New SS: A Destiny Of Love, Part 20/Page 54 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice start...
dear I like your avis,i wanns use it... hope you don't mind it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tellyme

nice start...

dear I like your avis,i wanns use it... hope you don't mind it


Thanx for liking my story...
no..its okey..
u can use it..
i also loved it...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Thanx all who did like and comment on my story...
Love u all for supporting me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5

After lunch,

Geet is passing through the corridor when a manly sound stops her'She didn't turned around she know who is he..

"So, 6pm tonight. I'll meet you at your place?"

"What??"Geet asked innocently.

"You being naughty huh..So I can be also'" Maan flash her naughty grin while he comes close to her.

Geet looked at Maan helplessly, caught in trap; her body started reacting to his proximity she told immediately

"I will be ready, bye" and run away from there.

"Pagli kahiki." Man walk away to plan his first ever date.

Geet's date with Maan kept her preoccupied the rest of the day. Geet looked at her watch more often than she should have, waiting for the class to end. finally the class wrapped up, Geet head to home first.

"What am i going to wear? Oh Babaji help me na !!" she asked Her herself. She felt a strong tingle in her stomach.

"Oh..its my first Date of my life.."

She open her wardrobe, she wore her red dress and her red killer heels. She let her out her hair as it is fall down her shoulders which is curly. She black eyeliner carefully, she applied pink lip-gloss

Getting ready for Maan to pick her up 'Geet checking herself nervously in the mirror at least four times'..


Then she notice her mobile whice is vibrating..she received the phone call..

"So, all ready to go for the date?" the manly sound make geet shiver..

"Ummm."

"I am waiting outside of your house.come soon." Maan cut the phone.

Geet is so nervous, she grabbed his purse and walked downstairs.


PRECAP : DATE...



So how was it. My fingers crossed for the story. As m first time writing something here.

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

Love you all

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
lovely update...
maaneet's 1st date...
waiting for their date...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice update

waiting for maaneet first date
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
so geet going fr d date...dekhte hai kya hota hai...

excellent update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow first date of maaneet. Nice update . Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39



very small update...

but it is ok as u r updating regularly...

Geet is all set to go on a date with Maan...

waiting for it...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
I add a poster...update is coming...
i typing...

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