MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
geet want to get out from this mess
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful update.

Rohan trying to flirt with g Geet. Maan saving her. The Way he put up an act was superb. Talking to Rohan wife. His face was worth watching.

Maan giving Geet assuring words. Enjoying shopping.
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz kuch bhi gudbud nehi hona chahiye...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Any I interested in a update 2day..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates..
Maan is soo gud at acting.. Lol..
N he handled the situation soo well...
Maan falling for geet but not acceptin..
Prem is such a gud person n nice frnd too. .. :-)
Geet wanna come out of this mess... Tats so nice..
Now maan planned everything for it ...
Hope everything goes well...
Continue soon yar :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 10
nice part...
Maan is saving Geet from that life...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11
awesome...
so Maan is gonna help Geet escape...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will update 2day...sirf 1 demand hai par no complaints as dis will be last part mostly...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Last pArt...

Guys thanks a lot for all your likes and comments...

It's been six months now,

"Geet hurry up yaar flight hai hamari..."
"Bas 2 mins I am coming na..."
"Abhi taak tua maggi bhi baad jati...par you are still upar...come na fast flight miss ho gayi tua phaas jayegey ya par..."
"Haaan ohk..."
Geet rush out with one more bag in her hand.she give maan a wide smile.
"Chalo..."
"Oye rukh...ye kya hai..."
"Bag hai maan..."
"Wo tua mujhe bhi dekh raha hai but if this is your bag then what is this & this one.?"
Maan gives geet a question look on which geet just smiled.
"Maaan...wo this is also my bag...this has casual wears then this bag has your clother & this bag has some nice punjabi suit of mine & few sarees which alvina gifted me & it has your few kurta's also..."
"Ohk three bags agreed...but now why this one?"
"Wo mera personal hai..."
"Huh..."
"Aab chalo you are not getting late kya..."
Geet pulls maan toward the car.
"Beta how much time you take now hurry up you both..."
"Yes bauji..."
Geet hurry up & sits inside the car leaving the bag behind with maan.maan can't say anything so he simply nodes his head & smiles.
"Bauji ye bags..."
"I have open the deck go and keep fast..."
"Yes..."
Maan hurried.he kept the bags & sit inside the car next to bauji..
they leave for airport. All the way maan was staring at geet.she was very happy.maan was also really happy for her.

Maan remember how all stuffs happened and how geet came out of it safely.they how he first confronted his bauji and explained him about everything and he was happy that a girl like geet who want to come out of a disaster and live to fullest.
Bauji happly accepted geet as a daughter. She used to stay with bauji only... for last six months
maan had stated that he and geet are JUST FRIENDS nothing else.
although bauji had a idea about maan's feelings but never took the right to say it to him or explain him as bauji thinks every person have his own life and can decide for his own...

Oh ya I forgot about bhua ji...
bhua ji is in jail...chakhi pissing and pissing.
Maan and geet didn't want to do that but all this was done by bauji.
As he is a commissioner he used his rights and free all the girls from the mess...it came out later that not only geet was the one over there...their were many such girl's who were forced to stay and do the business of prostitute.
Geet in last six months learned to live...she again got her confidence back...she use to run some drawing classes for small kids so that she could earn few bucks and carry a self dependent life.maan also didn't stop her nor did bauji as they wanted her to be independent.

Now geet wants to learn more...study more so she is going out with maan.
maan's academic year was over and to be the best diretor he adopted a course to be learned in newyork famous college of acting.
Geet got admission in a near by college in newyork...she wanted to be a teacher. She was going for under graduation course with bachelor in teaching.

Coming to present...
they reached airport.geet had tears in her eyes as she have to leave bauji and go..bauji also had tears in his eye.
"Beta yese rote nahi...you are going for a good work and when we go for a good work we should never cry...now wipe you tears...mera brave beta hai na tu..."
"Beti bauji beta tua mey hu...aur mey ro bhi nahi raha..."
"Beta ji tu royega nahi kuki tu rulata hai sabko aur geet mera brave beta hai...tujse jada brave hai wo...tu tua brave ka 'b' bhi nahi hai..."
Bauji and geet smiles and maan givea them a weird look...
"Aap bhi maat ro...your blood pressure will increase..."
"Mey jab rota hu meri blood pressure ki tua tumey kabi padi nahi aaj badey bauji key BP ki padi hai..."
"Maan tum jalna baad karo...he is old then you"
"Ohk...ohk...you both don't fight now land in newyork & do fights all the way..."
"Bauji""bauji"
Geet & maan hugs bauji . bauji kiss both their forehead and hug them tight...
"Beta ji study well ohk don't fight and take care of each other...call me daily and share your complaint with me...maan you be mature now you are not going alone she is your responsibility now take care of her and more over explain her all the ways in NYC make her understand the rules go with her on the first day of college...make her comfortable"
"Yea bauji I will take care of your daughter all my life bas...now shall we leave...flight is announced..."
"Yes ...yes go leave...bye beta take care...I will miss you both"
"I will miss you too bauji"
Geet and maan bend down and take aashirwaad of bauji..
"Be happy and study well"
Bauji takes geet's hand and give to maan.
"Beta meri beti ka aur merey bete ka khayal rakhna"
Maan hugs bauji & leave the place.

Geet and maan take there respective sit inside the plane.geet was travelling by plane for the first time.she was a bit scare.
She was holding maan's hand and had kept her head on maan's shoulder.
Seeing geet so scare maan pulled out a box from his blazer.
"Geet ye lo..."
"Ye kya hai..."
Seeing the small box geet got very excited...she opened the box but all her excitement went into the water as the box had a eclairs chocolate.
"Ye hai...mujhe tua..."
"Tumey kya geet...kya laga tha kya hai..."
"Kuch nahi...chodo.."
"Wasey geet ye kisne diya..."
Geet looked where maan was pointing. It was her left hand ring finger.
There was nothing in her hand.
"Kya diya...kuch nahi hai haat mey...tum tikh tua ho na..."
Geet touch his forehead to check if maan have fever. maan takes her hand and slips a ring in her finger.
"Kya kar rahey ho..."
Geet looks at the finger ring
"Ye merey liye hai.. "
Maan hit his head with his hand.
"Nahi...wo air host ke liye hai...Of course tumarey liye hai yaar.. "
"Tum mujhe proposed kar rahey ho..."
"Geet...I love you bas..."
"Shi...kitna ganda propose kiya..."
"Arey...bola tua I love you..."
"Aur..."
"Abhi itni jaldi shaadi waadi nahi haan wo mey settled hone ke baad karuga..."
"Maan...tum saach mey bhoat sadu ho...ohk"
"Huh..."
"Maan I love you too...infact three four five infinity... thank you for making me look the one I am today. Thank you for accepting me the one I am today...thank you for believing I can come out of that world...thank you for helping me...thank you for giving me a parent like bauji...thank you for the love I got from your friends and family...thank you for making me your... I love you"
"Wow...geet yesa laag raha hai that I did something very great...wasey thank you for giving me this geet...maan ki geet"
Maan hugs geet & geet hugs maan.

It's a saying that all that start good ends good but it's not necessary that all that start well only ends well...all that start not with good can also have a happy ending...


guys do let me no hows this and do you want a epilogue...
leave your likes & comments...they mean a lot!


Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome..like to have an epilogue...

but little sad as u rushed it..

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