MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
nice update
maan didnt go in for interview...
finally maan again saw geet...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Both fab parts

cnt wait for next nw :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
toh maan ne geet ko dekha...dekhte hai abb kya karta hai?

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
part 2
nice part...
Geet doesnt have any regrets with this life...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
part 3
nice...
oh they have seen each other and Maan is thinking hes her BF...
so Maan is here though for a different reason...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
U stopped at wrong time :(
Maan is so goody type...
But his dad!!!omg!!! :O
Kaisa bap hai...:\
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
MAAN HAS TO MEET GEET - SO HE HAS REACH THERE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
PART 4

I am extremely sorry to not update it completely b4.
ohk coming to the point I am searching for some south indian surnames which will go with name as maanraj & geetanjali...hope you give me the surnames & I can plan a story fast on it...

I have given my name to jyotikrish for that interview part...if anyone interested than can contact her I would love to answer you all...
do check the link below at the end & share your views...

Geet comes near the end of the balcony. Maan could now easily see geets face & his eyes can't believe all this they just popped out.
mean while geet was busy playing with rain...her eyes goes on maan how was standing down.
geet:tum...
maan:haan mey...mera matlab tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...
geet laughs...
Geet:jo tum karne aaye ho...
she winks to him.maan gulps down saliva...he couldn't believe that she is a...he couldn't even complete the statement.
Maan:hmmm..
geet:tum barish mey kyu khade ho aapne dhosto ke sath kyu nahi battey...
Maan:nahi mey yaha thik hu...
Geet:hmm...tua upar aajao...she winks.
maan:nahi nahi wo waha hogey...
Geet:arey merey kamre mey koi nahi hai...
maan: nahi I m fine over here..
Geet:thand lag jayegi...
maan:nahi thanks...
Geet:arey aa jao I won't charge u at all...
maan laughs
maan:ohk..
maan comes upstairs. geet opens the door...
Geet:ye lo wipe your self.
Maan:thanks...
Geet:so wo ladki koan thi that day...
maan:wo she is my girlfriend...
geet:oh...
Maan:& that boy with you..
geet:he was a client...
maan:ohk...
geet:so aagey kya plan hai...
maan:dekho I m nt...
Geet interrupts
geet:uff...mera matlab future plan kya hai aagaey...
maan:oh..lke that...
Geet :hmmm...
maan:its all set next year newyork uske baad Hollywood mey movie's...
Maan:I mean...mera matlab hai mujhe..
Geet:ohye itni English mujhe bhi aati hai ohk...
Maan:oh...
Geet:haan...I m educated not so much but atleast this that I can understand English...
maans jow was open..
geet:mosquito will go inside close your mouth...
maan close his mouth.
maan:so what about your plans?
geet:hahahaha...mine plans they are nothing it's all what you see..completed my education till 11th wanted to do 12th but bhua said nw you join over here...I m from childhood over here...i have seen everything here studied over here I know this life & see na I m currently living one...
maan:but your dreams
geet:now my only dream is freedom...I want to go out live like other girls...you know I want to eat ice-cream,eat gol gappas, want to do shopping...leave a normal life.. want mine freedom...
maan:bas itna hi...
geet:itna bhi mila na tua it's enough...
maan smiles.
maan:you no that girl with me that day she is not my girlfriend..I m the one behind her.. I have crush on her.. I love her.. want her ,desire her. geet:so in short you want to impress her...
maan:ya...
geet:hmm...tua do one thing...take her out spend lot of time with her talk to her & share your feelings for her simple...
maan:hmm..but if I m in front of her I forget everything & can't talk only in front of her...
Geet:tua do it step by step na...
maan:but I can't come over here again na...
Geet:wait...
Geet writes something on a paper.
Geet:take this...my number call me & I will give you solutions
maan:wow...superb thank you thank you so much...
Geet:your welcome...
till then prem comes...
prem:dude chal...itz late bauji dategey...
maan:yaa..ohk bye...amm...your name..
geet:geet...aur tumara...
maan:maan...maan khurana.
Geet smiles. Maan do bye to geet & leaves the place.
on the other hand,
rajeev on phone...
rajeev:bauji ye aapne kya kiya...I left him with you as I m out & what you did you allowed him to go to a shit with friends.
Bauji:son I m your father I have seen this world more then you & besides that I am a commissioner.
Rajeev:bauji this is not what I am expecting
bauji:this is the difference between you & me...are you aware that maan surfs adult sites to enjoy & have a relaxing moment...
rajveer:what...
bauji:yes & if we can't cut the root of a disease we should provide a medicine to it...I did same...I gave him address of a kota so he can go over there & see the scenario...but don't worry I made sure the address is wrong I am also as much worried as you are son..
rajveer:oh...
bauji: & see the result I know my maan better then you & my grandson my maan didn't visit over there for his enjoyment but visited over there for a project...
Rajveer:what why you didn't inform me before..
bauji:if you would let me speak right.. ohk forget it now maan is a young & smart boy I know he will not follow wrong ways he will choose right way for himself...
Bauji smiles.

precap:geet maan on phone call...


BAARA SAASE MERI...MG-OS

Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
maan saw geet n both talk to each other...
bt too small update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Waiting...
One request.

Can u write in english so readers who are not familiar with Hindi can also understand and enjoy ur story...

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