MG One More Khurana? NEW Ch15 - Pg 46

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys! I have been on this forum for a long time but only as a reader😳And now I'm on my summer breaks but don't have anything to do🥱I decided to give writing a try, so here I'm😃

Maan Singh Khurana - He is 32 years old and India's biggest business tycoon. He is happily married to Geet and they have 3 children.

Geet Maan Singh Khurana - She is 28 years old and a housewife.

Veer and Yash Khurana - They are the non-identical twins of maaneet. They are 8 years old.

Aryan Khurana - He is almost 3 years old and he is the youngest khurana.

Savitri Khurana - She is maan's daadi.

"When are you coming back?" Geet asked over the phone.

"What's taking so long? But I told you to come early today." Geet was losing her patience.

"Please come soon. The guests will also start coming now." Geet said while looking around at the decorations.

She put down the phone and went to look for the boys. As soon as she entered their room she found one crying on the floor and the other two fighting over the television remote. She ran to pick up Aryan off the floor. "What's wrong? Why are you crying, baby?" She turned around to see Yash trying to get Veer into a headlock. She moved towards the boys hurriedly and kept Aryan on the bed to stop the boys. After pulling them apart, she said, "Why are you both fighting like this?"

"He started it!" Veer and Yash replied at the same time.

Geet sighed loudly and moved to pick Aryan up. She was feeling tired so sat on the bed with Aryan on her lap and said "I don't want to know who started it and who didn't. Just tell me why were you 2 fighting, again?"

Yash: "Aryan wanted to watch ice age but Veer kept on turning off the TV."

Veer: "Because mom asked us to turn off the TV and come downstairs."

Yash: "Yeah but Aryan wanted to watch ice age and you
made him cry."

Veer: "I told him he can watch it later and I did not make him cry."

Yash: "Yes, you did! You made him cry."

Veer turned to face his mother and said with an innocent face, "mom, he is lying, Aryan started crying when he jumped on me to get the TV remote."

Yash: "Oh yeah? Let's just ask Aryan why he was crying then"

Geet looked at both of them and asked them to stop their silly fight. "I don't want to listen to anything else. You 2 are lucky that today is your birthday so I'm not going to say anything. Now go to Daadi and ask her to fix you up for the party."

Veer and Yash felt bad for depressing their mom so they left the room silently with their heads hung low. They decided to apologize later for their behavior. They had to get ready for the party first thou.

"Did bhaiya scare you today?" Aryan nodded his head sleepily.

"Do you want to sleep?" she asked while kissing Aryan's cheek.

"No"

"Then let's go and wash your face" She took him to the bathroom to wash his face.

When she came out of the bathroom, she saw Maan standing by the door. She walked toward Maan and gave him a side hug while still holding Aryan. "You said you will be late." Geet said coming out of the hug.

"I was just playing with you." He said winking at her. "By the way someone is looking sexy today"
"Sexy!" Aryan parroted the word after his dad.

He learned a new word and now he will keep repeating it until he either forgets it or get bored of it.


Sorry, if it has mistakes or if it's boring. But then this is my first try on writing so please let me know how it is😳

Thank you!

Chapter 11 -https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3646423&TPN=33
Chapter 12 -https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3646423&TPN=35
Chapter 13 -https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3646423&TPN=39
Chapter 12 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3646423&TPN=42
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Hanishadevi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start yaar..pls cont soon...👏👏
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awesome start, loved their cute fight. continue soon dear, add me to your pm list. Congrats on your first SS 👏
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Congrats for your new SS dear.!
Lovely start...Continue soon..Will be waiting for the next part..
Update soon dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice start !!!
Waiting for more!!!
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Liked it very much..
poor geet..
now don't what will aryan do with his new world😆
Will be waiting for one more khurana😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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We have 4 khurranas already, Maan Khurana, Veer Khurana, Yash Khurana and Aryan Khurana and ONE KHURANA MORE ...
Loved it...
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congrass...
and its an awesome start...
update soon waiting😊...
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

nice start yaar..pls cont soon...👏👏

Thank you, dear! 😛

Thanks a lot, dear! 😛

Originally posted by: chinni10

awesome start, loved their cute fight. continue soon dear, add me to your pm list. Congrats on your first SS 👏

Thank you so much, hun! 😛

Originally posted by: -AnushaGurtian-

Congrats for your new SS dear.!
Lovely start...Continue soon..Will be waiting for the next part..
Update soon dear 😊

Thank you, dear! 😛

Originally posted by: smallville

Very nice start !!!
Waiting for more!!!

Thanks a lot, hun! 😛

Thank you, dear! 😃

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

awesome start,continue soon!

Thanks, dear! 😛

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Liked it very much..
poor geet..
now don't what will aryan do with his new world😆
Will be waiting for one more khurana😃

Thanks a lot, dear! 😛



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: amreenshameem

Nice start
Different concept

Thanks, dear! 😛

Thank you, hun! 😃

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

We have 4 khurranas already, Maan Khurana, Veer Khurana, Yash Khurana and Aryan Khurana and ONE KHURANA MORE ...
Loved it...

Thanks a lot, dear! 😛

Originally posted by: sanam1234u

congrass...
and its an awesome start...
update soon waiting😊...

Thanks, dear! 😛

Thanks, dear! 😃

Originally posted by: preeti555

superb start
loved it
cont soon

Thank you, hun! 😛

Thanks, dear! 😃

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