lot now a days..
Prem:hmm...but you do not worry for that natasha as I tua heard u just had a bad breakup...
Natasha:oh so you got to know that...
Kabir:everyone knows that...what's new...
Kabir gives a high five to prem.
maan:ohk cool down...that ohk now...
Natasha:exactly...we are friends so no benefit in fights...
Prem & kabir together:friends...aahaa...
maan smiles on this...
Natasha:so what's your plan today we can go out for lunch...
maan:ya done but after sociology lec...
Natasha:ohk...
prem:amm...I won't be able to join you guys alvina ke sath shopping paar jana hai...
Kabir:hmmm & even me...mujhe dad ke office mey jana hai...
Natasha:oh...tua maan we can go out..
maan:ya sure...mujhe kuch kaam nahi hai..
prem & kabir smiles.
On other hand,
A man come inside with bhua.
Bhua:geet tujhe inke sath aaj bahar jana hai...wo tujhe pura din ghumane waley hai...ja taiyaar ho ja...
geet smiles & goes up stairs to get ready.
The man was in his 30's so geet wore a silk sari & came down..
the man comes forward & takes geet's hand in his hand.
man:chaley...
geet nodes & leaves from there...
He open car door for geet & make her sit inside the car . than starts the car & than drive away.
Geet:sahab hum kaha ja rahey hai...
man:pheley tua mujhe sahab mat bulao...
Geet:tua kya bulao sahab...
geet smirk. The man comes close to geet & whisper in her ears
man:rohan...rohan bulao...
Geet:ohk sahab...
rohan bits her near nape.
geet:aah...sahab...
Rohan:rohan...sahab nahi...
geet smiles & says rohan.
rohan:ham ja rahey hai ek restaurant aur waha se mere farm house par...
Geet:aacha..rohan
rohan smiles...he take her hand in his hand & kiss her hand.
geet smiles as she was use to all this...
Rohan & geet comes in a restaurant which is very famous in Mumbai name as pizza by the bay...
it was located near marine lines.
as geet enter the restaurant every eye was on her.she adjust her sari & circled her arms around rohan's hand.
They entered...rohan asked for table for two & they were escorted till there table...
rohan forward a chair for geet & geet took her sit over there.
Maan & natasha where sitting just beside geet & rohan.
maan saw geet & even geet saw maan...
rohan order some food for both.maan & natasha were already with there food & enjoying.
Maan:so natasha what type of guy you like...
Natasha:hmm...nice question but I don't have a particular type you no..
Maan:hmmm
natasha:I like boys who are sweet & charming...just like you..
maan:ohk so you think I m charming & sweet...not bad. Matlab I have some chances too..
Natasha:hehehe...ya
maan smiles. They talked about there likes & dislike & many more.
Rohan was constantly staring at geet.
rohan:you are so beautiful...
geet smiles.
Rohan takes geets hand in her.
rohan:you be comfortable...I won't trouble you a lot..hahah..
Geet:I don't mind...
she wink to him . rohan again kiss her hand & they enjoy there food.
geet finds the food a bit spicy.
geet:tikha hai...
rohan offer her glass of water.
Maan was now & than looking at geet.
maan prologue

She is so hot.even I desire to kiss her...her skin it's just glowing like a fresh flower...
her hands her eyes her smile...ufff..
maan beta sabhal kar uska boyfriend samne hi bata hai .aur teri future girlfriend bhi...

Geet & rohan leaves the place once they were done with food.rohan circled his right hand around geets waist & takes her to his farm house..

As they enter rohan's farm house rohan starts kissing geet vigorously...
geet also response him back with same action.
He close the door by his leg starts kissing her beside the door.
they were breath less so he apart from her & he starts pulling her sari out.
He removed her pallu & made her upper body uncover.
He turned her & open the blouse buttons.
He removed her blouse & also his shirt.
he throwed her sari on the floor with his pants..
Geet:sahab sab yaha hi karne ka irada hai kya bed room mey nahi jana...
rohan bits her side lips & carries her in his arms...
he throw her on bed & comes on her.
he again starts kissing her this time all over her body.
He bits her & then removes her under skirt & now she was in her inners.
he starts biting her mounts on her inners itself...

Geet was making pleasure noise & it made rohan more excited...
he even open her last barriers & kissed her all over her body...
He trust inside her.geet eyes got moist because of the trust.
Slowly the rhythm got fire & it turned to pleasure for rohan.
he used her all day & even night.
Around 1'o clock at night rohan dropped geet back to her house & geet went to sleep after a long day...

precap:maan & geet to meet officially this time...😉


Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago

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