MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December

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crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Beautiful update.

Maan got to know true colors of Natasha. N all the credit goes to Geet.
Wants to meet her.

Waiting for Maaneet moments.

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

PART 7

Hey guyz,

I m really sorry for late updating this part.i write according to mu comfort zone so whenever I m free I update the story. I would try my best to be little early next time.

I wanted to ask you all that anyone want will you marry me updates if yes then next will be that or if you want I can first finish my bar dayz & then will give update for will u marry me.. do let me no what u want.

A very happy diwali to u & ur family...lot of love 2 u all...

Geet was sitting in her room thinking why maan was sounding serious & what must have happen...

maan comes over there & park his car.

maan enters the house.bhua was sitting over there counting money.

Maan:bhua ji I want to meet geet...

bhua:yes...

maan:just want to meet nothing else..

bhua:hahaha... oh beta you can go...

maan:yes thanks.

Bhua:krishna take him to geet...

maan:bhua ji I know...let it be..

bhua:ohk...go then...

bhua smiles.

Maan comes upstairs.

Geet:what happen...

maan:you know you were right...I was wrong to guess her...she is a chameleon & I was thinking her as goat...

Geet:rhyme wasn't good... Heheh

maan:huh...

geet:u should have used caterpillar instead of goat...

maan:what the hell I m telling you my sad story & you are thinking about rhyming skills...ufff

geet:I was aware of this what's new so I m relax...coming to you I have a suggestion...this time you have chosen a girl with out making a look on her...next time be aware of what you are liking...it's simple...

maan:hmmm...you are right...thank you..

Geet:your welcome...

maan:hey sorry but I should leave I will come again may be next time I will take you out...

Geet:ohk that would be good...

maan:bye take care...

Geet:bye...

next day

maan comes over there.

Maan:bhua ji I want to take geet out...

bhua:what...

maan:yes...

bhua:you can't take her out like that only...

maan:how much to pay...

bhua:10,000

maan removes his wallet & remove money...

Maan:they are around 6,000 remaining I will give in evening...

bhua:its not allowed...

maan:ohk you wait I will get money from ATM.

bhua:come fast as there are demands for geet...

maan:bhua I have done advance booking...

Bhua:ohj beta bas I won't give your geet to anyone else come fast...

Maan goes & comes fast with money..he gives it to bhua ji..

bhua:geet get ready he is taking you out...full day...

Geet:ohk...

maan:hmmm...go fast...

bhua smiles...

Geet gets ready & comes down wearing a kurti & jeans

geet:I m ready

maan:letz go...

maan open car door for geet & makes her sit inside.

He starts driving the car...

Geet:maan where we are going...

maan:we are going on our farm house...

Geet: ok so finally you have decided to get intimate...

maan immediately put break.

Maan:no...I m taking you there so we can spend time together & talk nothing else.

geet:haan ohk...now drive see everyone is looking at us...

maan starts driving again.

After some time...

geet:maan how much time more...

maan:5mins...we are going to reach.

geet gives a anode look to maan..

geet:you are saying this from past half hour.

Maan:geet we are far from Mumbai. We are in lonavala..& it takes at least 3hrs drive...

Geet:hmmm...

maan:I m sure you will love the place...& if loved it then we can extend our holiday

he winks...geet smiles...

Geet:you have to pay to bhua then...& that not a good idea...

maan:don't worry I wouldn't mind to pay also if you are happy...

geet:& from where are you planning to get money from...

maan:arey I would sell everything for you...

geet smiles.

Geet:you said that important...you are sweet.

Maan:thank you & I no I m sweet...

maan:here we reach...

Geet:wow...this is your farm house...

maan:yes my own farm house...I have built it...withh out any one's help...with my savings...

maan smiles...he parks the car...geet comes out running...

geet:wow maan this is amazing...I loved it...

maan:I no it is small but as per my development I would make it more big...

Geet:maan this I not small come on this I just so big...

maan:geet it's just 1 acer

geet:what...man its 1acer wow...

Geet comes running & hugs him...she kiss him On his cheek & goes near the cliff.

Geet spread her arms & breath in...

Geet:maan come here do like this...

maan smiles & does the same.

Precap:more about them...

Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Beautiful update

Maan sharing his heartbreaks with Geet. N she is making fun of him. Lol
Wants to take Geet out n spend some time with her.

Geet excited ... N happy to see farmhouse.

Would want u to update bar days first.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

maan took geet with him...wht will happen whn his family will knw dis...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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gurti30

@gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

beautiful dear

maan took geet with her for outing😊

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Awesome update ...
So finally maan has taken geet out...
Is maan falling for geet. ..
He was like i ll spnd all impt things for u...
Nice... :-)
Waiting for will u marry me updates too yar :-)

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nimisha khurana

@nimi216

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Ty evry1 lef me no abut updates plz I m thinking to update one more

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Happy Diwali...

part 7
nice...
Maan is sending this much to spend time with her...
cont soon dear...

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nimisha khurana

@nimi216

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

PART 8

Thanks for ur likes & comments...as I promised I m updating it 2day!

Geet & maan where sitting near the cliff talking to each other.

"Geet tumey pata hai I have not shown this place to my bauji & dad also...it's you who are coming here first."

"Maan your parents know that who I am or you are with me like I mean people don't bother to us at all...I mean they are like we are not from this society they think we are aliens...huh...I mean although they use us but still they think we are some piece of garbage that should be thrown out...&..."

"Geet chill...you know what I don't care who you are or what you do the things matter to me is you are nice I love the way you talk you are bubbly types & you are the one who explained me what was my mistake...you know my dad he is never bothered about me...he is always busy with work & mama is not with us..bauji is my hole & sole what he says I do so...bauji is just amazing I love him a lot..."

"You close to your bauji right...evn I was close to my mom...she was my dream & I was her...but she died in an accident & I came over here...my own mama ji disowned me from family...my dad had left my mom that time I was small I never felt need for my dad...my mom was evrything..."

"How you enter this mess then..."

"Mama ji sold me to bhua..."

A drop of tear left from geets eye.she wiped it...maan saw this & kept his hand on her...hugged her side ways..

"He sold me for 50,000...itz so funny na your own uncle can sell you but yes he did that...bhua is nice she didn't stop my studies as I was not 18 till then...I reach 18yrs & she told me to join here as she have paid for me..."

"Then...what happen..."

"Then I started working in bhua's bar as a dancer...lot of boys use to touch me I never liked that but I can't say anything...you no starting over here was not my choice it was my destiny..."

Geet starts crying...maan hugs her...

"Hey you are strong...actually stronger then me...don't cry you look good when you smile & say all today I m here to listen to you"

"Maan you know I tried to protect my dignity from that mens...but I was...wa...was...fail doing that...maan I also dream of a husband a lover my family...but I feel it's not in my life...I would be incomplete forever..."

"Oye mad girl stop crying...I like you the way you are & we are friends & I am not judging you ohk so be strong & stop crying...be a lion not a cat...so plze stop crying...we are here to enjoy not to cry ohk...cheer up.."

"Maan can we go inside it's cold & I think I need to get fresh also... "

"No problem..letz go"

Geet & maan gets fresh.geet entered the kitchen where maan was experimenting something mean to say cooking something.

"Maan what you are making?"

"Actually geet I m trying to make something so that we can eat...ah like I have settled the house but I m not a lady so like cooking is not my cup of tea"

"Oh like that...get aside I will cook..."

"You know cooking.. great I mean oh ya I want pasta then I want capsicum salad & put some baked oats in it then I want corn soup...& ya to make it easy I hv some ready to cook packets they can help you...& what you like to eat you can make I don't mind"

Geet's eyes popped out listing to maan.she just got lost somewhere.

Maan saw this & snapped she came back in her sense.

"Madam where are you lost...?"

"Huh...ya...haan...maan are you going to eat all this I mean all this pasta then soup & salad &..."

"Oh ya thanks for reminding desert I would like gulab jamun by the way you know right how to make that... "

"What gulab jamun...you will eat so much..."

"Yes geet I can't eat more then this as I m on diet you know my six packs will go otherwise..."

"Dieeet..."

"Why you shouting I am here only..."

"You eat all this in diet...I mean all this...?"

"Yes..."

"Like whole stuff...alone"