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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx dear...
keep commenting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

nice update...

awww geet in danger..
plzz continue soon

Yes dear geet is in denger...
update is coming...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃😃******UPDATING******😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 19

Pinky was running through the busy road and came in front of a speeding car. Geet pulls her aside & turns to see a truck heading straight towards her..

All the car have stopped. Huge traffic started to build up in matter of a second. People screaming. Crowds of people started to gather on the road... Everything happened in less then a minute..

Maan could not understand what happened. He Pushed amongst the people to make it to the other side of the road. There was an unexpected pain just started to cover his heart... He ran towards geet...
She was covered in pool of blood.

Maan:" Geet... Geet!" He was shaking.! Her face was covered with blood. He sat on the pool of blood holding his jaan. Tears started to roll down from his eyes...

Maan:" someone call the ambulance please. Hurry!" He shouts... as Loud as possible..

Maan: hurry!
He was shouting... He cheeked geets heartbeats...

Her heartbeat was dropping'
Maan picks her up and moves out of the busy traffic...
He catch a taxi and make his way to the hospital...
Maan was panicking... His White shirt was covered with her blood.

The doctors and nurses pushed the stecher bed to emergency room.Maan was about to go in when one of the nurses stopped him right away..

"Sorry sir,You can't go in here" She says and goes inside with the mask on her face.

Maan ran his fingers through his hair in frustration

"Why? Why this happened."

Maan Stood there shaking and crying unknowingly'. The fear of loosing geet forever make him shiver'.Tears start to come out of his eyes.😭

All friends and geet's family came after getting the news from pinky'

"Maan please calm down, Geet will be alright" Rahul said to Maan who walked around the waiting room back and forth.

But nothing could calm him but geet who was now fighting for her life in the emergency room'

Dev looked at Pinky who was crying hugging herself . Dev sat down beside her and put his hand on her.

"It was cause of me geet was in this condition. It was me who should be in her place Dev.If she didn't come after me then she will be alright now. "

"Don't worry, She will be fine" Dev consoled and hugged her.

Pinky nod her head slowly😭.Dev wiped her tears away..

He don't know why he feeling bad when she cry.

Geet's mam Rano was crying her heart out while Mohindar comforts her.😭

Meera and Rahul was leaning against the wall with worried looks on their faces.

After few minutes the doctor out from the emergency room.

Mahindar rushed there "Is my daughter Geet alright Doctor?"

"We need to operate her immediately, she was badly injured and had lost a heavy amount of blood.."

Maan felt like his was going to explode on the spot . Maan looked at the doctor in shock... He don't know what to do ..

"Please do whatever you can to save my daughter." Mahindar said,his eyes started to water.😭

The doctor then nods his head

"We will do our best,she will be alright at the end of operation."

Doctor said and left from there.

It was quiet for a second finally maan let it all out and punched the wall and yelled once and punched the wall once again.

"It will alright, Geet will be fine doctor said na. For now we'll have to wait until the operation is done." Rahul try to console him.

He shook his head and let all the tears out

"What if something goes wrong with operation I don't want want anything Bad to happen to Geet.I would do anything to just to keep her safe.God please I'm begging you for the first time give me back my Geet.Get her well."

"do anything to me but don't hurt my Geet..." he was repeating nonstop .

He was helpless his Geet fighting for her life he couldn't do anything.

Pinky blaming herself for the situation if she didn't behave badly with her then this would not happen.

But Maan Blame her. He didn't want to let his anger out on anyone. Instead he went to the rooftop of the hospital and let it out there. He yelled and yelled until his voice was out.😡


PRECAP: Geet regain her sense


OK Guys so dis is it. hope u all will like dis part. nd hit d like button if all like it. nd Do Leave ur Comment. it really motivates me a lot..😃

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
geet fighting for her life maan feeling helpless

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god !!
Hope geet ko kuch na ho
heart wrenching update
poor maan

Waiting for next
update sn sis
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is injured..
maan s heart bleeding seeing her
pinky blames herself for the condition of geet..
hope dev comes to know the truth soon..
n can see maneets love..
precap:gud..geet is out of danger..but..hv u planned any twist?like memory loss
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update maan blaming himself
On other side piya blaming herself and dev consoling piya
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome upadte dear :)

i hope geet get well soon...

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