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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: karna91

how can dev be so selfish even after ruining pinky's life...he is so disgusting...hope pinky doesn't do something foolish to break up maan-geet...do continue soon


Love is blind...😛
Love can make a man selfish like Dev and foolish like Pinky...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

yeh piya kya karne ja rahi hai...mana ki she loves dev aur uske khushi k liye maan aur geet ko alag karna chahti hai jab usse pata hai k maan aur geet ekdoosrese beinteha mohabbat karte hai...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


Thanx for ur lovely comments...
keep commenting..😊
and the next update its on way...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 16

Geet walked into the college with Maan. Geet was very happy coz of yesterday
Pinky met up with geet. Geet looked at pinky who was upset and quiet.

"What happened? Why are looking so upset?"

"Nothing"

Geet could understand that she was upset for Dev. She saw pinky and Dev dancing in the Prom.. And after that she didn't see them'

"Dev se tumahari baat hui?"

The name brought back the whole bad memories into her..

Pinky turned away looking into some notes "Umm "she nodded.

Geet looked into Pinky's eyes which only spoke blunt truth but today seem to hide some thing.

Pinky looked At Dev who was sitting away from them staring at Geet..

Dev pleaded with his eyes to Pinky'Pinky smiled weakly & nodded understanding his unsaid intention.

"He has a feeling for you ..He really loves u'I think you should talk to him.."

Geet ignored the topic & looked ahead to concentrate in the lecture'

Anni was agitated. "How can you be so cold towards him and loves u also."

Geet snapped her shooting a stern look to Pinky

"Well I am cold because I don't care whats he feels for me. You know that I love Maan very much. Then how could you say all that knowing i love maan. I understand your concern.he is just afried for me. Do you get that."

Pinky change the topic seeing Geet hyper

"Ok I understand, but nothing wrong to talk to him"

Geet nodded & leaved the class room..

It was a month since that incident.

the collage also ending so didn't want to be rude with either Pinky or Dev..

Everybody doing their lunch in the canteen.. Dev join them and sat next to Pinky..

He greeted everyone looking at geet'Geet looked ignored his presence & continued to finish her lunch... Dev hang his head feeling low..😔">

They ordered sweet dessert for every one.

Maan leaned closed to Geet "I like sweet dessert.." looking at her lips..

Geet noticed his gaze to her lips while saying sweet dessert.

She immediately turns pink'Maan loved to see her cheeks turning pink'☺️

Maan looks at everybody and held her left hand under the table; she immediately looked at him & others...

She tries to pull her hand back but he keeps on holding it..

She complained with her eyes.. But Maan behaved as if nothing happened and keep holding her hand tightly and continued to relish the dessert...😎">

Geet was annoyed & made a baby face..

He was so tempted to kiss her lips but he couldn't do it in front of them. He just gave a flying kiss to her, she smiled and blushed..☺️

She shook her head & pulled her hand away'

During the lunch Dev was annoyed & pissed off with their romance, he wondered how she could deny knowing that he love her. Geet didn't even look back to him. His eyes turned wild & furious. 😡



OK GIRLS so dis is it. hope u all will like dis part. nd hit d like button if all like it. nd Do Leave ur Comment. it really motivates me a lot⭐️

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

yippeee
me first
awesome update
yeh pinky ko apna gyan dena jaroori hai dev ke baare mein
loved maaneet moments
maan teasing geet
geet blushing
waiting for more
continue soon
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Part ⭐️ par itna chotu

This Dev 😡 cnt he just stay away frm MaaneeT !
Maan teasing 😎 And Geet blushing 😳

Loved it ❤️ Update sn !
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved maan teasing
beautiful update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet moments are awesome.

But i don't like this dev and also who is playing the character dev
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan teasing geet was nice
How could pinky say geet to give chance to dev.
Even after what happened between them
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved ur story maaneet are so cute😳 i hate dev😡why cant he leave maaneet alone .me feeling so sad for pinky 😭she loves dev still she is ready to sacrifice her love for his happiness . ireally hope soon dev uses his pea- sized brain😡 and accept pinky.plzzz update soon me waiting😊 and plzz add me to ur pm list 😃

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