New SS: A Destiny Of Love, Part 20/Page 54

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I am writing fr the first time. Do let me know your views abt it...😊SO don't kill me if it doesn't meet your expectations. 🤣



Part 1

It was a beautiful day. The sky was clear as water, The birds were chirping happily'.

A girl is getting ready in her bedroom to go college..Her class started so she have to rush.She just took down the sidewalk to the college.

In her way she notice a boy.He is so handsome.but his eyes that caught her attention.He was walking infront of her.she want to see his face but then she heard someone called her,

Hey Geet, Dev shouted.

Dev is on of her funny friend.He is really a nice guy and helpful also.

Hi..Dev..geet replied..

Are you late too like me?? She asked..

Dev : Yeah..as u know I am not early riser so gate late..Though it does not matter coz I'm always late..

Geet: Huh..yeah..

When she truned to see the boy but the he disappeared..

She did not bother, she was hurring to college with Dev since they are already late..

Atlast we reached college,they both said sorry to sir and quickly go to their sits and sit down'

When the class ended Geet is heading to canteen for lunch..A chirpy voice stopped her'

Ruk Geettt'shouted Pinky.

Pinky : Muhje chorke canteen ja rahi hai..

Geet : Nehi baba..Main to tujhei dhund rahi thi'

Pinky is her best friend. She is bubbly always full of life.She likes Dev..

Geet always want Dev and Pinky together. When Geet first met dev, She knew he had a crush on her. He also asked her for Date..but she refused.

When Geet and Pinky entered canteen.dev want Geet to sit next him.But she gave the sit to Pinky and sit naxt to Pinky..

Meera and Rahul are join them..they are also their friends..Meera and Rahul love each other.. They always seen together in the college..

Hey are chatting when someone called Dev.

Hey dev'He said.

Hi.. Maan , come and join us. Dev Replied.

Geet look up and find the same guy,who she saw this morning. In the morning she only saw his eyes but now she see his face he is quiet handsome Geet thought.She just look into his eyes and get lost in them.

Dev's voice make her come back t sense..

Dev: Well guys and girls this id my cousin Maan.

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana..Nice to meet you all.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index :

Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : Page 1
Part 3 : Page 3
Part 4 : Page 5
Part 5 : Page 6

Part 6: Page 8

Part 7 : Page 10
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Part 8 : Page 13

Part 9 : Page 15

Part 10 : Page 18


Part 11 : Page 21

Part 12 : Page 23

Part 13 : Page 27

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Part 14 : Page 30

Part 15 : Page 35

Part 16 : Page 38

Part 17 : Page 42
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Part 18 : Page 45

Part 19 : Page 48

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Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx for liking the story...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting n beautiful starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Part 2

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana..Nice to meet you all.

Hey Maan, its nice to meet you too..Everyone said.

Maan sat infront of Geet..

Maan: I think ur friend did not like me..maan said looking at me..

Geet: Huh..ooh.. no..aisi koi baat nehi..

Meera: She does not talk much.She always like that when it comes to meeting someone new.

I am not geet said with red face.She was blashing but she don't know why.

Through, the lunch they talked.Maan and Geet Is taking glances of each other.

Geet was silent the whole time.then they go to their classes..

Maan's monologue:

I saw her first at the road.I don't know why but I want to talk to her but my disappointment my cousin Dev came and talked to her. So,I reached to college to attend my first lecture as I did not want to miss it.

Then I met her in canteen. I lost myself for a moment in her brown hezel eyes.I kept stealing glances at her for whole lunch.

After lunch she disappeared with her friend to attend her class.I want to talk to her alone but I did not catch her.i could not really resist myself to look for her here and there.But I did not get her as I don't know about her except her name which I know from my cousin Dev.Geet, what sweet name...

I have to attend my class so I went to attend the lectureand I was tired enough..

[End of Maan's monologue:]

Maan entered the class and found her sitting on the second row.that was a great relief of maan's heart to see her infront of his eyes..

Maan asked the professor for permission to enterthe class ..It was the moment Geet looked at him.Maan sit next to Geet which is empty.Maan could not concentrate on the lecture as she is so close to him and he can see her doing the same..

Maan's heart said that he have met her before and as if he know her from his previous lifes..

After the class Geet started talking to her friends.When maan crossed the class room door and looked back and found her again looking behind him and then suddenly turned her face towords her friend.

So how was it. My fingers crossed for the story. As m first time writing something here.

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

Love you all

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Again Me 1st..😃😃

Simply amazing I liked It so much😊😊

Maan Fall in love with Geet already..😳😳

Geet is so shy shy type☺️

Continue soon😃😃


Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

interesting n beautiful starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

THanx dear..😳😳
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Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu

Thanx for liking the story...😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE START
BOTH LIKED EACH OTHER FROM THE FIRST LOOK
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so dono taraf aag hai lagi...love at firt sight fr both...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

lovely
update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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