New SS: A Destiny Of Love, Part 20/Page 54 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Again Me 1st..😃😃

Simply amazing I liked It so much😊😊

Maan Fall in love with Geet already..😳😳

Geet is so shy shy type☺️

Continue soon😃😃



Thanks for reading...
you must continue visiting and suggesting...😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing.loved itc


Thanks for the encouragement...
keep visiting...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A big tight hug to you too...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

NICE START

BOTH LIKED EACH OTHER FROM THE FIRST LOOK


thanx Dear...
Yes they Like each othe from the first look...
Let's see what is in stor till then keep guessing and visiting...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx for reading...i will continue my work...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx dear...
Love u all...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

so dono taraf aag hai lagi...love at firt sight fr both...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

lovely
update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



Thanx for the encouraging reply...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

After some Day,

When Maan returned back after taking his lunch from canteen,he again found her on the way.this time maan could see her stood silent as if dreaming with an open eyes.Which made her mind out of the conversation among her friends. Maan just thought she might be dreaming about him.But how can that be??

But now Maan is damn sure that she was thinking about him coz as soon as geet look at maan coming nearer to her she just turned her face with a cheerful smile on her face.

By her smile maan can feel as if the whole surrounding nature was born to a new world of love and happiness.

After that day seeing her lost in him Maan is very much eager to talk to her. she was glittering in her attire.. the puple kurti and the blue jeans suits her.

It was a late evening, Geet just returning from college alone and could not get a taxi.. Shortly, Maan appears and

Geet thought " he is the Most handsome man i ever seen, everything in my imagination. Coincidence, they are together."

When Maan looked at Geet and their eyes meet,

Maan thought "She was so beautiful, and I couldn't resist walking towards her, it was more like an invisible force that was drawing me towards her."

Maan: Hi..

Geet: Hey..

"would you like if I walk with you to your home."

Atfirst she hesitates but then seeing Maan's eye who is insist her to said yes..

'Sure , if you insist."

Geet had no worries now, in my heart she knew he was the one she wanted to be with. Maan don't know what to told her, as he want to ask many things about her but now he lost his words when she is so near him..He was always a carefree guy but now he want to take care of her forever. He have no one to say his own. He lost his parents in An accident. He don't want to lose her ever.

"I see you've been watching me'"

Geet groaned and to ignor the question she walk faster.

Geet is lost in her thought when a car is coming she did not notice .Maan saw that and he caught her in right time and put his arm around Geet pulling her closer.

"What are you doing?"

"Letting everyone see us that you're mine" He chuckled.

"What????"

Geet took his hand off her and walked fast coz she reached her home and anybody can see them together like this..

"I just cant go like that.Hey,can you please go out with me.."Maan looked at her earnestly.

"That would not work."

"Oh,I see you're not easily impressed."

"your loss."

Precap: Will she go for the date?


So how was it. My fingers crossed for the story. As m first time writing something here.

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

Love you all

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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if you like it pls comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story line

can u please add link in index it will be easy to read

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