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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sridevi_n

nice updates. update the next part soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanubag

Wow maan & geet confess their feeling to each other. It's really a sweet story.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti555

Lovely update

maaneet confession was aeesome


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

actually more dan d date prt i liked d surprise prt more...first maan's confession...den d heart on d sand n den geet's confession...

excellent n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: daredevilisback

awesome update... loved how they confessed... Maaneet I luv u...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7

Geet is lying in her bed thinking about the evening which she spend with Her Maan.

"My Maan'"She shied and hide her face in her pillow..



Maan went into the kichen,He saw his dadi cooking Pasta for him. He inhaled..

"Yumm Dadi."

"Okey Bete,Why are you so Happy for?" She said with a knowing look after watching him..

"Dadi You always caught me." Dadi eyed him to go on..

"You will not laugh na Dadi?"

"Okey, tell me." Dadi said teasingly.

"I met a girl." Maan said dreamily.

"I know, Go ahead." She rolled her eyes..Who know him better than her.


"Dadi'I will not tell you." Maan make a baby angry face..

"Okey Beta,I will not tease you..now tell me about her."
"Dadi she's so beautiful,.. So different from others,.. Her name is Geet." Maan again lost in his lala land.

Dadi was soo happy to see him this much happy after his parents death.

"Well, Then I Wanna meet her one day."

"Yes, you will. You'll love her. She's nice."

"I am so tired now, I am off to get my sweet sleep, Dadi."🥱

"But beta, Dinner?"

"No dadi am already full.apne khana khaya"

"Ha, thik hai beta Good Night and Sweet dreams." dadi winked..😉

Maan smiled and blushed..😳

"Good Night Dadi." He wished dadi and kissed her cheek..

He picked up an apple and go to his room..

After freshen up Maan lie down and think about her..

"Oh Geet, I Love U"

He hugged his pillow and think,

"I bet Geet is thinking about me now."

They both slept thinking about each other..


So how was it. My fingers crossed for the story. As m first time writing something here.😃😃

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.😊😊

Love you all⭐️

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago

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