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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update in minutes...😊😊😊
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Part 6

Geet heart was leaped out when she saw maan in bold red t-shirt and tight fit blue jeans. He looked so handsome in this. Geet looked at maan and realised this wonderful man standing before her represented everything she had ever wanted, and everything she would ever want. She had never met anyone so charming, so honest.

Maan had been staring at geet for about ten minutes, not once did he brake his intense gaze.

Geet decided to confront him. She walked over him hesitantly, for every step she took towords him her heart was beating fast.

"Why do you keep staring at me?" Geet questioned..

She feel so conscious under is gaze..

"Nothing , cant believe that I am going on a date tonight with the most beautiful girl." He grinned.

Geet just smiled..

They walked have dinner in a small Italian restaurant right on the beach. It was not exclusive access. Geet thanked god for this. She actually is feeling like normal person. But good thing that there were not many people. The table was in corner and it was decorated with flowers. They can see the beautiful sight of sea from the window...

"Maan , This is beautiful." Geet said looking out window right on to the sea.

"Not as Beautiful as you." He said not taking his eyes off her.

Geet was sitting at the table tapping her fingers anxiously, Her nervousness broke when a friendly waitress come to take their order..

They ordered our food with the waitress. The day seemed so perfect that Geet could feel her heart wanting to burst into a song as she slowly eased into comfort being with maan.

They talked about enough stuff'real stuff, meaningful stuff about God and family and character and priorities.. Geet felt so sad when she comes to know that Maan lost his parent in very tender age.He told that his dadi who has brought him up and he loved his dadi very much. Geet also told about her parents.

Upon finishing their meal,. Maan mentioned to stroll by the beach. Next, was something that Geet never expected. Maan clanged onto her arm and gave her such a cute smile that her heart melted. It could definitely be re-molded into the shape of a heart! Geet was nervous and tried her best to accommodate his pace as he is walking very slowly, savoring every moment that they are spending together.

The moonlit night sky made the ambience that they were assimilating into such a wonderful paradise.



The sound of the lapping waves and your gentle whispers that were caressing geet's skin ever so gently, made geet wonder how real this scenario was. The answer was found when Maan gave her a peck on the cheek. Geet grew conscious when Maan hold her waist. He is so close to her, she could smell his scent,.

That realization made Geet feel breathless and heady, and there was something in the way Maan looked at Geet that convinced her he felt that same certainty about them.

"This is crazy," he said. "I've never felt like this before."

feeling excited yet apprehensive. The moderate sea breeze didn't seem to calm her down one bit. As she sat gazing at the edge of the waters where the sky meets the sea..

"You are the only person that can make my heart beat faster and slower at the same time.

Whenever I close my eyes, I dream of you and with deep in my heart '

My heart feels your aroma ; spread around me.

Only you, you're the only thing I'll see forever. In my eyes, in my words and in everything I do." ~

I Love You.
Truly, I Love You.

I love you for the part of me that you can only bring out. "

Geet was speechless because it was too much for her to bare. Geet look Here an there to control her heart beats when she saw they are are standing a feature of red heart shaped rose petals along a tan and brown sandy beach. She can see it prominently in moon light also..She just didn't know when her heart would explode. She could take love no more, in fact she loathed the very way it sounded.


Geet hugged maan and whispered "I love you too." In his ear...

She rested her head on maan's chest and hugged him tight. Maan hugged her back more close if it is possible . It was such a magical moment. Maan slowly pulled away..and gave her a peck on the forehead.


Song Name: Tum Hi Ho [Aashiqui 2]

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajoodh mera

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajoodh mera
Tujhse juda agar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge juda
Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chayn bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui, ab tum hi ho


They take off their shoes walked to the sea shore..

"Are you happy?" Maan said axsiously..

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera
Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chayn bhi mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
Tum hi ho.. tum hi ho..

Geet did not said anything just Geet smiled and rested her head on his shoulder and held his hand. Maan smiled and pulling her closer to him.

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Tere wafaa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamo ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb judha
Tujhe paake adhoora na raha

Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chayn bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui, ab tum hi ho
Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chayn bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui, ab tum hi ho

They walked hand in hand through sea side the lapping waves hit their bare feet.

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Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan and Geet both confessed their feelings for each other...

he planned such a beautiful date...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice updates. update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow maan & geet confess their feeling to each other. It's really a sweet story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update

maaneet confession was aeesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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actually more dan d date prt i liked d surprise prt more...first maan's confession...den d heart on d sand n den geet's confession...

excellent n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update... loved how they confessed... Maaneet I luv u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




Maan and Geet both confessed their feelings for each other...

he planned such a beautiful date...

thanx for pm...


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